omg, armchair critics, who cares if the author is British or says "bums", this is an EROTIC STORY and it's an engaging and imho well written piece of writing, whether fictional or not! As the previous poster said, can't we just be supportive and enjoy it? I certainly am!
 
After that wild night me and Jack chilled out over the weekend and just went to the gym a few times as we were quite nervous about if we’d be able to get in to the frat, the fact we managed to score two hot sophmores on our first night out would of definitely given us a nudge in the right direction we hoped.



On the Monday me and Jack officially started our lessons with the rest of the college, I studied Marketing and jack was studying psychology. The lessons weren’t as hard as I thought they were going to be but maybe that was because it was only the very start of the course.

After several days went by me and Jack both received a letter to our dorm, before I even opened the letter I saw the stamp of Alpha Delta Phi printed on the outside, my heart was racing as I picked it up, I handed one letter to Jack, “fuck” he said nervously as he ripped it open, we opened our letters and they both read ‘We, the brothers of Alpha Delta Phi Fraternity, Cordially extend an invitation to join our brotherhood.’ I smile covered my face and me and Jack instantly looked at each other “lets fucking go” Jack exclaims before dapping me up, “what a relief” I say to Jack before hugging him.

After we stop celebrating I turn over the card and it reads ‘9:30pm 30th of September 2020 Alpha delta phi house’, “shit that’s only in an hour” Jack says to me startled, it takes us about 25 minutes to get their, so we start getting ready straight away. We both hop in the shower one after the other and quickly get dressed in something more appropriate.

At 9:30 on the dot we arrived at the frat house, Jack knocked. When the door opened and we entered most of the lights where off and a few candles were lit, two frat members placed a sack over are head so we couldn’t see and were guided in to the corner of the room, after a few minutes passed the sacks were taken off our heads, I looked around and saw 8 other boys lined up next to me and Jack and standing infront of us were the 5 main leaders of the frat, the leader being Mason, who shouted “repeat after me” , he then proceeded to tell us the fraternity oath we had to repeat and as it was in 2020 I cant remember it too well but it went something like, “I promise to uphold the ideals and principles of Alpha Delta Phi, and to show loyalty to my fellow brothers of Alpha delta phi, and I swear secrecy regarding the handshake and initiation rituals” , it went on a lot longer than that but that was basically the jist of things.

After we sweared the oath of allegiance the lights came back on and everyone cheered for us. Me and Jack smiled at each other, as this was the day we became official frat brothers. Everyone started to mingle and cheer in excitement as we got to know the other freshman who were also accepted but this was quickly silenced when Mason the frat leader shouted “NOW, join us in the dining room for our first official, let’s say just say, get to know ya game” Mason said smirking, the other freshman looked at each other with a worried look on their face, whilst the frat leaders just smiled at each other. As we walked in to the dining room there was nothing but a game of beer bong set up.

Oh so not as bad as I thought, I said to my self, but boy was I wrong, “now, I will pick 2 names out of this cup, and those two will go head to head with a game of beer pong” , everyone cheered when he said this as this was harmless untill he interrupted again, “sorry, I forgot to mention, each time a ball goes in to a cup the person has to remove a piece of clothing, and the loser will have to streak around the block completely naked!” , me and jacks eyes widened with the rest of the freshman when we heard this, and the frat boys burst out laughing.

As we all lined up my heart was racing but since there was 10 of us here , I knew statistically it was quite unlikely that my name woul- “ADAM!” Mason shouted out.

“Fuck” my heart sank, I looked at Jack with a worried look but he gave me a nod signalling I would be fine, “COREY!” Was the second name that was shouted out, we both stepped forward absolutely shitting it.

Corey was a little taller than me at about 6ft 2” , he was tanned , had a handsome face and was blonde, he was quite attractive and then I looked at all the boys and realised the frat leaders had picked a quite attractive bunch of guys, but I didnt think much of it.

As we walked over to the table Corey tapped me on the shoulder “best of luck to you”, he said politely, I nodded at him and Mason chucked me the ping pong ball, I threw it and missed straight away, “fuck” , I heard some sniggers from the crowd , Corey threw the ball, splash! It went in “Yessss” Corey cheered, “fuck” I repeated as I remove my shoes which made everyone cheer again, I down the drink and quickly realise this is not beer, this is straight vodkas, I instantly cough , but still finish off the drink as I don’t want to be seen as a pussy, “oh Yh forgot to mention the beer has been replaced with a selection of spirits and surprises” Mason says smirking.

