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I’m writing an erotic short-ish story and would love some feedback on chapter one. TW: features pg-13 violence (non-sexual), and descriptions of violent imagery including blood. I’m new to writing and would appreciate constructive feedback. I’m worried that some of the passages are too long...

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5.75" at the head, 5.9" at mid-shaft, and 6.5" at the base when it's balls deep

Plenty of girth to spare for more letters

I’ve played football (soccer) all my life, this didn’t change after I came out and it led to one of the more interesting and hot hook-up’s of my life (so far). There's plenty of pics of me in Football Shirts on my profile, so you can trust that this happened! This occurred last summer, just as...