I also liked most of the beginning, but for me when Tommy started being "friendly" to just about anyone who tried something with him, bothered me. Even after he admitted to feeling some kind of way, he kept on without any regard to Henry or his feelings. I think just about all of them did some questionable things in my opinion, some worst than others and therefore the happily ever after ending shocked me. If nothing else, Tommy and Henry's relationship should have been forever changed. Henry said he felt used, betrayed and like a complete asshole. Why did it take an entire year for Tommy to offer that self serving apology which never acknowledged or apologized for the hurt he actually caused Henry.

I guess Tommy and Lex's friendship was not affected by the public make-out and jerk session, which I found odd that they did not address it with each other or the fact that his long time bestfriend is not dating his brother. The story had been so detailed and left no stone unturned until the end where it felt like it just ended. I thought your original idea of Tommy & Henry and Lex & Anthony being together would have been the good ending while at the same time forgiving Tommy for his behavior on that weekend. But it ended with Tommy being deserving of the Black Sheep of the family title.
@ndamood4sum there's a lot more to Tommy and there is a reason why he is the black sheep of his family.

Yes, I will admit, the ending came quick. The thing this, I like to write, I do write with great detail, giving backstories and description of actual places. Some people don't like that and I thought this story was also getting too long.

The issue was, when I first published it, I already had a whole of chapters written and then, huge delays in publishing the rest. I thought people lost interest and so I wanted to end it. However, I did leave it open to continue if people wanted it to.

If you didn't realize it, Lex nor Anthony invited Tommy at the end, someone told him. So yes, when I do continue it, a lot of that can be discussed. There is massive friction between Anthony and Tommy, they actually haven't spoke in a year. (spoiler for the future lol)
 
Yesss.. you should continues the story cause actually ur story is so good.. its just in my opinion i think toward the ending u kinda rushing to end it.. sorry about what i said.. its just my pov.. but i love ur story.. its include all the emotion in it.. love,lust, family n everything… keep on good work.. :emoji_thumbsup:
@Simplez I did rush the ending. When I first published the story, I already had a ton of chapters written. After my trip to Europe in October, if you didn't notice, huge delays in releasing new chapters, so I thought people lost interest. However, I did leave the end as a continue. There is a lot more to the story. Little spoiler, Anthony and Lex haven't spoken to Tommy in a year, they didn't invite him. :)
 
@Simplez I did rush the ending. When I first published the story, I already had a ton of chapters written. After my trip to Europe in October, if you didn't notice, huge delays in releasing new chapters, so I thought people lost interest. However, I did leave the end as a continue. There is a lot more to the story. Little spoiler, Anthony and Lex haven't spoken to Tommy in a year, they didn't invite him. :)
Yeahh i notice that u leave for a long time before getting back.. but its ok.. there’s a lot plot twist u can make it to make it more addictive :) .. just here cheering for u if u want to make a continuation. and also as a gratitude to ur time as to make this story happened.. thank u n good luck..
 
@Anime2 I would love more feedback, where did I loose you? Honestly, after my trip to Europe I developed server writings block on how I wanted this story to go.

The original plan was to have Tommy and Henry and Anthony and Lex being couples. However, during the middle of it, I thought about having Henry confess his love to Anthony and make them the couple at the end.

I think things went the wrong away, when Tommy brought Travis and Jacob into the house after the Jacuzzi thing. I made Tommy too much of a douche in this story, which wasn't suppose to be. Love your feedback, as I might go back and re-write the story down the road.
Sorry for late reply, I wouldn't say you lost me but parts just didn't add up for me.

Tommy's behaviour didn't make sense. Tommy and lex hooking up on the bar as hot as it was made no sense because of the how they were portrayed thus far. In fact it came across like lex had a secret crush on tommy but then it turns out no he secretly was in love with Anthony. If that's the case why hook up with tommy who's your straight bestie and the brother of the guy you're in love with. And anthony then gets with the guy he saw hook up with his brother didnt make sense to me.
 
Hey Everyone! I just wanted to inform everyone, I will continue the story, trying to fix some things up. Expect 1 or 2 more chapters to close the series up, as I started a new one.


The Story Continues:

Anthony was looking at his brother talking to Henry. Deep inside him, he was furious that his brother showed up, but didn’t want to ruin his special day. Anthony and Lex haven’t spoken to Tommy in a year. Anthony for a long time, felt responsible for Henry leaving, after Tommy used him like a two-dollar hooker, you meet at Hunts Point. He wasn’t in his right mind, the things he did that week, a year ago.

“Babe, who invited your brother? Asked Lex, which snapped Anthony out of his gaze.

“I don’t fuckin know! I am worried, he is going to mind fuck Henry, who is in such a great place right now!” Anthony said, while clutching his fists.

To this day, he really felt bad at what he did to Lex and Henry. A year ago, that night, he got Lex and Tommy to perform a show, in front of a massive crowd. He apologized profusely to Lex and Henry, regarding his stupid actions. He really felt bad for Henry, who had the biggest crush on his idiotic brother. Anthony blamed Tommy for Henry disappearing shortly after and told him he was dead to him and never wanted to see him.

