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Chapter 7: Irony and Hypocrisy
With the swipe of his hand Charlie swept off the sheets and blankets that were on top of Randy’s back. With one flick of his wrist Charlie revealed Randy’s biggest secret. Randy was a hypocrite, liar, and self-hating gay man and Riley could hardly believe it.
There on the bed, Randy had his monster cock speared into Dale’s puckered hole. Randy was not even pretending to be kind or gentle. Randy had a hold of Dale’s hips and was fucking into Dale’s hole like a dog in heat. Dale was using the full force that his powerful baseball legs would provide. It was obvious that Dale was going to be bruised from the beating that his hole was taking.
Upon further inspection the wide-eyed Riley could see Ian’s giant manhood as Dale’s mouth rocketed up and down on Ian’s porn size cock. The two were in a 69 position with Dale sucking on Ian’s giant rod on one side and Ian bathing Randy’s balls and the exposed inch of his dick on the other. Had Riley been able to concentrate more on the situation he might have seen the pure ecstasy on Randy’s face as he was topping the hell out of a muscle stud and getting a short dude with a big cock to submit to him and worship him with his tongue.
Riley could barely concentrate on anything other than the complete liar that was fucking a guy right before his eyes. The liar that had tortured him for nearly a decade was shoving his 11.5-inch cock up a muscle stud and not the campus prom queen. After years of Randy referring to his cock as every girls dream and his ultra baby maker, it was clear that Randy was nothing more than a charlatan who enjoyed depositing his baby makers down the throat and holes of guys and not the supposed girls that he had been claiming to have conquered.
“No fucking way, no seriously there is no fucking way that I believe my own eyes,” Shouted Riley as he was taking in the scene.
None of the three guys heard Riley; in fact they could neither hear nor see either Riley or Charlie.
“Shit,” Riley said covering his mouth worried that he had just blown their element of surprise.
“No worries, they can’t see or hear us until I tell them they can.” Charlie explained.
“How Capra of you,” Riley said referring to his favorite old movie, It’s a Wonderful Life.
“I figured it was a nice touch. I think you really need to see just how much of a hypocrite and liar Mr. Randy has been all of these years.
Dale was going ape shit crazy having his hole pulverized by the second 11 inch dick of the day. Try as he might he couldn’t make a complete sentence. Randy may have been one of the biggest liars in the entire town, but he was also one of the “biggest” liars in the entire town. Dale couldn’t believe what an amazing dicking he was getting.
“Pipe, pipe, pipe, oh god fuck me . . . fuck me… oh oh oh… fuck me.” Came the delirious musings of a young man that was in complete horny heat.
In a short moment of clarity between thrusts of Randy’s massive dick, Dale cried,“I can’t believe you’re the same size as Ian. I never thought I would find another dick this big.”
Randy smiled and pushed back into Dale as Ian gave Dale and Randy the evil eye.
Where Ian had jackhammered Dale’s ass, Randy was being smooth and deliberate nearly pulling out of Dale’s ass with each stroke. A fly on the wall could practically count to 12 each time Randy would slowly pull himself out of Dale’s ass inch by inch by inch. Each time Randy pulled back he would get all the way to the end of his member and just as the head threatened to pop back out, Randy would slam his entire dick down Dale’s hole so fast and so hard it was taking Dale’s breath away not to mention slamming the bed against the wall. As Randy would get to the end he would double pump his dick against Dale’s hole. It looked like he was slamming so hard into Dale’s ass that he was bouncing back and double tapping his ass. However, in reality one could see that Randy was in complete control actually squeezing his butt muscles and double dicking Dale after each time he impaled him with the full brunt of his dick.
“Oh no way, you don’t pull a move like that unless you have had some practice,” bitched Riley. “That asshole is no novice, he has been dicking guys for a while with those moves.” Riley said in a voice that was 90% pissed and 10% impressed by the skill.
“How does he keep from pulling all the way out, without having to look down at what he is doing?” Riley asked.
“Wait…I mean, that mother fucker, he has been slow dicking me for 6 or 7 years now. Telling everyone that I am the FAG and that I am the butt fucker.”
“Oh babe you haven’t seen anything yet.” Charlie stated.
Riley looked back at the action having had turned to look at Charlie when he was talking.
Ian had flipped around and now all three men’s heads were oriented toward the headboard of the bed. Ian was laying on his back and Dale was sitting near Ian’s knees (if he would have laid down on him his stomach near his belly button would have lined up with Ian’s face). Dale was facing Ian.
“Sit on my cock, bitch” Ian commanded to his plaything.
Dale scrambled as fast as he could to lower himself on Ian’s giant pipe. “Oh mother fucker…that bitch is so much wider,” cried Dale as Ian was pushing his long fat cock up Dale’s ass. “Fuck your tube is still too big, ohhhh no fuck no it hurts…I thought I could, I could take it ughhhhhh. Cock is still tearing me in two.”
Dale finally breathed as Ian stopped pushing. What’s the matter bitch, you said earlier that we were the same size.
Your dick is so much fatter than his.” Dale had no filter the pain and passion that he was experiencing was leading his mind and there was no stopping his honest tongue.
“Really you think I am bigger?” Ian said as he gave Randy a shit-eating grin.
“I don’t think, I am certain of it. I fucking knowohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh fuck” Ian pushed his fat log into Dale just to emphasize the point.
“No way bitch, no fucking munchkin is bigger than me, I don’t care how long you look, It’s just a fucking optical illusion, because you are so fucking short, you shrimp dick mother fucker. I bet you are a full inch or two shorter than me in direct comparison, no matter how fat that cock is.”
“Oh bitch you are fucking on,” Ian said accepting Randy’s bet. Ian yanked his dick out of Dale’s hole so fast there was an audible pop and then the sound of air escaping his ass from where it had been trapped behind Ian’s behemoth third leg.
Ian flung his condom off his dick hitting Randy like a white glove across the face, Ian had just declared a duel and he planned to win.
“Winner fucks the looser.” Ian added being so certain that he was going to win.
Dude I ain’t no butt fucker, I ain’t ever taken a cock, I mean I’m not gay or anything.”
“What the fuck,” screamed Riley at the top of his lungs. “I can’t even. . . with this guy here!”
Ian and Randy faced each other as Dale held each cock in one of his hands.
“Ok studs, I am going to lower your cocks down at the same time and when one touches the body of the other guy then they are the winner. If it is too close to call then, once they are perpendicular we will scoot you each in until one of you is toughing the other guy. Who ever is touching the other will be declared the winner.”
“Oh and by the way, obviously who ever wins is going to get my ass before you two play around cause I haven’t gotten off and I don’t care which one of you wins as long as I get off.” Dale squealed like a pig.
