Feelin' Inspired!!

Hey,

So I just read a poem by Pitbull and very good I thought too!!

and it made me feel inspired...I thought what If I posted a poem I found that I really loved here and then others could do to????

It could be anything....one you wrote urself...classic, modern, short, long, graphic sexy or not....

But sumwhere within the realms of good taste would be nice....

So I just found this one by Byron and HAD to post it....

can't see that this breaks the T.O.S...

as I'm quoting...well this struck a chord in me...hope u enjoy!!



WHEN WE TWO PARTED

by: George Gordon (Lord) Byron (1788-1824)

When we two parted
In silence and tears,
Half broken-hearted
To sever for years,
Pale grew thy cheek and cold,
colder thy kiss;
Truly that hour foretold
Sorrow to this.


The dew of the morning
Sunk chill on my brow--
It felt like the warning
Of what I feel now.
Thy vows are all broken,
And light is thy fame:
I hear thy name spoken,
And share in its shame.


Thy name thee before me,
A knell to mine ear;
A shudder comes o'er me--
Why wert thou so dear?
They know not I knew thee,
Who knew thee too well:
Lond, long shall I rue thee,
Too deeply to tell.


In secret we met--
In silence I grieve,
That thy heart could forget,
Thy spirit deceive.
If I should meet the
After long years,
How should I greet thee?
With silence and tears.

Comments

Its not bad. I prefer Keats. You should look for a poem by John Keats called When I Have Fears.

La Belle Dame Sans Merci is also a good one (only the title is in French)

Pitbull is really not my bag. There are much better online poets than he. Poets who don't stick to the same simple rhyme scheme or the same basic rhythm.

I have a lot of poems like that from years ago. No one sees them because they're shit.
 
I am flattered to have inspired you.
Lovely poem.
Struck a chord because...well, you need not tell.
(I'm glad to see that this one cooperated with the spacing)
 
Haven't checked out the Keats poem yet....But will go have a look...

Not really interested in slagging off or comparing who is the better poet on here...I liked that poem Pitbull wrote...

But if anyone has anything to post here on my blog (or their own for that matter) then lets hear/see it!!

Its all good!! ;-)
 

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