However, in truth, Anthony blamed himself for Tommy leaving. The whole Lee thing, put his brain into a thick cloud of flog, that he lost all common sense. Lex, shocking, was very forgiving over everything, since he told Anthony, it led them to be together. He would always say, “Shit happens and lessons learned”. That is one of the many reasons he loved Lex. However, making Lex do that, first time with a guy, in front of a crowd, I mean who the fuck does that, he still thinks to himself.

Anthony saw Henry walking away and head back to the crowd and he ran to his brother and grabbed his arm.

“What the fuck are you doing here? Are you here to cause more problems, are you here to ruin, one of the happiest days of my life?” Anthony said angrily, as tears were now coming down his face.

“Ant! I would never do that to you! I miss you and am just trying to correct things!” Tommy said, while wiping the tears from his brother's face.

“Honestly, I don’t give a shit what mom, dad, our siblings think of me being the black sheep of the family and don’t talk to me! However, you broke my heart, by shunning me!
You’re my baby brother and the most important person in my life! I need you!” Tommy said, while lowering his head to his brother's shoulder.

Anthony knew his brother, better than anyone else in the world. If it was the moment or how good his brother is at manipulating people, he decided to forget for the time being and brought his brother in for a hug. The crowd saw, as the brothers were hugging and sobbing.

“I am sorry Thomas! I am sorry for what I did to you and Lex, that night. I am sorry for putting you both in that situation, feeding you to a hungry crowd of thirsty men!
However, we will have to talk about the whole Henry situation. But, it's something we should discuss down the road.” Anthony whispered into his brother's ear.

“It's ok, we all make mistakes that we later regret. Shit, I am the king of making mistakes and being a massive fuck up. I just want to get past this and have you back in my life!” Tommy said.

After a few minutes of the brothers crying and embracing one another, the crowd gathered around to celebrate this special night. Later that night, while laying in bed, Anthony thought of the past year and how he and Lex got to this point. As we said, Anthony truly felt bad for pimping his brother and more so, Lex that night. To this day, he still attends therapy because of it, as he informed his therapist, he worried he was becoming a dickhead, like his brother.

While in bed, he thought of his first date with Lex and how romantic he was. They took their sexual relationship very slow, as he didn’t want to rush things with him. It took over two months before Lex fucked Anthony and three months before Lex would lose his cherry to Anthony, while on a romantic weekend getaway to the Poconos.

Thinking of that trip and how tight Lex’s hole was, was getting him horny. Anthony started to stroke his cock, while recounting that night, when Anthony made love to Lex. It was their first night in the cabin they rented for the long weekend. They just had dinner and relaxed in the hot tub, drinking wine, watching the clear dark skies, full of bright stars. While snuggling in the hot tub, Lex started to caress my leg and turned to look into my eyes.

“Babe, are you sure about this? I can wait as long as you want?” I asked.

Lex leaned in and started to kiss me. We both jumped out of the hot tub and headed towards the bedroom. My cock, instantly got hard and was jumping for joy. Once in the bedroom, I pulled him on top of me and kissed him. I felt his hard cock rubbing against my stomach as he lay on top of me. I broke our kiss and flipped him on his back and started to lick his whole body, while Lex closed his eyes and started to moan. Jesus he was perfect, a thick uncut cock pointing straight at me.

I reached down to rub his cock, slowly and teasing his cock head. I flipped Lex on his stomach now and paused to take in the full sight of his gorgeous tight and virgin hole, as I slowly spread his cheeks apart. I leaned down and stuck my tongue out to lick and tease his hole and he just about jumped through the ceiling and let out a “holy fuckin shit!”

I giggled and asked, “do you like that?”

“Fuck yea.” He responded.

After a few minutes of using my tongue, I spat into my index finger and started to slowly and gently massage his eager hole. Lex was now starting to moan like crazy, as my finger was going deeper into him. With my left hand, I started caressing his balls. After a few minutes of getting his hole ready, I instructed
Lex to lift his butt up. I went over to my night bag and took out the lube and started to massage it around his hole and my throbbing cock.

Slowly, with every inch, I entered Lex’s soon to be former virgin hole. While slowly making love to him, I made sure he was comfortable and relaxed, as I didn’t want to hurt him. After a few minutes of uncomfortable pain on his end, we adjusted and found our rhythm and he started to moan in pleasure. Since his hole was so tight, I ended up cumming within minutes, inside of him.

Ever since then, we do take turns on who is going to bottom. After thinking of that night, I blew my load all over my chest and got up to take a quick shower, while Lex was passed out sleeping. After my shower,
I decided to step outside, for some fresh air and found my older brothers, Nikko and VJ. As I have said, I am one of the seven in my family, with myself being the youngest and Tommy being the second youngest.