Dale lowered their dicks like drawbridges coming down, but neither made it more than an inch before both of guys were touching each other.
“Ok, fuck, both of you back up let’s do this horizontally, first to touch the other guy will win.” Dale shared.
Both guys were completely boned and neither was going to lose.
“Guys there is no way that either of you can be declared the winner. You guys are tied completely; seriously you touched each other at exactly the same time and neither of you are pushing into each other you both are exactly the same size. Well at least in length.” Dale added winking over to Ian. Ian smiled at the loyalty he felt coming from Dale. Maybe his toy was worth some loyalty back. Maybe he would keep him around.
“So who gets to fuck who?” A pissed off Randy asked horny at the fact that he had finally met his match in size, but pissed that his match was such a short guy. His ego couldn’t handle the fact that he wasn’t much bigger than such a miniscule looking guy.
“You both do,” Dale shared as he was trying to keep the piece and trying to get himself some.
Both big guys smiled as the promise of double penetration was what brought the three of them together in the first place.
“No they can’t…I can’t even watch, it’s like a train wreck” Riley protested actually feeling his own ass pucker at what was about to happen to Dale.
Riley squeezed his eyes shut only opening them when he heard the shrieks coming from poor Dale whose muscles seemed completely useless to help him against such powerful assailants. Ian’s dick was buried to the most expansive width of his shaft. Ian’s cock was acting as a crowbar spreading Dale’s ass so far apart that Randy was able to shove his slightly less impressive dick up the top part of Dale’s hole. Had either dick been even the slightest millimeter wider, Dale would have actually felt what it would be like to be split. As it was he was in the most excruciating pain of his life, as his ass ring was being forcibly transformed from a circle to a giant oval shape. For all the pain he was in Dale was in pig heaven.
“Faster…harder,” a breathless Dale begged.
“This feels freaking amazing,” Ian cried out loving the feeling of his enormous dick both fucking Dale while rubbing up against another giant cock.
“It’s alright, but I would rather be fucking both of your fagotty asses,” lied Randy, who was secretly falling in love with the entire sensation of having a big fat cock pounding the same whole as his. Having Ian’s dick sliding back and forth was providing an extra layer of sensation that he had never felt before.
Randy pushed his dick a bit farther into the already maximally stretched hole of Dale’s ass.
Dale moaned biting down on the pillow next to Ian’s face.
“That’s right all you fagots love it when I put my big fat dick up y’alls ass. Not a single of one you queers can resist my big fat straight boy cock. Every one of you wants to choke on my jockstrap.” A delusional Randy called out.
“Oh my god, take his fucking pride and joy from him right now, or I am going to tear it off myself,” said a completely serious Riley to an all to eager Charlie.
With the swipe of his hand Charlie swept off the sheets and blankets that were on top of Randy’s back. With one flick of his wrist Charlie revealed Randy’s biggest secret. Randy was a hypocrite, liar, and self-hating gay man and Riley could hardly believe it.
There on the bed, Randy had his monster cock speared into Dale’s puckered hole. Randy was not even pretending to be kind or gentle. Randy had a hold of Dale’s hips and was fucking into Dale’s hole like a dog in heat. Dale was using the full force that his powerful baseball legs would provide. It was obvious that Dale was going to be bruised from the beating that his hole was taking.
Upon further inspection the wide-eyed Riley could see Ian’s giant manhood as Dale’s mouth rocketed up and down on Ian’s porn size cock. The two were in a 69 position with Dale sucking on Ian’s giant rod on one side and Ian bathing Randy’s balls and the exposed inch of his dick on the other. Had Riley been able to concentrate more on the situation he might have seen the pure ecstasy on Randy’s face as he was topping the hell out of a muscle stud and getting a short dude with a big cock to submit to him and worship him with his tongue.
Riley could barely concentrate on anything other than the complete liar that was fucking a guy right before his eyes. The liar that had tortured him for nearly a decade was shoving his 11.5-inch cock up a muscle stud and not the campus prom queen. After years of Randy referring to his cock as every girls dream and his ultra baby maker, it was clear that Randy was nothing more than a charlatan who enjoyed depositing his baby makers down the throat and holes of guys and not the supposed girls that he had been claiming to have conquered.
“No fucking way, no seriously there is no fucking way that I believe my own eyes,” Shouted Riley as he was taking in the scene.
None of the three guys heard Riley; in fact they could neither hear nor see either Riley or Charlie.
“Shit,” Riley said covering his mouth worried that he had just blown their element of surprise.
“No worries, they can’t see or hear us until I tell them they can.” Charlie explained.
“How Capra of you,” Riley said referring to his favorite old movie, It’s a Wonderful Life.
“I figured it was a nice touch. I think you really need to see just how much of a hypocrite and liar Mr. Randy has been all of these years.
Dale was going ape shit crazy having his hole pulverized by the second 11 inch dick of the day. Try as he might he couldn’t make a complete sentence. Randy may have been one of the biggest liars in the entire town, but he was also one of the “biggest” liars in the entire town. Dale couldn’t believe what an amazing dicking he was getting.
“Pipe, pipe, pipe, oh god fuck me . . . fuck me… oh oh oh… fuck me.” Came the delirious musings of a young man that was in complete horny heat.
In a short moment of clarity between thrusts of Randy’s massive dick, Dale cried,“I can’t believe you’re the same size as Ian. I never thought I would find another dick this big.”
Randy smiled and pushed back into Dale as Ian gave Dale and Randy the evil eye.
Where Ian had jackhammered Dale’s ass, Randy was being smooth and deliberate nearly pulling out of Dale’s ass with each stroke. A fly on the wall could practically count to 12 each time Randy would slowly pull himself out of Dale’s ass inch by inch by inch. Each time Randy pulled back he would get all the way to the end of his member and just as the head threatened to pop back out, Randy would slam his entire dick down Dale’s hole so fast and so hard it was taking Dale’s breath away not to mention slamming the bed against the wall. As Randy would get to the end he would double pump his dick against Dale’s hole. It looked like he was slamming so hard into Dale’s ass that he was bouncing back and double tapping his ass. However, in reality one could see that Randy was in complete control actually squeezing his butt muscles and double dicking Dale after each time he impaled him with the full brunt of his dick.
“Oh no way, you don’t pull a move like that unless you have had some practice,” bitched Riley. “That asshole is no novice, he has been dicking guys for a while with those moves.” Riley said in a voice that was 90% pissed and 10% impressed by the skill.
“How does he keep from pulling all the way out, without having to look down at what he is doing?” Riley asked.