Makikg everyone laugh.my turn again, it hits the rim of the cup, my heart starts to race.

Corey’s go, in again, I grab the cup down it, and cough once again this time it tastes like Sambuca which I hate, I then remove my t shirt so I am now shirtless, “Oi Oi” comes from the crowd as a I reveal my chest and abs. “Come on focus Adam “ Jack shouts at me. I lock in , and splash , I finally get it in , “fuck yeah” I cheer out as Corey grabs a cup and downs it also followed by a choking sound, he removes his shoes aswell.

The game goes on and we both seem to be on a roll, Corey gets it in again and I remove my socks as apparently they both count as one, and so does Cory, I get it in again, and Corey removes his t shirt revealing a tanned body with slightly more prominent abs and muscles than me, a wolf whistle can be heard from the crowd as he does so, but then Corey gets it in again, and I am now left in my boxers, with one cup remaining. I need two score the next two drinks in a row to win, I say a little prayer in my head and shoot, splash , “COME ON!” I shout, Jack cheers from the crowd, and Corey proceed to undo the buckle of his jeans and removes them , leaving us both in our boxers, when Corey is abt to take his final, shot Mason comes over with two new cups and replaces the ones on the table, “now it’s a little more interesting” he says, leaving everyone confused. None the less Corey shoots and it hits the rim of the cup, thank god. My heart starts to race, I slowly aim, and then shoot, SPLASH! , “YESS FUCK YES!” I scream out over the moon, i instantly look at a worried Corey acrosss the table “I’m sorry bro” I murmur to him. “Take em off!” A frat boy shouts which is then followed by everyone chanting “TAKE THEM OFF!” Corey has no choice and he slowly peels his boxers down revealing a soft 5 inch dick, which he quickly covers with his hand. Everyone cheers again when he gets fully naked. “Now drink up” Mason shouts, Corey uses one hand to grab the cup and the other to cover his dick and balls, Corey downs the cup and soon as it hits his tongue he spits it out “argh! What the fuck is that!” He shouts , Mason and the other frat boys burst out laughing, “you my dear friend Corey have just tried the cum of my good friend Lucas here”, everyone either gasps or laughs, Corey spits again on the floor “fuck sake that’s disgusting” he shouts but still plays it off as a funny thing and chucks the cup at the boys in the crowd makikg everyone scream and laugh running away from it. “Now for your forfeit Corey, you need to run around the block once as quick as you want, but with your hands tied behind your back!” Mason exclaims, making everyone laugh, Corey doesn’t look to pleased but like a champ he walks towards the front door , he removes his hands from his dick and places them behind his back revealing it to everyone, as it hangs down infront of him, he didn’t have a small dick soft so it was not too much to worry about for him, Lucas tied up his hands and Corey began to sprint, Eveyone went outside to chear him on, as it was night time you couldn’t see to far in the distant you could just make out his bum and naked body running as fast as he could, after about 4 minutes, Corey returned from the other side of the street running as fast as he could making his dick slap against his body as he did so, he came back fully out of breathe, everyone cheers him on as he arrvied back at the house, and Lucas untied him, where he then waisted no time grabbing his clothes and putting them back on. Corey was rewarded with just a corona bottle, and a cigarette. Which he seemed to be pleased with. Eveyone stayed for a bit drinking and laughing abt what had just happened, Corey seemed to be a good sport abt it and didn’t take it personally which was all good.

This was interrupted by Mason once again, “Thankyou my fellow brothers for joining us tonight but we are only just beginning pledge week, so please be on the look out for your next letter , for our next official group initiation, which wall involve every single one of you, jack looked at me

“Fuck ”.
This can't be real 😭
 
omg, armchair critics, who cares if the author is British or says "bums", this is an EROTIC STORY and it's an engaging and imho well written piece of writing, whether fictional or not! As the previous poster said, can't we just be supportive and enjoy it? I certainly am!

Yes it's a story but part of the author posting it here is to get feedback, develop the story further and enhance his skills.

It is a well written story, but there are some things the author should consider.