Nikko and VJ were sitting on the front porch, both smoking cigars and drinking scotch, when they saw me. Both my brothers are older, with Nikko being 39 and VJ being the oldest at 45 years old. They saw me, got up and both pulled me into a hug, once again to congratulate me and my engagement. They both loved Lex as well, since they were all part of the FDNY family brotherhood. They handed me a cigar and we just chatted for what it seemed like hours. What was weird, growing up, I was never close to them or my sisters as I was with Tommy.

Meanwhile, at another rental, Tommy needed to take a stroll on the beach. He had a lot on his mind. A new baby on the way, trying to figure out custody agreements with his ex-wife and patching things up with Anthony and hopefully Lex tomorrow morning.

It was going to be interesting tomorrow, when Tommy confronts Lex about how things went. He was furious that his best friend would stop talking to him. They were both the best man at each other's weddings. Heck, he thought after the stunt Anthony pulled, about them fooling around on top of the bar, Lex would want nothing to do with his brother. However, everything leads back to poor Henry, Tommy thought.

Henry was the fuckin poor victim in all this, as everytone has stated. I mean, Tommy knew Henry had the hots for him, so he finally gave Henry what he wanted. He never came out and said he was gay, bi, confused or whatever. It was something that happened at that moment and Tommy doesn’t regret it. What did Henry expect, some Disney fairytale ending? They would automatically fall in love and live happily ever after?

As Tommy was watching the waves crashing and the beautifully clear skies, he heard something and decided to turn around. All of a sudden, BAM! Tommy fell to the sand, as someone punched him hard. After a minute or so, Tommy was trying to get up, his vision blurry, the person stepped on his hands, preventing him from getting up.

“You better stay away from Henry! Better yet, just leave! No one here likes you, you piece of shit!”

Tommy didn’t recognize the voice screaming at him, however, as his vision was starting to come back, along with a massive headache, he looked up. There standing in front of him, with his hands clutched, was Trevor, Henry’s boyfriend!
 
Hey Everyone! I just wanted to inform everyone, I will continue the story, trying to fix some things up. Expect 1 or 2 more chapters to close the series up, as I started a new one.


The Story Continues:

Anthony was looking at his brother talking to Henry. Deep inside him, he was furious that his brother showed up, but didn’t want to ruin his special day. Anthony and Lex haven’t spoken to Tommy in a year. Anthony for a long time, felt responsible for Henry leaving, after Tommy used him like a two-dollar hooker, you meet at Hunts Point. He wasn’t in his right mind, the things he did that week, a year ago.

“Babe, who invited your brother? Asked Lex, which snapped Anthony out of his gaze.

“I don’t fuckin know! I am worried, he is going to mind fuck Henry, who is in such a great place right now!” Anthony said, while clutching his fists.

To this day, he really felt bad at what he did to Lex and Henry. A year ago, that night, he got Lex and Tommy to perform a show, in front of a massive crowd. He apologized profusely to Lex and Henry, regarding his stupid actions. He really felt bad for Henry, who had the biggest crush on his idiotic brother. Anthony blamed Tommy for Henry disappearing shortly after and told him he was dead to him and never wanted to see him.

However, in truth, Anthony blamed himself for Tommy leaving. The whole Lee thing, put his brain into a thick cloud of flog, that he lost all common sense. Lex, shocking, was very forgiving over everything, since he told Anthony, it led them to be together. He would always say, “Shit happens and lessons learned”. That is one of the many reasons he loved Lex. However, making Lex do that, first time with a guy, in front of a crowd, I mean who the fuck does that, he still thinks to himself.

Anthony saw Henry walking away and head back to the crowd and he ran to his brother and grabbed his arm.

“What the fuck are you doing here? Are you here to cause more problems, are you here to ruin, one of the happiest days of my life?” Anthony said angrily, as tears were now coming down his face.

“Ant! I would never do that to you! I miss you and am just trying to correct things!” Tommy said, while wiping the tears from his brother's face.

“Honestly, I don’t give a shit what mom, dad, our siblings think of me being the black sheep of the family and don’t talk to me! However, you broke my heart, by shunning me!
You’re my baby brother and the most important person in my life! I need you!” Tommy said, while lowering his head to his brother's shoulder.

Anthony knew his brother, better than anyone else in the world. If it was the moment or how good his brother is at manipulating people, he decided to forget for the time being and brought his brother in for a hug. The crowd saw, as the brothers were hugging and sobbing.

“I am sorry Thomas! I am sorry for what I did to you and Lex, that night. I am sorry for putting you both in that situation, feeding you to a hungry crowd of thirsty men!
However, we will have to talk about the whole Henry situation. But, it's something we should discuss down the road.” Anthony whispered into his brother's ear.

“It's ok, we all make mistakes that we later regret. Shit, I am the king of making mistakes and being a massive fuck up. I just want to get past this and have you back in my life!” Tommy said.

After a few minutes of the brothers crying and embracing one another, the crowd gathered around to celebrate this special night. Later that night, while laying in bed, Anthony thought of the past year and how he and Lex got to this point. As we said, Anthony truly felt bad for pimping his brother and more so, Lex that night. To this day, he still attends therapy because of it, as he informed his therapist, he worried he was becoming a dickhead, like his brother.