“Wait…I mean, that mother fucker, he has been slow dicking me for 6 or 7 years now. Telling everyone that I am the FAG and that I am the butt fucker.”
“Oh babe you haven’t seen anything yet.” Charlie stated.
Riley looked back at the action having had turned to look at Charlie when he was talking.
Ian had flipped around and now all three men’s heads were oriented toward the headboard of the bed. Ian was laying on his back and Dale was sitting near Ian’s knees (if he would have laid down on him his stomach near his belly button would have lined up with Ian’s face). Dale was facing Ian.
“Sit on my cock, bitch” Ian commanded to his plaything.
Dale scrambled as fast as he could to lower himself on Ian’s giant pipe. “Oh mother fucker…that bitch is so much wider,” cried Dale as Ian was pushing his long fat cock up Dale’s ass. “Fuck your tube is still too big, ohhhh no fuck no it hurts…I thought I could, I could take it ughhhhhh. Cock is still tearing me in two.”
Dale finally breathed as Ian stopped pushing. What’s the matter bitch, you said earlier that we were the same size.
Your dick is so much fatter than his.” Dale had no filter the pain and passion that he was experiencing was leading his mind and there was no stopping his honest tongue.
“Really you think I am bigger?” Ian said as he gave Randy a shit-eating grin.
“I don’t think, I am certain of it. I fucking knowohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh fuck” Ian pushed his fat log into Dale just to emphasize the point.
“No way bitch, no fucking munchkin is bigger than me, I don’t care how long you look, It’s just a fucking optical illusion, because you are so fucking short, you shrimp dick mother fucker. I bet you are a full inch or two shorter than me in direct comparison, no matter how fat that cock is.”
“Oh bitch you are fucking on,” Ian said accepting Randy’s bet. Ian yanked his dick out of Dale’s hole so fast there was an audible pop and then the sound of air escaping his ass from where it had been trapped behind Ian’s behemoth third leg.
Ian flung his condom off his dick hitting Randy like a white glove across the face, Ian had just declared a duel and he planned to win.
“Winner fucks the looser.” Ian added being so certain that he was going to win.
Dude I ain’t no butt fucker, I ain’t ever taken a cock, I mean I’m not gay or anything.”
“What the fuck,” screamed Riley at the top of his lungs. “I can’t even. . . with this guy here!”
Ian and Randy faced each other as Dale held each cock in one of his hands.
“Ok studs, I am going to lower your cocks down at the same time and when one touches the body of the other guy then they are the winner. If it is too close to call then, once they are perpendicular we will scoot you each in until one of you is toughing the other guy. Who ever is touching the other will be declared the winner.”
“Oh and by the way, obviously who ever wins is going to get my ass before you two play around cause I haven’t gotten off and I don’t care which one of you wins as long as I get off.” Dale squealed like a pig.
Dale lowered their dicks like drawbridges coming down, but neither made it more than an inch before both of guys were touching each other.
“Ok, fuck, both of you back up let’s do this horizontally, first to touch the other guy will win.” Dale shared.
Both guys were completely boned and neither was going to lose.
“Guys there is no way that either of you can be declared the winner. You guys are tied completely; seriously you touched each other at exactly the same time and neither of you are pushing into each other you both are exactly the same size. Well at least in length.” Dale added winking over to Ian. Ian smiled at the loyalty he felt coming from Dale. Maybe his toy was worth some loyalty back. Maybe he would keep him around.
“So who gets to fuck who?” A pissed off Randy asked horny at the fact that he had finally met his match in size, but pissed that his match was such a short guy. His ego couldn’t handle the fact that he wasn’t much bigger than such a miniscule looking guy.
“You both do,” Dale shared as he was trying to keep the piece and trying to get himself some.
Both big guys smiled as the promise of double penetration was what brought the three of them together in the first place.
“No they can’t…I can’t even watch, it’s like a train wreck” Riley protested actually feeling his own ass pucker at what was about to happen to Dale.
Riley squeezed his eyes shut only opening them when he heard the shrieks coming from poor Dale whose muscles seemed completely useless to help him against such powerful assailants. Ian’s dick was buried to the most expansive width of his shaft. Ian’s cock was acting as a crowbar spreading Dale’s ass so far apart that Randy was able to shove his slightly less impressive dick up the top part of Dale’s hole. Had either dick been even the slightest millimeter wider, Dale would have actually felt what it would be like to be split. As it was he was in the most excruciating pain of his life, as his ass ring was being forcibly transformed from a circle to a giant oval shape. For all the pain he was in Dale was in pig heaven.
“Faster…harder,” a breathless Dale begged.
“This feels freaking amazing,” Ian cried out loving the feeling of his enormous dick both fucking Dale while rubbing up against another giant cock.
“It’s alright, but I would rather be fucking both of your fagotty asses,” lied Randy, who was secretly falling in love with the entire sensation of having a big fat cock pounding the same whole as his. Having Ian’s dick sliding back and forth was providing an extra layer of sensation that he had never felt before.
Randy pushed his dick a bit farther into the already maximally stretched hole of Dale’s ass.
Dale moaned biting down on the pillow next to Ian’s face.
“That’s right all you fagots love it when I put my big fat dick up y’alls ass. Not a single of one you queers can resist my big fat straight boy cock. Every one of you wants to choke on my jockstrap.” A delusional Randy called out.
“Oh my god, take his fucking pride and joy from him right now, or I am going to tear it off myself,” said a completely serious Riley to an all to eager Charlie.
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The three guys heard what sounded like the crack of thunder and a flash of light like lighting. Randy slammed his eyes shut at the intensity of the bright light engulfing his bedroom. When he opened his eyes, both Ian and Dale were frozen solid like statutes. In the middle of his bedroom stood to muscle hunks, both dressed in shorts and tank tops.
Who the fuck are you. Randy said pulling out of Dales ass and slamming himself up against the headboard of his bed. What the fuck did you do to those guys, how are they just frozen there.
It doesnt matter who the fuck we are, it only matters who you are and your behavior. Said Riley winking at Charlie, knowing he had just taken his favorite line.
Those guys they arent on trial, they may not be perfect, but they have plenty of good qualities. This is your trail and they werent witness to your atrocities so they wont be witnesses to your take down. Promised Charlie.
What the Trial, I have never done anything wrong, Randy argued.
You have been given a blessing of a dick that only 1% of the population of the world ever gets, add to that you have an amazing body. Yet, you cant even admit that you are gay, you cant admit who you really are. Charlie stated.
Instead of admitting to yourself that you are gay, you hide behind headless profiles and beg guys to come to your parents house so that you can have anonymous sex. Then you go back to your school and beat the shit out of guys that are not quite as masculine as you.