Trying to pass it off as yourself and a true story is strange. You say that you, Adam, are from New York, but you are clearly British (ie. writing, phrasing, and character names). Also NCAA football programs like Florida States are completely different than you described. You dont just signup and tryout, you are typically recruited to tryout. Walk-on tryouts are the school year before, in January at FSU (some schools early spring), and you tryout while still in High School. Not to mention, it is nearly impossible to pledge a frat as a D1 football player, and you cant do it in the same season/year. Mike Norvell would never allow it. D1 athletes have no problem getting naked in front of each other and their roommates as well. And the frat dynamics and depictions of hazing are dated.

This comment doesn't feel like being from an "armchair critic". It's constructive criticism for the author to develop his writing skills. It makes some valid points that should be welcomed.

That said, I enjoy the story too... Keep it going 👍🏼
 
Can you all stfu before he doesn’t continue it 😭
EXACTLY!!!! All the grammar/amateur Story Editors on here, it's a miracle anyone contributes their creativity!!! PLEASE continue your story OP, many of us are hanging out eagerly for your next chapter!
 
A few days went by since our last initiation with the football team, me and Jack went to the bar that Night with our fake ID’s, we ended up making out with a few girls but none of us went home with anyone.

We decided to just chill out with drinking for a few days as we’ve been non stop drinking for the past couple weeks.

I had a couple college classes in the afternoon and decided to go out for lunch with some of my class mates. When I came back it was around 7pm as I walked in jack was smiling. “What you so happy about” u asked him. “Well you know how it’s my birthday in two days? Look what my friend from back home sent me” Jack said to me smiling, he reached in to his pocket and pulled out a massive bag full of weed. My eyes lit up, i hadn’t smoked weed in several months. “What the fuck no way, I didn’t even know you smoked Jack” I replied excitedly, “not everyday but i definitely do like to smoke on an occasion” he said back to me. “Me too should we smoke tonight” I asked , “well obviously we’re gonna fucking smoke tonight” Jack replied sarcastically.

When it got to around 9pm Jack moved his tv in to the centre of the room and we both climbed on to his bed and put on Netflix while Jack started to roll us a joint. I switched on Pineapple Express as I thought it was probably the most fitting for the evening of getting high. Jack lit up the joint and passed it to me “fucking hell I’ve missed this” I said to Jack, “me too bro I’m glad we’re doing this tonight instead of going out drinking again” he replied. After even 3 pulls of the joint I was starting to feel a little high, “fuck me this is quite strong” I said passing the joint back to Jack coughing. Jack laughed, “yeah I know my friend is at college in La so he sent me a care package from one of the dispensaries down there” Jack said to me.

Me and Jack could not stop laughing at any random thing that happened in the film, we had the giggles for quite a bit which I always loved. Both of our eyes were completely blood shoot by now we were both high as a kite.

Once the movie came to an end we didn’t know what to put on and we ended up circling the Netflix home page for the next half an hour endlessly going back in circles. “Alright fuck this I know what we will both like to watch” Jack said smiling. “What is it?” I asked , Jack smirked , “just watch it and see if you like it” he replied. Jack connected his phone to the tv and it started to play, the screen went black and Jack started to giggle to him self, then the title appeared on the screen and I figured out why he found it so funny. The title read, “The Boobygaurd” and Jack instantly burst out laughing “fucking hell you put on a porno” I said to him laughing. Jack was still laughing to him self , “I’m sorry I didn’t know what else to put on I knew we would both like this, I’ll turn it off” he said back hysterically laughing trying to find the remote, “no don’t let’s watch it” I said giggling. As the porn movie played, me and Jack let out a few giggles as the rubbish acting played out, then the sexy blonde entered, making both of our eyes widen, “fuck me she’s so hot” Jack said, “she’s a hotty alright” I replied, the movie carried on to play, then this is when the movie took the turn which we all knew was comming, the blonde woman in the film started to undress, she took her top off and her boobs came out, me and Jack didn’t say anything to each other but we just carried on watching, the woman started to undo the man’s trousers, she took his dick out and began sucking it. Me and Jack just laid back and watched her suck a mans dick, it went on and on, me and Jack still didn’t say a word.