While in bed, he thought of his first date with Lex and how romantic he was. They took their sexual relationship very slow, as he didn’t want to rush things with him. It took over two months before Lex fucked Anthony and three months before Lex would lose his cherry to Anthony, while on a romantic weekend getaway to the Poconos.

Thinking of that trip and how tight Lex’s hole was, was getting him horny. Anthony started to stroke his cock, while recounting that night, when Anthony made love to Lex. It was their first night in the cabin they rented for the long weekend. They just had dinner and relaxed in the hot tub, drinking wine, watching the clear dark skies, full of bright stars. While snuggling in the hot tub, Lex started to caress my leg and turned to look into my eyes.

“Babe, are you sure about this? I can wait as long as you want?” I asked.

Lex leaned in and started to kiss me. We both jumped out of the hot tub and headed towards the bedroom. My cock, instantly got hard and was jumping for joy. Once in the bedroom, I pulled him on top of me and kissed him. I felt his hard cock rubbing against my stomach as he lay on top of me. I broke our kiss and flipped him on his back and started to lick his whole body, while Lex closed his eyes and started to moan. Jesus he was perfect, a thick uncut cock pointing straight at me.

I reached down to rub his cock, slowly and teasing his cock head. I flipped Lex on his stomach now and paused to take in the full sight of his gorgeous tight and virgin hole, as I slowly spread his cheeks apart. I leaned down and stuck my tongue out to lick and tease his hole and he just about jumped through the ceiling and let out a “holy fuckin shit!”

I giggled and asked, “do you like that?”

“Fuck yea.” He responded.

After a few minutes of using my tongue, I spat into my index finger and started to slowly and gently massage his eager hole. Lex was now starting to moan like crazy, as my finger was going deeper into him. With my left hand, I started caressing his balls. After a few minutes of getting his hole ready, I instructed
Lex to lift his butt up. I went over to my night bag and took out the lube and started to massage it around his hole and my throbbing cock.

Slowly, with every inch, I entered Lex’s soon to be former virgin hole. While slowly making love to him, I made sure he was comfortable and relaxed, as I didn’t want to hurt him. After a few minutes of uncomfortable pain on his end, we adjusted and found our rhythm and he started to moan in pleasure. Since his hole was so tight, I ended up cumming within minutes, inside of him.

Ever since then, we do take turns on who is going to bottom. After thinking of that night, I blew my load all over my chest and got up to take a quick shower, while Lex was passed out sleeping. After my shower,
I decided to step outside, for some fresh air and found my older brothers, Nikko and VJ. As I have said, I am one of the seven in my family, with myself being the youngest and Tommy being the second youngest.

Nikko and VJ were sitting on the front porch, both smoking cigars and drinking scotch, when they saw me. Both my brothers are older, with Nikko being 39 and VJ being the oldest at 45 years old. They saw me, got up and both pulled me into a hug, once again to congratulate me and my engagement. They both loved Lex as well, since they were all part of the FDNY family brotherhood. They handed me a cigar and we just chatted for what it seemed like hours. What was weird, growing up, I was never close to them or my sisters as I was with Tommy.

Meanwhile, at another rental, Tommy needed to take a stroll on the beach. He had a lot on his mind. A new baby on the way, trying to figure out custody agreements with his ex-wife and patching things up with Anthony and hopefully Lex tomorrow morning.

It was going to be interesting tomorrow, when Tommy confronts Lex about how things went. He was furious that his best friend would stop talking to him. They were both the best man at each other's weddings. Heck, he thought after the stunt Anthony pulled, about them fooling around on top of the bar, Lex would want nothing to do with his brother. However, everything leads back to poor Henry, Tommy thought.

Henry was the fuckin poor victim in all this, as everytone has stated. I mean, Tommy knew Henry had the hots for him, so he finally gave Henry what he wanted. He never came out and said he was gay, bi, confused or whatever. It was something that happened at that moment and Tommy doesn’t regret it. What did Henry expect, some Disney fairytale ending? They would automatically fall in love and live happily ever after?

As Tommy was watching the waves crashing and the beautifully clear skies, he heard something and decided to turn around. All of a sudden, BAM! Tommy fell to the sand, as someone punched him hard. After a minute or so, Tommy was trying to get up, his vision blurry, the person stepped on his hands, preventing him from getting up.

“You better stay away from Henry! Better yet, just leave! No one here likes you, you piece of shit!”

Tommy didn’t recognize the voice screaming at him, however, as his vision was starting to come back, along with a massive headache, he looked up. There standing in front of him, with his hands clutched, was Trevor, Henry’s boyfriend!
Yeahhhh… but hope u dont take too long btween one part to another.. great story n i put high hope for the next chapter
 
Yeahhhh… but hope u dont take too long btween one part to another.. great story n i put high hope for the next chapter
@Simplez I am working on the final chapter as we speak. I am hopeful to get it done by Sunday or Monday night.
 