Who the fuck are you two. You two dont know me.
Oh yes Randall we know exactly who you are. You are the guy who hides his sexuality and instead of defending guys just like you, guys who are gay, you beat them nearly to death so that you have a cover to hide behind. You are by far the biggest dickwad I have ever met. Charlie pronounced.
I know who I am and I am more than aware that I am gay. But that doesnt mean I have to like it. I dont have to like the fact that I am cursed to like dick. I mean look at me, I am totally a guys guy, do I look like a fagot to you. Do I look like one of those fairies that are always staring at this big ole dick of mine. Randy exclaimed.
Fagots like Riley, Riley asked.
Exactly, fagots like that are nothing like me. You say we are a like, but there is nothing even remotely similar to the two of us. Randy spit out his words like a snake.
So you beat him up and make him feel inferior so that you what, feel like you are better feel like you are some how more of a man and less of a queer yourself? Charlie demanded.
Youre a fake there is nothing different between you and I Riley said getting in Randys face.
You could have easily helped me and all of the other gay guys at school feel cool, excepted, we could have looked up to you as a role model and as an athlete that we could have been proud to have in our corner. Riley stated.
Instead you half heartedly fucked any girl that would have you and you skated by on your big dick, and the fact that you knew the girls were just going to keep pumping your reputation. Charlie revealed.
While at the same you would kick us inferior fagots into a corner and beat the shit out of us, so that you could hide that you are nothing more than the same things as they are, no as we are.
As who, who the fuck are you talking about, I have never kicked you or put you in a corner. You and I have never fought before, claimed a confused Randy.
I am Riley, show him Charlie. Riley demanded.
Charlie walked over and poked Randy in both of his eyes.
I didnt really have to touch him, but it made me feel better. Laughed Charlie.
Randy grabbed his eyes as they were watering and in pain from Charlie surprise poking. Fuck you two, I am going to beat the shit out of you two or die trying.
When Randy stopped rubbing his eyes and the blurriness gave way he could not see the new Riley he saw the wimpy, fat, acne prone kid that he had tortured for a great portion of the kids life.
I dont know what black magic, you two are up to, but I want nothing to do with either of you, get the fuck out of my house.
You and I are the same, Randy, Riley said. We are much more alike than you will ever admit. We were both scared of who we were, we both cared more about what others thought of us, we both have portions of our lives we dont like. When I look at you I see a lot of me in you. Riley explained.
Fuck you, look at me, do I look like I deserve to be compared to you? Do I look like I will ever be confused as being anything like you? yelled Randy watching as the blurriness was subsiding and suddenly the massive muscle Riley was back.
No you are absolutely right, you dont deserve to ever be compared to Riley. You dont deserve any of what you have or any of what you have been blessed with.
Blessed with? I have worked my ass off to have what I have. Randy shouted.
No Randy, you have been blessed with your big dick, which gave you the wrong kind of confidence. Such a specimen should have given you confidence to defended those very people you have cursed. You have also been blessed with your sexuality, you were supposed to be gay, you fool, and your constant fear of yourself has turned both of your blessing against you. Your fear of being gay has made you hate yourself so bad that you have turned on anyone perceived to be what you hate most about yourself. Had you used your influence and natural given baseball skills both gay, bi, and straight guys alike would have lined up to be your friend. Guys would have still been at awe of your muscles, your pitching abilities, and your at bat average. You still would have earned your nickname Slugger and guys would have still felt a twinge of inferiority every time you changed in the locker room. Your incredible body, giant dick, and your baseball skills afforded you the ability to be accepted for who you are supposed to be. Fear and ignorance prevented you from being the school hero that you think you are, Riley preached.
Before Randy could collect his thoughts and make an argument or decide if Riley was right, Charlie announced Randys fate.
Randy, you will not use your puberty given gifts to influence and bully another human being. Charlie pronounced By the power vested in me by Mother Nature and human decency, I remove your dust, I take away your blessings of muscle. I also remove your baseball skills; you have proven time and time again that you dont deserve to have any influence over people. Finally, I take from every person that has ever seen your bat, the memory and influence you have ever gained over them. You are no longer slugger you are now and were always turtle as your little three incher only pokes its head out when it is not scared. You have proven you dont deserve any of your gifts and that you are incapable of wielding the power that your puberty dust granted you.
Randy launched himself across the room and punched Charlie as soon as Charlie finished pronouncing his fate.
Charlie laughed as a black eye and welt started to form on Randys own face.
Care to try that again? Charlie taunted.
Randy seethed and stared at Charlie, who was trying to decide if there was any way to take Charlie down.
Who the fuck are you. Randy said pulling out of Dales ass and slamming himself up against the headboard of his bed. What the fuck did you do to those guys, how are they just frozen there.
It doesnt matter who the fuck we are, it only matters who you are and your behavior. Said Riley winking at Charlie, knowing he had just taken his favorite line.
Those guys they arent on trial, they may not be perfect, but they have plenty of good qualities. This is your trail and they werent witness to your atrocities so they wont be witnesses to your take down. Promised Charlie.
What the Trial, I have never done anything wrong, Randy argued.
You have been given a blessing of a dick that only 1% of the population of the world ever gets, add to that you have an amazing body. Yet, you cant even admit that you are gay, you cant admit who you really are. Charlie stated.
Instead of admitting to yourself that you are gay, you hide behind headless profiles and beg guys to come to your parents house so that you can have anonymous sex. Then you go back to your school and beat the shit out of guys that are not quite as masculine as you.
Who the fuck are you two. You two dont know me.
Oh yes Randall we know exactly who you are. You are the guy who hides his sexuality and instead of defending guys just like you, guys who are gay, you beat them nearly to death so that you have a cover to hide behind. You are by far the biggest dickwad I have ever met. Charlie pronounced.
I know who I am and I am more than aware that I am gay. But that doesnt mean I have to like it. I dont have to like the fact that I am cursed to like dick. I mean look at me, I am totally a guys guy, do I look like a fagot to you. Do I look like one of those fairies that are always staring at this big ole dick of mine. Randy exclaimed.
Fagots like Riley, Riley asked.
Exactly, fagots like that are nothing like me. You say we are a like, but there is nothing even remotely similar to the two of us. Randy spit out his words like a snake.
So you beat him up and make him feel inferior so that you what, feel like you are better feel like you are some how more of a man and less of a queer yourself? Charlie demanded.
Youre a fake there is nothing different between you and I Riley said getting in Randys face.
You could have easily helped me and all of the other gay guys at school feel cool, excepted, we could have looked up to you as a role model and as an athlete that we could have been proud to have in our corner. Riley stated.