Then since Jack was right next to me I saw his hand wonder over to his crotch and he placed his hand over it, which i knew he was trying to cover an obvious hard on. I also felt the same and I could feel my cock getting harder and harder in my pants. I put my hand down and tried to reorganise, when I did so Jack looked at me “have you got a hard on aswell?” He asked me giggling, I laughed and said “yh bro I do I cant help it” I replied. “Me neither” Jack said , and we both turned back to the film. Jack moved his hand away from his joggers and I saw a massive bulge in his grey tracksuits. He then took his hand up and slipped it in to his boxers . None of us said anything to each other. I heard a rustle a couple of times from his hand in his boxers. Was he about to jerk off? I thought to me self. We were both rock hard and sitting right next to each other watching porn. Jack then stood up instantly, “sorry I cant take this” he said standing up with a boner poking through his tracksuits and he walked to the bathroom “I need to jerk off” he said as he opened the bathroom door and closed it.

I took this time aswell to do what ever Jack was doing in their and I quickly unzipped my pants and took my dick out, I stared to jerk off to the porn, I heard some rustling from the bathroom so decided to be quick this time. I went really quick and then came all over my chest, I quickly stood up and wiped my self clean and pulled my pants and boxers back up. Then the bathroom door unlocked, Jack came out. “Sorry about that I needed to unleash” he said to me walking back in. “Bro I just did the same” I replied to him letting out a giggle. Jack laughed, “you just jerked off aswell?” He asked . “Yh bro did a quick one as soon as you left” I replied , “did you atleast go to your bed?” He asked , then I realised fuck, I didn’t even think about going to my bed “shit, sorry I just didn’t even think that I was still on your bed” I replied nervously. Jack laughed “bro you jerked off on my bed what the fuck” Jack said laughing but still a little annoyed. “I’m sorry bro I didn’t mean to I didn’t even think abo-“ . “Don’t worry I was joking it’s fine” he said cutting me off, Jack laughed. “Just know I’m gonna get you back one day” he added . I laughed not knowing what he meant by that.
 
Two days after our little adventure of getting high and watching a porn movie it was Jacks birthday. When i woke up I went to brush my teeth, then I walked out ad the bathroom still in my boxers and Jack was still sleeping, so I thought it would be a good chance to give him a bday surprise, I jumped on to his bed and started to shake him “wake up it’s your birthday” I said shouting “it’s your birthday!” “Happy birthday jack” I shouted again, a tired Jack began to wake up, “fucking hell” he murmured as I was shaking him. “It’s your birthday!” I shouted it again , “yeah I gathered that” Jack said wiping his eyes, I got off Jack and went to my desk and picked up his present, and went back over to his bed “I got you a little gift” I said as I placed it on his cover, Jack smiled as soon S I handed it to him, “no way you didn’t have to do this Adam” he said smiling at the gift , “just shut the fuck up and open it” I said back laughing. Jack ripped it open, it was a card, and something fell out of it, Jack picked it up, his face and smiled dropped. Then his face lit it up with pure excitement “no fucking way” he whispered. It was two ticket to go see the Miami Dolphins play. Jack looked up at me smiling, he instantly threw his covers off and huggged me and began jumping up and down whilst grabbing on to me “you fucking beast, I love you, Thankyou bro Thankyou” he said not being able to contain his excitement. “It’s okay bro I’m glad you like it” , I said to him, “like it? Ru kidding me, no friend has ever got me something like that this before Thankyou so much” he said back to me still hugging me , “don’t worry about it” I said back to him again. Jack released me from his hug, and then just staired at the tickets smiling. I looked at him and then burst out laughing realising he had morning wood pitching a tent in his boxers, “Jack you might wanna sort that out” I said gesturing to his boxers. Jack looked down “oh shit” he said instantly covering it with his hands and turning around , as I continued to laugh . “It’s the morning I can’t help it” he said to me still turned around , “go have a shower and make sure your ready for tonight” I said to him, as he walked in to the bathroom with his hands still covering his underwear.

I giggled to my self watching this sight. Jack walked in and then cheered as he closed the door still excited from the present I gave him.



As the sky got darker and the evening came, it was around 9pm and Jack was clearly buzzing to go out and drink for his birthday. Jack came out of the showering with a towel around his waist and water dripping down his muscles he danced as he put on his boxers under his towel and got ready for the night. “Okay so this is the plan, we gonna go to Kelly’s Bar and then the Irish bar O’brians after as mason said they always let people in with out ID’s and plus we have our fakes so it should be fine” .