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The Story Comes to an End: Anthony’s Point of View
After brunch, everyone started to pack up to head back to the mainland. We were expected to have a huge party this coming weekend at my parents house. Since my dad had his stroke, he couldn’t make it to my special night. However before I joined Lex, my siblings and everyone else, I had to cross off a few things from my list.

I met Lee at Sand Castle, as I wanted to apologize and make amends with him. We sat there, laughing of the good old times, how he popped my cherry back in College and our first three-some. I would ask how his grandmother, mother and siblings are doing and he asked me how my father is doing.

“Lee, I am truly, beyond words, sorry how everything ended between us. I am so embarrassed that my brother hired someone to break us up. You were going through a lot with your father and grandfather at that time!” I said to Lee

For the next hour, we kept chatting, apologizing, and telling each other how happy we were. Even though it didn’t work out with Lee, I told him I still love him, in a non-sexual way and I am happy he is with Jacob.

“Not going to lie, I always thought we would be together, however I am still happy we are in each other's lives. I love you more than you know, however, you were meant to be with Lex and me with Jacob.” Lee said, as we embraced one another, cried, and he told me he will see me in a few days.

I was now sitting on the beach when Henry came and sat down next to me and laid his head on my shoulder, as we looked out into the ocean.

“I am truly sorry!” I said

“Listen, you don’t have to be sorry one bit. I am the one that fell for a straight guy and thought it would be like those stories you read. He realizes he cares about you and you live a fairytale ending together.
The biggest thing that came out of it, I met the guy that truly cares about me and I can see being with him forever.” Henry said, as he was caressing my back.

Just then, we both looked up and saw Tommy, with a big black eye and a bottle of booze.

“What the fuck happen to you?” Henry and I ask

“FUCKIN TREVOR!” Tommy said.

A few months passed, as Lex and I were planning some stuff for our wedding. We didn’t want a big wedding . Remember, Lex doesn't have much family, since his parents died on 9/11 and his grandparents have passed away. Just then, Tommy walked into our place with the baby. In the past few months, a lot of apologies and healing has occurred. Lex and Tommy started to talk to one another and have both moved on from that night and are hanging out almost every day.

Tommy has started to regain the family trust. He has been helping my father with therapy. My mother actually acknowledged his existence and informed everyone on her morning news show, the birth of her latest granddaughter, Sofia. Even my brothers and sisters have come on-board and started to talk to Tommy. As far as Henry, Trevor and Tommy. Trevor and Tommy agreed to be civil to one another, while Henry tries to stay away from him, as much as possible.

“What are we doing tonight, the wife said I can have a night off and go out.” Tommy said.

“Well, Lex and I were going to meet up with a few friends at Monster for a few drinks. It's a gay bar, so you might not be interested.” I said to Tommy

“Fuck, its has booze, let me drop off the baby and we can all go!” Tommy said with excitement in his voice.

Later that night, while it was still early at Monster, we were having a few drinks with Lee, Jacob, Timmy and Jason. Lee and Tommy were still not on speaking terms, for anyone that knows Lee, the guy can hold a grudge! It was weird, seeing Lex in the middle, while he was laughing and chatting it up with Lee, while Tommy was on the other side, just sipping his drink.

Just then, Travis walked in. He and Rodrigo recently broke up a month ago. I mean, it happens, when you bring a third into the bedroom and one of them keeps seeing that person. Rodrigo was out of the country, traveling with family. As the night progressed, Lee and Lex noticed Travis and Tommy had disappeared.
 
The Story Comes to an End: Tommy’s Point of View:
At the bar, the guys were all chatting and having fun, while I was getting the stink eye from Lee. It pissed me off that Lee and Lex were becoming best buddies. Granted, Lex and I patched things up a while ago, after the birth of my daughter and we finally had “the talk”. I told him, it hurt me, that he shunned me for a year and after some arguing, while over beers, we patched things up, hugged one another and decided to let the past be in the past.

When Travis came in, it was kind of weird, I left him in the room, along with Jacob with massive blue balls, after teasing them of something they couldn’t have. We actually didn’t acknowledge one another for like an hour, until I got up and had to use the bathroom.

As I was leaving the bathroom, I was cornered by Travis. He started rambling about his break up and how depressed he was, so I decided to give him a hug and bought him a beer. After a few more beers, I needed to use the bathroom again and Travis followed me as well. While in the bathroom, Travis used the urinal next to me.

“God your cock is still perfect, just like the first time I saw it.” Travis said while we were pissing.

“I wonder what happened to Rico, the DJ from that night.” I asked, while trying to change the subject.

“Probably in a gang bang with a bunch of gays, convincing himself he is straight!” Travis said, while laughing.

Just then, I felt Travis’s hand, gently lifting my shirt up and feeling my stomach. I turned my head to give him a “WTF” look.

“Honestly Tommy, you kind of owe me. I always get the guy I want and you left me there, in the bedroom, feeling rejected, after teasing me that night. I legit thought you were going to put that big, thick sausage in my ass and pound me.” Travis said, as he lowered his hand, now feeling my pubes.