Instead you half heartedly fucked any girl that would have you and you skated by on your big dick, and the fact that you knew the girls were just going to keep pumping your reputation. Charlie revealed.
While at the same you would kick us inferior fagots into a corner and beat the shit out of us, so that you could hide that you are nothing more than the same things as they are, no as we are.
As who, who the fuck are you talking about, I have never kicked you or put you in a corner. You and I have never fought before, claimed a confused Randy.
I am Riley, show him Charlie. Riley demanded.
Charlie walked over and poked Randy in both of his eyes.
I didnt really have to touch him, but it made me feel better. Laughed Charlie.
Randy grabbed his eyes as they were watering and in pain from Charlie surprise poking. Fuck you two, I am going to beat the shit out of you two or die trying.
When Randy stopped rubbing his eyes and the blurriness gave way he could not see the new Riley he saw the wimpy, fat, acne prone kid that he had tortured for a great portion of the kids life.
I dont know what black magic, you two are up to, but I want nothing to do with either of you, get the fuck out of my house.
You and I are the same, Randy, Riley said. We are much more alike than you will ever admit. We were both scared of who we were, we both cared more about what others thought of us, we both have portions of our lives we dont like. When I look at you I see a lot of me in you. Riley explained.
Fuck you, look at me, do I look like I deserve to be compared to you? Do I look like I will ever be confused as being anything like you? yelled Randy watching as the blurriness was subsiding and suddenly the massive muscle Riley was back.
No you are absolutely right, you dont deserve to ever be compared to Riley. You dont deserve any of what you have or any of what you have been blessed with.
Blessed with? I have worked my ass off to have what I have. Randy shouted.
No Randy, you have been blessed with your big dick, which gave you the wrong kind of confidence. Such a specimen should have given you confidence to defended those very people you have cursed. You have also been blessed with your sexuality, you were supposed to be gay, you fool, and your constant fear of yourself has turned both of your blessing against you. Your fear of being gay has made you hate yourself so bad that you have turned on anyone perceived to be what you hate most about yourself. Had you used your influence and natural given baseball skills both gay, bi, and straight guys alike would have lined up to be your friend. Guys would have still been at awe of your muscles, your pitching abilities, and your at bat average. You still would have earned your nickname Slugger and guys would have still felt a twinge of inferiority every time you changed in the locker room. Your incredible body, giant dick, and your baseball skills afforded you the ability to be accepted for who you are supposed to be. Fear and ignorance prevented you from being the school hero that you think you are, Riley preached.
Before Randy could collect his thoughts and make an argument or decide if Riley was right, Charlie announced Randys fate.
Randy, you will not use your puberty given gifts to influence and bully another human being. Charlie pronounced By the power vested in me by Mother Nature and human decency, I remove your dust, I take away your blessings of muscle. I also remove your baseball skills; you have proven time and time again that you dont deserve to have any influence over people. Finally, I take from every person that has ever seen your bat, the memory and influence you have ever gained over them. You are no longer slugger you are now and were always turtle as your little three incher only pokes its head out when it is not scared. You have proven you dont deserve any of your gifts and that you are incapable of wielding the power that your puberty dust granted you.
Randy launched himself across the room and punched Charlie as soon as Charlie finished pronouncing his fate.
Charlie laughed as a black eye and welt started to form on Randys own face.
Care to try that again? Charlie taunted.
Randy seethed and stared at Charlie, who was trying to decide if there was any way to take Charlie down.
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Suddenly out of the blue a fog rolled into Randy’s room. It gathered around Riley and lifted into the air above his body.
“Brrr the cloud is so cold,” Randy complained.
The fog seemed to swirl around and form itself more densely into a cloud. Suddenly raindrops began to fall on to Randy at first as a slow drizzle and eventually a torrential down pour. Randy tried to move around the room but his legs didn’t move. No matter how much he squirmed the rain kept falling on his head. Before long Randy was covered from head to toe in soggy golden dust. Where each drop of water landed on Randy, a bit of golden dust was mixed with in the water. As the golden shower (sorry it was too easy) ended a bright light appeared over Randy and the golden dust evaporated back into the cloud.
“This has to be a drug trip one of you slipped me something.” Randy said to the frozen statues that were Ian and Dale.
Slowly the now golden cloud moved across the room and found its way over Riley’s head. The same light shown down on Riley through the cloud. After a few minutes of warmth Riley noticed that he was suddenly standing at the end of a rainbow. Within the rainbow and the golden dust that the rainbow contained was now bathing Riley. As the different color lights hit Riley he could feel the familiar power of a very small amount of the golden dust coursing through his veins. The rest of the golden dust seemed to disappear into thin air.
“Nice light show, queens.” Randy shouted across the room, “Rainbow colors are perfect for you, Riley."
“As soon as these drugs are out of my system, you will be proven a figment of my drug induced imagination and when I see the true little bitch, Riley I will kick his ass just for you two figments of my fucked up head.” Randy threatened.
Randy grabbed his head, as it seemed to be spinning. “Fucking drugs I am going to kick ya’lls ass,” he shouted at Ian and Dale.
“Not even an ounce of remorse, you deserve everything you get.” Riley said sadly to Randy.
“Why are things spinning?” Randy felt like he was moving around and around it was like a seasickness. In the middle of what felt like he just came off a vomit comet carnival ride, Riley felt the changes beginning. At first it was his legs and ass, the baseball built body started to fall apart there.
Riley expected to feel the same feelings but this time it did not happen. He simply watched the show as it was unfolding.
Like the golden dust that had evaporated moments ago, Randy’s muscles seemed to be evaporating into thin air. From his legs and ass the change moved to his incredible eight-pack each muscle just evaporating into nonexistence. Randy cried out in horror.
“It’s the drugs, it’s the drugs” he said rocking himself and slashing out at Riley and Charlie like an injured animal.
He couldn’t bear to watch his arms fade away, years of baseball conditioning, years of pushups and weightlifting, practicing, and pitching were evaporating into smoke that filled the air. In their place were arms smaller than his 13 year old self, make that 12 year old self as more an more muscle faded away.
Had Randy been on a scale he would have had the dreaded experience of watching himself drop 10, 20, 30, then 40, and finally 50lbs of pure muscle.
Randy began to say something about how weak he felt and how pissed he was, when his tongue felt like it was on fire.
“MMMMMMMMMM” Randy yelled out.
When the burning ended he called out to the “figments of his imagination”
“What the fuck was that burning,” Randy asked but instead of his masculine voice was a lisp the same lisp that he had used on dozen of guys to decide if they should have the shit beat out of them.