I smiled at Jack as I put my jumper on “sounds like a plan” I said winking at him, “you better get lucky tonight since it’s your birthday” I added , “I’m gonna make sure of it” he replied smiling.



Me and Jack met up with the other boys, a few from the frat like hunter and Corey, there was a couple of jacks class mates and a few from the football team. It was a solid group. As we made it in to the first bar, everyone got in and served with out being ID’d which was a success, Jack was getting bought drinks left right and centre which he loved and was clearly already getting drunk.

We all did green tea shots together, then we all did tequila shots. They had some good music playing at the bar, so we all grabbed a corona and started to dance, the bar was filling up and before I even knew it, Jack was already dancing with a girl. Jack smiled at me and I winked back at him as he put his hands on the hips of the girl and then moved it on to her ass, he then went in and started to make out with her, the other boys cheered as he did so. Me and the other boys tried our luck with the other girls , Corey was turned down by one but hunter managed to make out with one. After a few more hours Jack was making out with girl after girl, a few of us told us pointed at Jack and told it was his birthday and they replied “the hot one?” , and we nodded, the girls were loving Jack tonight and it looked like Jack was loving it too.



We all decided to move on to the Irish bar next and our group was now considerably bigger there was atleast 20 of us now with a big mixture of girls and boys.

They had live music at the next place which everyone loved, the girls were very drunk and so was Jack, his confidence was through the roof, he was chatting to any girl who showed him any sort of attention. Mason the frat leader decided to join us, and we were all very drunk at this point, being a frat leader was like being a little celebrity around here, mason was also a magnet for the ladies, every time I’d look up Jack and mason would be making out with a different girl. Then it was my turn, I started to talk to this girl I just met and it only took about 10 seconds before I was Making out with her, I heard some cheers in the background as I got my first one of the night but I just locked in for the kiss and didn’t let them interrupt me. I tried to hopefully get her to come home from me but she was also with a big group of girls and didn’t want to leave them which sucked for me.

As it got to about 2am all the boys where going home one by one, untill it was just me Jack and hunter and a few of the girls we met. Jack had a girl who he was linking arms with, “I’m gonna head” said hunter, and then it was just the three of us, I didn’t want to stay and be a third wheel, so I was gonna call an Uber , but Jack said “I just called us an Uber” which wasn’t good for me because I didn’t wanna stay with them while they hooked up, “this is Sophia, she’s gonna come to back to our room” , Jack said smiling, I introduced my self to Sophia but told Jack “I’m just gonna call an Uber my self and ask to stay at hunters on the floor then” I replied to him, Jack looked at me confused “don’t be silly just get in the Uber and we can make it work some how” he replied adamantly. I was not sure how this was gonna work, maybe I’d just have to wait outside the room for about an hour for her to leave, or maybe I’d just wonder the streets for a while who knows. As we got in the Uber jack and Sophia where giggling like a couple of horny teenagers not being able to keep theirs hands off each other. Sophia sat in the middle of me and Jack , and before the car even had the chance to drive Jack started to make out with her again, I just staired out the window and pretended not to hear or notice it which wasn’t helped by the constant sounds of lips smacking together, and in the corner of my eye I saw Jack moving his hand up her leg, I just went on my phone to ignore it. Jack then started to whisper with her and I couldn’t quite make out what they where saying, then I felt a touch on my leg, it was Sophia, I looked at them , “what are you doing” I murmured, “just go along with it” Jack said to me , I was really confused but I was also very drunk so I did. Sophias hand ran up my leg and then she kissed me, on my neck and then my cheek and then my lips, I looked over to Jack and he looked at me and winked and smiled. Then started to kiss Sophia’s neck, she squeezes my leg tighter and then we arrived at our dorms.