“Let's go to the stall and finally give me what I've been wanting, I bet you haven’t gotten any since your kid was born.” Travis continued to say.

Without any hesitation Travis brought me back to the stall, locked the door and with one one hand, was caressing my chest. He was right, Alison had a tuff pregnancy and was bedridden per doctor's orders at 6 months. Even after the baby was born, we haven’t had sex, not even a blow job or hand job. The thought of another guy sucking my dick didn't matter at this point.

Travis slowly lowered himself between my legs and took my dick in his hand. I watched him as he stroked it slowly. He continued to slowly stroke my dick while he looked up at me. My dick instantly got hard, from the touch of another person and I really needed to get off.

"Do you want me to suck this for you?" he asked.

"God, yes! Suck my dick," I said.

He stopped stroking and cupped my balls in his hand. He leaned in and flicked his tongue over my now swollen sack. He kissed my shaft softly and began stroking again. He moved his hand from my cock to my balls again. Then he ran his tongue up the length of my shaft. He wrapped his lips around my head and slowly took my huge sausage into his mouth. I leaned my head back and moaned. Slowly, he sucked his way back to the tip. He pulled my now throbbing dick from his mouth with an audible "pop."

Now with both his hands, he was caressing my legs and licked all the precum coming out of me. After a few seconds of his tongue swirling around my mushroom head, he engulfed it into his mouth again and I felt his hand reach below my balls and a finger touch my asshole. As he sucked me, he made small circles around my hole with his finger. I spread my legs wider. He pulled off my dick again and asked me if it felt good.

"Fucking amazing!" I said, now officially losing total control of the situation.

Travis continued to play with my asshole and went back to sucking. He started to quicken his pace and I knew I was about to explode in this kid's mouth any second. He kept sucking and sucking until there was no going back. I was now holding tight to the sides of the stall, sweat coming down my forehead and biting my lower lip, to prevent anyone from hearing my moans of pleasure.

"Here it comes!" I warned him.

Travis kept going, bobbing his head up and down on my dick, as I exploded what seemed like a gallon of my cum into his mouth. As I was blowing my load, Travis inserted his finger deeper into my virgin hole. I let out a very loud moan as I blew the last droplets of my cum into this cocksucker's mouth. It legit became the most intense blowjob I ever received, and he kept sucking, until the last drop. I almost fell into the toilet, as I lost the sense of feeling in my legs.

After a minute or so of me trying to zip my pants up and regaining my composure, as Travis was finishing licking all the cum from his face, he decided to leave the stall. By the time I stepped out of the stall and looked up, I was shocked to see Lee, with his hands and legs crossed and leaning against the sink, with a devilish smile on him.

“FUCK!” I said, while washing my hands and looking into the mirror.

As I sat down, both Travis and Lee were talking to one another, when Ant got a call and told everyone to shut up.

“Henry, what did you say? Calm down and repeat yourself, I can’t hear you!” Ant said into his phone.

We were all looking at Ant, as he slowly dropped the phone, after hanging up.

“Trevor has been in an accident, he is at NYU Langone Health. They don’t know if he will make it!” Ant said, as tears started to pour down his face.
 
The Story Comes to an End: The Grand finale:

Everyone rushed to the hospital, where we met Trevor's parents, his sister, and Henry’s father. The group of friends would end up sitting and waiting for what seemed like hours, when Henry finally came out with Trevor's family. They would find out that Trevor was involved in a serious accident on the West Side Highway and lost a ton of blood.

“Trevor needs a blood transfusion, for him to survive.” Henry said as he ran into his best friend's arms.

The group would find out that Trevor is AB Positive, which is one of the rarest of blood types. Everyone sat there, crying and worried for Henry, as he could lose his boyfriend, until someone spoke up.

“I am AB Positive!” Tommy said, as everyone looked up to him and Henry ran to him with open eyes and a smile on his face.

It was a beautiful, warm, and sunny day at Snug Harbor on Staten Island. Everyone was there to celebrate a very special day, the wedding of Trevor and Henry. It was a beautiful wedding and the reception afterwards was phenomenal. All the friends snuck away, to head over to Snub Harbor dock. It had been almost two years since that night. There, Lex and Anthony were now married and trying to calm their little boy down. Lee, Jacob, Timmy, Travis,Rodrigo, Anthony’s parents, brothers and sisters, Trevors family and Henry's family and many others were now standing by the docks, overlooking New Jersey. Henry and Trevor were now facing everyone.

“Henry and I are beyond grateful for everyone attending our magical day today. We also wanted to inform everyone, we are expecting twins in about 5 months! A boy and a girl! The girl will be named after Henry’s late mother.” Trevor said, while choking up and trying to get the words out of his mouth.

“Anthony and the whole Caruso family, we are wondering if we could have the honor of naming our son Thomas, after my hero, my savior. I wouldn’t be here without the selfishness act he did! I will never forget what he did, HE IS MY HERO!” Trevor went on to say, as Anthony and his family all went to hug Trevor, as the crowd wept.