“NOOOOO You can’t I can’t have this lisp. I can’t sound like a queer. People will beat the shit out of me. I can’t even defend myself look at me. I have no muscles any more, I am skinny bitch and now I sound like one two.” Randy cried.
“Seems fitting to me since a lisp was your favorite telltale sign” Charlie responded.
What the hell, why is my junk getting so cold?” Randy howled. At the exact same time Riley felt the gentle warmth in his own crotch.
Since Randy had been stark naked it was clear that he was losing his size, his dick was shrinking like a water balloon with a pin size leak. Inch by inch both length and girth were disappearing in what looked like a revers erection. Randy was whimpering with each inch he lost. Holding his dick with two hands like it would stop it from shrink back into itself. When his massive cock had shrunk down past 8 and into the seven inches he realized that his now hard cock was smaller than his former flaccid size. Tears flowed down his face as he complained about his loss of manhood with his new lispy voice.
At 6 inches he could no longer hold his dick with two hands as his shaft was to short for both hands to fit. At five inches his dick went soft and he continued to shrink to his new flaccid size of 2 inches. He had lost his Louisville Slugger and now he could only hold his new toy bat with two fingers and his thumb.
Equally humiliating was that as he looked around desperately for answers he saw that Riley was gaining HIS INCHES. At first the flat front of Riley’s pants showed no sign of his three inches, but within seconds his cock was straining at this shorts. Riley had to unbutton his tight shorts that had just become much much tighter. He dropped his pants for the comfort and for a slight bit of revenge. Looking over at Randy he could see that his balls were shrinking into themselves now at a quarter of the size that they once were.
Riley’s cock continued to get larger and larger both in length and in volume. Riley couldn’t help busting into a smile when it hit six inches, he was finally normal, he was finally average, a dream that he had always hoped he would be able to achieve. Average was only a temporary stop of course. Riley still had more dust pumping through the massive veins that were suddenly popping through the skin on his thickening and expanding cock. Riley’s balls began to swell and hung down heavy with their new weight around the same time his dick had reached the new record heights. At eight fat inches Riley had to look around his dick in order to see his feet. His dick was so wide that it blocked his view of the floor. At nine inches Riley felt the his heart start beating faster having to pump more blood to his dick then it ever had to before. At ten inches Riley was afraid he was going to cum. He could feel the sperm flowing through his nuts and he knew he had a load that would have put his tiny amount of ejaculation to shame. In just moments after it started Riley was able to look down at his new 11.5 inches and he beamed with joy.
“Wow you really can hold it like a bat” Charlie comment, also full of joy for his new bea.
“What about him?” Riley asked looking over at a completely shattered Randy.
“When this is over he will only remember having a 3 inch penis, your old penis size. His time as a horse hung baseball player will only be a dream that he has had all his life.”
“We had to take it all?” Riley asked.
“Yes, this one had to loose it all.” Charlie shared.
“I did leave him with a strong fetish for baseball uniforms so he is likely to still be trolling around the team locker.” Charlie’s description made Riley laugh even though he didn’t really want to laugh at the now painfully skinny and tiny dicked Randy.
“You will probably see him trying to bob up and down on some of your teammates dicks now and again.” Charlie stated.
“My teammates?” Riley asked even though now in his mind he had vivid memories of having been a walk-on to the team his freshman year and taking everyone by storm. He also could remember that he was being recruited by multiple major league teams to play shortstop, in the big leagues.
“Yep your teammates,” said Charlie as Riley leaned over and slipped his tongue down his throat.
“What about you and I, You have given me so much, and we both know there is something between us. What happens now, do I forget you ever existed do I wake up always wondering why I have this empty feeling in my heart? Or are you going to make me forget you, like you just made Randy forget his entire life? Am I going to wake up in an alternate reality where I find that I have a boyfriend who has always loved me?” Riley asked.
“Wow you are really dramatic.” Charlie laughed at Riley.
“I own a condo about an hour and a half from here. I figured we would date and see where it goes from here. If it works out then you know with my line of work, I can move to what ever team you play for.”
Riley wasn’t sure at first if Charlie was being serious.
“You own a condo an hour and a half from here?” Riley tried to comprehend that Mother Nature’s assistant lived up the street.
“Yeah it’s a great place not too far from St. Bart’s college.” Charlie shared being serious as he could be.
“Does anyone else know that Mother Nature’s assistant lives in Watertown?” Riley asked.
“It’s not that big a deal,” Charlie offered.
“Are there any more of Mother Nature’s assistants in Watertown?”
“Oh no there are no others around this is my territory. The next closest assistant is in Chicago.”
“How long have you lived there?”
“I was born in Watertown, so I’ve lived there about 20 years now.”
“How long have you been one of Mother Natures assistants?”
“It is a long story; it involves my college fraternity, Mu Nu Alpha a ritual and me being ordained.”
“You’re definitely going to have to tell me more about Mu Nu Alpha.”
“Sure what ever you want babe.” Charlie promised.
“So what is it like being a magical creature in such a small town? Is it lonely?”
“Well first off, I am human, I just happen to have Mother Nature’s magic touch. Second, its near impossible to feel lonely near St. Bart’s the place is crawling with magical people, mysterious powers, and I don’t know I guess you would call them super heroes?”
“Uh you have to tell me more.” Riley pressed.
“All in good time” Charlie offered, “there are plenty of other stories to tell you.”
“How about now we go back to your place and play catch,” Charlie offered with a sly smile.
“I will even play catcher, so you can try out your new bat.” Charlie laughed.
“Deal,” Riley said as he jumped into Charlie’s embrace.
Right as Charlie pushed them over to Riley’s house he snapped his fingers rearranging the order of things in the room and reanimating Dale and Ian.
“Damn Dude, I knew your dick was bigger than mine, but I figured not a full 3.5 inches.” Dale shared as the two of them sank their huge cocks up Randy’s little twink ass.
“Brrr the cloud is so cold,” Randy complained.
The fog seemed to swirl around and form itself more densely into a cloud. Suddenly raindrops began to fall on to Randy at first as a slow drizzle and eventually a torrential down pour. Randy tried to move around the room but his legs didn’t move. No matter how much he squirmed the rain kept falling on his head. Before long Randy was covered from head to toe in soggy golden dust. Where each drop of water landed on Randy, a bit of golden dust was mixed with in the water. As the golden shower (sorry it was too easy) ended a bright light appeared over Randy and the golden dust evaporated back into the cloud.
“This has to be a drug trip one of you slipped me something.” Randy said to the frozen statues that were Ian and Dale.
Slowly the now golden cloud moved across the room and found its way over Riley’s head. The same light shown down on Riley through the cloud. After a few minutes of warmth Riley noticed that he was suddenly standing at the end of a rainbow. Within the rainbow and the golden dust that the rainbow contained was now bathing Riley. As the different color lights hit Riley he could feel the familiar power of a very small amount of the golden dust coursing through his veins. The rest of the golden dust seemed to disappear into thin air.
“Nice light show, queens.” Randy shouted across the room, “Rainbow colors are perfect for you, Riley."
“As soon as these drugs are out of my system, you will be proven a figment of my drug induced imagination and when I see the true little bitch, Riley I will kick his ass just for you two figments of my fucked up head.” Randy threatened.
Randy grabbed his head, as it seemed to be spinning. “Fucking drugs I am going to kick ya’lls ass,” he shouted at Ian and Dale.
“Not even an ounce of remorse, you deserve everything you get.” Riley said sadly to Randy.
“Why are things spinning?” Randy felt like he was moving around and around it was like a seasickness. In the middle of what felt like he just came off a vomit comet carnival ride, Riley felt the changes beginning. At first it was his legs and ass, the baseball built body started to fall apart there.
Riley expected to feel the same feelings but this time it did not happen. He simply watched the show as it was unfolding.
Like the golden dust that had evaporated moments ago, Randy’s muscles seemed to be evaporating into thin air. From his legs and ass the change moved to his incredible eight-pack each muscle just evaporating into nonexistence. Randy cried out in horror.
“It’s the drugs, it’s the drugs” he said rocking himself and slashing out at Riley and Charlie like an injured animal.
He couldn’t bear to watch his arms fade away, years of baseball conditioning, years of pushups and weightlifting, practicing, and pitching were evaporating into smoke that filled the air. In their place were arms smaller than his 13 year old self, make that 12 year old self as more an more muscle faded away.
Had Randy been on a scale he would have had the dreaded experience of watching himself drop 10, 20, 30, then 40, and finally 50lbs of pure muscle.
Randy began to say something about how weak he felt and how pissed he was, when his tongue felt like it was on fire.
“MMMMMMMMMM” Randy yelled out.
When the burning ended he called out to the “figments of his imagination”
“What the fuck was that burning,” Randy asked but instead of his masculine voice was a lisp the same lisp that he had used on dozen of guys to decide if they should have the shit beat out of them.
“NOOOOO You can’t I can’t have this lisp. I can’t sound like a queer. People will beat the shit out of me. I can’t even defend myself look at me. I have no muscles any more, I am skinny bitch and now I sound like one two.” Randy cried.
“Seems fitting to me since a lisp was your favorite telltale sign” Charlie responded.
What the hell, why is my junk getting so cold?” Randy howled. At the exact same time Riley felt the gentle warmth in his own crotch.
Since Randy had been stark naked it was clear that he was losing his size, his dick was shrinking like a water balloon with a pin size leak. Inch by inch both length and girth were disappearing in what looked like a revers erection. Randy was whimpering with each inch he lost. Holding his dick with two hands like it would stop it from shrink back into itself. When his massive cock had shrunk down past 8 and into the seven inches he realized that his now hard cock was smaller than his former flaccid size. Tears flowed down his face as he complained about his loss of manhood with his new lispy voice.
At 6 inches he could no longer hold his dick with two hands as his shaft was to short for both hands to fit. At five inches his dick went soft and he continued to shrink to his new flaccid size of 2 inches. He had lost his Louisville Slugger and now he could only hold his new toy bat with two fingers and his thumb.
Equally humiliating was that as he looked around desperately for answers he saw that Riley was gaining HIS INCHES. At first the flat front of Riley’s pants showed no sign of his three inches, but within seconds his cock was straining at this shorts. Riley had to unbutton his tight shorts that had just become much much tighter. He dropped his pants for the comfort and for a slight bit of revenge. Looking over at Randy he could see that his balls were shrinking into themselves now at a quarter of the size that they once were.
Riley’s cock continued to get larger and larger both in length and in volume. Riley couldn’t help busting into a smile when it hit six inches, he was finally normal, he was finally average, a dream that he had always hoped he would be able to achieve. Average was only a temporary stop of course. Riley still had more dust pumping through the massive veins that were suddenly popping through the skin on his thickening and expanding cock. Riley’s balls began to swell and hung down heavy with their new weight around the same time his dick had reached the new record heights. At eight fat inches Riley had to look around his dick in order to see his feet. His dick was so wide that it blocked his view of the floor. At nine inches Riley felt the his heart start beating faster having to pump more blood to his dick then it ever had to before. At ten inches Riley was afraid he was going to cum. He could feel the sperm flowing through his nuts and he knew he had a load that would have put his tiny amount of ejaculation to shame. In just moments after it started Riley was able to look down at his new 11.5 inches and he beamed with joy.
“Wow you really can hold it like a bat” Charlie comment, also full of joy for his new bea.
“What about him?” Riley asked looking over at a completely shattered Randy.
“When this is over he will only remember having a 3 inch penis, your old penis size. His time as a horse hung baseball player will only be a dream that he has had all his life.”
“We had to take it all?” Riley asked.
“Yes, this one had to loose it all.” Charlie shared.
“I did leave him with a strong fetish for baseball uniforms so he is likely to still be trolling around the team locker.” Charlie’s description made Riley laugh even though he didn’t really want to laugh at the now painfully skinny and tiny dicked Randy.
“You will probably see him trying to bob up and down on some of your teammates dicks now and again.” Charlie stated.
“My teammates?” Riley asked even though now in his mind he had vivid memories of having been a walk-on to the team his freshman year and taking everyone by storm. He also could remember that he was being recruited by multiple major league teams to play shortstop, in the big leagues.
“Yep your teammates,” said Charlie as Riley leaned over and slipped his tongue down his throat.
“What about you and I, You have given me so much, and we both know there is something between us. What happens now, do I forget you ever existed do I wake up always wondering why I have this empty feeling in my heart? Or are you going to make me forget you, like you just made Randy forget his entire life? Am I going to wake up in an alternate reality where I find that I have a boyfriend who has always loved me?” Riley asked.
“Wow you are really dramatic.” Charlie laughed at Riley.
“I own a condo about an hour and a half from here. I figured we would date and see where it goes from here. If it works out then you know with my line of work, I can move to what ever team you play for.”
Riley wasn’t sure at first if Charlie was being serious.
“You own a condo an hour and a half from here?” Riley tried to comprehend that Mother Nature’s assistant lived up the street.
“Yeah it’s a great place not too far from St. Bart’s college.” Charlie shared being serious as he could be.
“Does anyone else know that Mother Nature’s assistant lives in Watertown?” Riley asked.
“It’s not that big a deal,” Charlie offered.
“Are there any more of Mother Nature’s assistants in Watertown?”