“Let's salute Thomas Alexander Caruso! Our hero! We miss you every day and hope to keep your legacy alive!” Henry said, as he and Anthony hugged and cried.

While Tommy did save Trevors life that night at the hospital, unfortunately something went wrong on his end and Tommy would pass away three days later. Anthony was holding his son, who he named after his brother as well, he would look out into the bright blue skies and thank his brother for everything. As the group was helding back to the reception, both Anthony and Henry decided to stay a little longer.

“Tommy was the king of Staten Island, then became the black sheep, however in the end, he became a hero. You always looked up to Tommy and never gave up on him, even when everyone wrote him off! I miss him every day!” Henry said, while crying into his best friend's shoulders.

“He made A LOT of mistakes, but in the end, everyone saw him as I always saw him, a hero! I miss you big brother!” Anthony said.

The two best friends saluted the sky and walked back to the reception, to celebrate not only a new marriage, but someone who was dear to their hearts.
 
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That ending lol. You threw everything including the kitchen sink. My eyes were rolling all over the places and I laughed plenty of times at all the absurdities, the sex scenes were good, the cast members shameless. It was a total hot mess BUUUUUT I was thoroughly entertained and you end up starting a new story I would read it too. SO bravo to you and thank you for the wild ride!
 
The Story Comes to an End: The Grand finale:

Everyone rushed to the hospital, where we met Trevor's parents, his sister, and Henry’s father. The group of friends would end up sitting and waiting for what seemed like hours, when Henry finally came out with Trevor's family. They would find out that Trevor was involved in a serious accident on the West Side Highway and lost a ton of blood.

“Trevor needs a blood transfusion, for him to survive.” Henry said as he ran into his best friend's arms.

The group would find out that Trevor is AB Positive, which is one of the rarest of blood types. Everyone sat there, crying and worried for Henry, as he could lose his boyfriend, until someone spoke up.

“I am AB Positive!” Tommy said, as everyone looked up to him and Henry ran to him with open eyes and a smile on his face.

It was a beautiful, warm, and sunny day at Snug Harbor on Staten Island. Everyone was there to celebrate a very special day, the wedding of Trevor and Henry. It was a beautiful wedding and the reception afterwards was phenomenal. All the friends snuck away, to head over to Snub Harbor dock. It had been almost two years since that night. There, Lex and Anthony were now married and trying to calm their little boy down. Lee, Jacob, Timmy, Travis,Rodrigo, Anthony’s parents, brothers and sisters, Trevors family and Henry's family and many others were now standing by the docks, overlooking New Jersey. Henry and Trevor were now facing everyone.

“Henry and I are beyond grateful for everyone attending our magical day today. We also wanted to inform everyone, we are expecting twins in about 5 months! A boy and a girl! The girl will be named after Henry’s late mother.” Trevor said, while choking up and trying to get the words out of his mouth.

“Anthony and the whole Caruso family, we are wondering if we could have the honor of naming our son Thomas, after my hero, my savior. I wouldn’t be here without the selfishness act he did! I will never forget what he did, HE IS MY HERO!” Trevor went on to say, as Anthony and his family all went to hug Trevor, as the crowd wept.

“Let's salute Thomas Alexander Caruso! Our hero! We miss you every day and hope to keep your legacy alive!” Henry said, as he and Anthony hugged and cried.

While Tommy did save Trevors life that night at the hospital, unfortunately something went wrong on his end and Tommy would pass away three days later. Anthony was holding his son, who he named after his brother as well, he would look out into the bright blue skies and thank his brother for everything. As the group was helding back to the reception, both Anthony and Henry decided to stay a little longer.

“Tommy was the king of Staten Island, then became the black sheep, however in the end, he became a hero. You always looked up to Tommy and never gave up on him, even when everyone wrote him off! I miss him every day!” Henry said, while crying into his best friend's shoulders.

“He made A LOT of mistakes, but in the end, everyone saw him as I always saw him, a hero! I miss you big brother!” Anthony said.

The two best friends saluted the sky and walked back to the reception, to celebrate not only a new marriage, but someone who was dear to their hearts.
Thank u for all ur great job until finishing this story.. its such a beautiful story.. waiting next story from u..
 
The Story Comes to an End: The Grand finale:

Everyone rushed to the hospital, where we met Trevor's parents, his sister, and Henry’s father. The group of friends would end up sitting and waiting for what seemed like hours, when Henry finally came out with Trevor's family. They would find out that Trevor was involved in a serious accident on the West Side Highway and lost a ton of blood.

“Trevor needs a blood transfusion, for him to survive.” Henry said as he ran into his best friend's arms.

The group would find out that Trevor is AB Positive, which is one of the rarest of blood types. Everyone sat there, crying and worried for Henry, as he could lose his boyfriend, until someone spoke up.

“I am AB Positive!” Tommy said, as everyone looked up to him and Henry ran to him with open eyes and a smile on his face.