“Oh no there are no others around this is my territory. The next closest assistant is in Chicago.”
“How long have you lived there?”
“I was born in Watertown, so I’ve lived there about 20 years now.”
“How long have you been one of Mother Natures assistants?”
“It is a long story; it involves my college fraternity, Mu Nu Alpha a ritual and me being ordained.”
“You’re definitely going to have to tell me more about Mu Nu Alpha.”
“Sure what ever you want babe.” Charlie promised.
“So what is it like being a magical creature in such a small town? Is it lonely?”
“Well first off, I am human, I just happen to have Mother Nature’s magic touch. Second, its near impossible to feel lonely near St. Bart’s the place is crawling with magical people, mysterious powers, and I don’t know I guess you would call them super heroes?”
“Uh you have to tell me more.” Riley pressed.
“All in good time” Charlie offered, “there are plenty of other stories to tell you.”
“How about now we go back to your place and play catch,” Charlie offered with a sly smile.
“I will even play catcher, so you can try out your new bat.” Charlie laughed.
“Deal,” Riley said as he jumped into Charlie’s embrace.
Right as Charlie pushed them over to Riley’s house he snapped his fingers rearranging the order of things in the room and reanimating Dale and Ian.
“Damn Dude, I knew your dick was bigger than mine, but I figured not a full 3.5 inches.” Dale shared as the two of them sank their huge cocks up Randy’s little twink ass.
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Epilogue
“Where are we babe?” Riley asked looking around the room it seemed that he was in a cabin and from the look of it somewhere snowy.
“Charlie?” “Charlie?”
“Wait, I remember this place. This is where I was for those few seconds when I disappeared from the trainers room.”
“Charlie!” Riley yelled
“Yell all you want, Riley. Charlie is not here.” Riley spun around and saw a dark shadowed figure in the cabin’s kitchen.
“Where is he? Who are you, and where am I?” Riley fired questions at the dark figure.
“You, Riley are in my home. A home, I have been banished too since yesterday when Mother Nature fired me on your 18th birthday.”
“Sara? My original Mother Nature Assistant?”
“How good of Charles to share my name.”
“I have just enough magic touch left to bring you here when Charles’s guard was down. This dust cloud, you and Charles careless let free should be enough for me to keep you trapped here for years, if I have to.” Sara explained.
“But don’t you worry, it is clear that once Charles finds my note the smitten fool will come to rescue you and when he does, the only way he will get you back is to meet my demands.” Sara explained.
“What do you want, you want my puberty dust? Take it. Just leave Charlie be.”
“Oh dear, you think too small.” I don’t want just your puberty dust, I want all puberty dust and I will start getting it all by taking Charlie’s magic touch.” Laughed a sinister Sara.
“Where are we babe?” Riley asked looking around the room it seemed that he was in a cabin and from the look of it somewhere snowy.
“Charlie?” “Charlie?”
“Wait, I remember this place. This is where I was for those few seconds when I disappeared from the trainers room.”
“Charlie!” Riley yelled
“Yell all you want, Riley. Charlie is not here.” Riley spun around and saw a dark shadowed figure in the cabin’s kitchen.
“Where is he? Who are you, and where am I?” Riley fired questions at the dark figure.
“You, Riley are in my home. A home, I have been banished too since yesterday when Mother Nature fired me on your 18th birthday.”
“Sara? My original Mother Nature Assistant?”
“How good of Charles to share my name.”
“I have just enough magic touch left to bring you here when Charles’s guard was down. This dust cloud, you and Charles careless let free should be enough for me to keep you trapped here for years, if I have to.” Sara explained.
“But don’t you worry, it is clear that once Charles finds my note the smitten fool will come to rescue you and when he does, the only way he will get you back is to meet my demands.” Sara explained.
“What do you want, you want my puberty dust? Take it. Just leave Charlie be.”
“Oh dear, you think too small.” I don’t want just your puberty dust, I want all puberty dust and I will start getting it all by taking Charlie’s magic touch.” Laughed a sinister Sara.
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I don't envy how you have to write the next chapter, it seems pretty torn on how you can take it.
I almost don't want Riley to leave with Randy's dick, I feel like he's pretty quickly becoming exactly what he hated.
Edit: clearly wrote that before the other parts were up haha
I don't envy how you have to write the next chapter, it seems pretty torn on how you can take it.
I almost don't want Riley to leave with Randy's dick, I feel like he's pretty quickly becoming exactly what he hated.
Edit: clearly wrote that before the other parts were up haha
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So a couple of thoughts...I have enjoyed writing this, my first ever short story. I know there are grammar mistakes throughout and I will hopefully keep getting better in that area.
There are many a spin off story and an obvious sequel that are floating through my head. I also want to do justice to the other story "Incorrect Ritual," which I am enjoying writing.
What do you think? Should Riley be stuck in Sara's cabin for perpetuity? Or do you all want to hear about his rescue? And what of St. Bart's and the people with mysterious powers. Clearly there is something going on at St. Bart's fraternities. What if any mysteries do you guys want told?
Final thought:
I wanted to make one final comment about how rough I was on Randy for not coming out in Chapter 7. I just want to share that this is fiction. As many of us know, coming out is deeply personal issue and must be done in a manner that is both safe and timely for the people that choose to reveal that much of themselves.
I could make a case of how important it is for your mental and physical health to have at least a support group that knows the real you, but I don't want to preach, I just wanted to say that this short story has a lot to say about bullying, self-respect, caring for others, and falling in love. I didn't want people thinking I was blind to the difficulty of the coming out process.
There are many a spin off story and an obvious sequel that are floating through my head. I also want to do justice to the other story "Incorrect Ritual," which I am enjoying writing.
What do you think? Should Riley be stuck in Sara's cabin for perpetuity? Or do you all want to hear about his rescue? And what of St. Bart's and the people with mysterious powers. Clearly there is something going on at St. Bart's fraternities. What if any mysteries do you guys want told?
Final thought:
I wanted to make one final comment about how rough I was on Randy for not coming out in Chapter 7. I just want to share that this is fiction. As many of us know, coming out is deeply personal issue and must be done in a manner that is both safe and timely for the people that choose to reveal that much of themselves.
I could make a case of how important it is for your mental and physical health to have at least a support group that knows the real you, but I don't want to preach, I just wanted to say that this short story has a lot to say about bullying, self-respect, caring for others, and falling in love. I didn't want people thinking I was blind to the difficulty of the coming out process.
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You didn't seem insensitive to coming out, Randy was obscenely oppressive. Both those ideas for stories sound good but you write extremely hot submissive sex scenes, I want to see some more of that along with everything else.