It was a beautiful, warm, and sunny day at Snug Harbor on Staten Island. Everyone was there to celebrate a very special day, the wedding of Trevor and Henry. It was a beautiful wedding and the reception afterwards was phenomenal. All the friends snuck away, to head over to Snub Harbor dock. It had been almost two years since that night. There, Lex and Anthony were now married and trying to calm their little boy down. Lee, Jacob, Timmy, Travis,Rodrigo, Anthony’s parents, brothers and sisters, Trevors family and Henry's family and many others were now standing by the docks, overlooking New Jersey. Henry and Trevor were now facing everyone.

“Henry and I are beyond grateful for everyone attending our magical day today. We also wanted to inform everyone, we are expecting twins in about 5 months! A boy and a girl! The girl will be named after Henry’s late mother.” Trevor said, while choking up and trying to get the words out of his mouth.

“Anthony and the whole Caruso family, we are wondering if we could have the honor of naming our son Thomas, after my hero, my savior. I wouldn’t be here without the selfishness act he did! I will never forget what he did, HE IS MY HERO!” Trevor went on to say, as Anthony and his family all went to hug Trevor, as the crowd wept.

“Let's salute Thomas Alexander Caruso! Our hero! We miss you every day and hope to keep your legacy alive!” Henry said, as he and Anthony hugged and cried.

While Tommy did save Trevors life that night at the hospital, unfortunately something went wrong on his end and Tommy would pass away three days later. Anthony was holding his son, who he named after his brother as well, he would look out into the bright blue skies and thank his brother for everything. As the group was helding back to the reception, both Anthony and Henry decided to stay a little longer.

“Tommy was the king of Staten Island, then became the black sheep, however in the end, he became a hero. You always looked up to Tommy and never gave up on him, even when everyone wrote him off! I miss him every day!” Henry said, while crying into his best friend's shoulders.

“He made A LOT of mistakes, but in the end, everyone saw him as I always saw him, a hero! I miss you big brother!” Anthony said.

The two best friends saluted the sky and walked back to the reception, to celebrate not only a new marriage, but someone who was dear to their hearts.
Tommy really was the black sheep of the family. BJ in the bathroom while his wife is recovering from a tough pregnancy. I am not sure why Tommy and Lex had a falling out and stopped talking, but the really big thing is why have Lee catch Travis and Tommy if nothing came of it? The supportive great older brother that I thought was being treated unfairly at the start of this story has forever proven that he has earned my dislike for him.

But truthfully this rollercoaster of a story has been a great read and I am looking forward to other stories!
 
Tommy really was the black sheep of the family. BJ in the bathroom while his wife is recovering from a tough pregnancy. I am not sure why Tommy and Lex had a falling out and stopped talking, but the really big thing is why have Lee catch Travis and Tommy if nothing came of it? The supportive great older brother that I thought was being treated unfairly at the start of this story has forever proven that he has earned my dislike for him.

But truthfully this rollercoaster of a story has been a great read and I am looking forward to other stories!
@ndamood4sum So I actually had in the story and then I removed it. Originally, Travis and Lee were in it together to get revenge after Tommy. Lee was there to take pictures and blackmail Tommy to expose him with the help of Travis. However, I removed it, as I simply wanted to end the story and just killed him off three days later after saving Trevor's life.

He died as Anthony always thought of him, his big brother he looked up to and a hero.

I also wanted to end the story, since I am working on a new one. Really trying to make it a good one, so all my focus is on it right now. I am not going to publish it until I complete the whole thing.
 
Definitely a good thing to wait until the whole thing is complete. I have done both, posting when I have written a story and posting as I write, and having it all ready to go was much better. Sometimes it isn't possible if your story is going to be a long one, but where possible I think it's a good idea.
 
@ndamood4sum So I actually had in the story and then I removed it. Originally, Travis and Lee were in it together to get revenge after Tommy. Lee was there to take pictures and blackmail Tommy to expose him with the help of Travis. However, I removed it, as I simply wanted to end the story and just killed him off three days later after saving Trevor's life.

He died as Anthony always thought of him, his big brother he looked up to and a hero.

I also wanted to end the story, since I am working on a new one. Really trying to make it a good one, so all my focus is on it right now. I am not going to publish it until I complete the whole thing.
I can understand and respect that but not everybody deserves to be remembered fondly if they've their actions are horrible. I'm sorry I have one question, why did Lex stop speaking to Tommy? Was it because Anthony stopped? I know you are working on another story, which I am looking forward to reading, but I didn't really understand that part. Thank you
 
Definitely a good thing to wait until the whole thing is complete. I have done both, posting when I have written a story and posting as I write, and having it all ready to go was much better. Sometimes it isn't possible if your story is going to be a long one, but where possible I think it's a good idea.
@Di_No Yea, my next door, I am not launching until its fully done. I have my friends reading it, to make sure its good or if I need to tweak anything.

The biggest mistake about this story, was the trip to Europe and fritters block for a while, which delayed new chapters being released.
 
Take all the time that you need. It's been nearly 2 years since I last posted something. My readers have probably given up on me by now.
 
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