We all giggled and got out the car, Jack very drunkenly picked up Sophia and carried her, we walked to our dorm and I unlocked it not knowing what was going to happen. AS the door closed behind us Jack still carrying Sophia chucked her on to his bed and started to make out with her. I just stood by the door not knowing what to do, do I leave? Do I join? And then Jack stopped kissing her , and looked over at me “this is a two man job I need some help” he said smiling at me, I smiled back and walked over , Sophia smiled at both of us she stood up and kissed me then started to make out with me , as she did she broke the kiss by removing my t shirt and revealing my abs, she then turned to Jack and took his top off revealing a rock hard six pack. She smiled at both of our bodies and placed a hand on either of our abs and used her finger to trail along the lines of our six packs. “Undress me” she said seductively so me and Jack went in and quickly threw her top off , we both went to undo her bra and our hands touched, Jack quickly retreated his hand and I ended up pulling her bra off revealing her boobs, Jack kissed her neck and I started to make out with the other side of her neck, she let out a soft moan and Jack then picked her up by her waist and threw her on to the bed, Jack crawled over to her and I removed her pants, and then her underwear revealing her wet pussy, I ran my fingers along it and then started to play with her clit , she grabbed my hair and pulled me towards it and I began to lick it making her moan, whilst I was eating her out I heard the sounds of Jack belt buckle, I looked up and she was removing his belt, he then slipped off his jeans and placed his big bulge over her face for her to do the rest of the work, she put her fingers in the waistband of his boxers and pulled it down revealing a massive and rock hard 9 inch dick , it sprung out and she grabbed it and started to lick it “ugh ugh” Jack let out a couple moans, as she tried to fit it in her mouth, I was getting very horny so I stopped eating her out and I stood up up and took my jeans off and then my boxers makikg my hard dick pop out, they both looked over to me smiling as I did so looking at me then down at my dick, I climbed over on the bed not knowing how close I should get to Jack so it’s not wierd, but Sophia’ grabbed my dick and pulled me closer , she took it in her mouth, ugh I moaned, she then licked jacks and then mine , she alternated between sucking both of our dicks. One after the other, me and Jack just looked down at our dicks as she worshipped them, “turn over” Jack said to Sophia , she took my dick out of her mouth and turned her body over, Jack walked behind her and bent her over her bed. I went to her mouth side and he began to fuck her in doggy, he went in slow then began to pound her, his abs crashed in to her bum , I put my dick in to her mouth as she sucked it, every time Jack would thrust to her she would gag on my dick. I looked up at Jack and we made eye contact for a few seconds in pleasure then he looked back down at Sophia, “your turn Adam” he said to me as he took his dick out of her pussy, both of us naked, walked by each other trying to not hit our dicks in to one another switched positions, I began to put my dick in to Sophia and fuck her and fuck her, I didn’t bother starting slow and just rapidly fucked her, she was so wet, she moaned every time I crashed in to her, I looked up at Jack and he looked at me and smiled, I then did a big thrust in to her making her moan , but as her mouth was on jacks dick she would go down further makikg him moan again, I started to do it harder and harder, something about making her mouth push on to jacks Dick and make him moan wierdly turned him on. Being quite drunk I pushed her back down and then I used my hand to push her head on to jacks dick , Jack looked up at me and moaned when I did this, but then the pleasure got too much for me aswell , “fuck I’m cumming I’m cumming” I said , and I tok my dick out of her pussy and my cum sprayed all over her back, spurt after spurt it squirted out, Jack looked at my dick as the cum sprayed all over Sophia’s back, it looked like the pleasure was getting too much for Jack Aswell as he screws up his face and opened his mouth , “I’m gonna cum” he said and took his dick out of her mouth and shot his loud all over her mouth and hair and even some on her back aswell, I looked at his dick as it sprayed out all his juices, we both tried to catch our breathe and the pleasure was so nice we just enjoyed the moment , as we both stood opposite each other sweating, completely naked with sweat running down our abs, and our rock hard dicks still throbbbing with cum dribbling out of them with a fit girl in between us, we both crashed next to Sophia naked and sat up , Jack began to giggle and then so did I , he looked at Sophia then at me and smiled.
 
I was waiting for someone else to say it…New York and New Jersey’ians wouldn’t say “mate” and “bum” and “whilst” lol
They often use the word bum to mean arse on Family Guy, and that's American. 😊
 
Two days after our little adventure of getting high and watching a porn movie it was Jacks birthday. When i woke up I went to brush my teeth, then I walked out ad the bathroom still in my boxers and Jack was still sleeping, so I thought it would be a good chance to give him a bday surprise, I jumped on to his bed and started to shake him “wake up it’s your birthday” I said shouting “it’s your birthday!” “Happy birthday jack” I shouted again, a tired Jack began to wake up, “fucking hell” he murmured as I was shaking him. “It’s your birthday!” I shouted it again , “yeah I gathered that” Jack said wiping his eyes, I got off Jack and went to my desk and picked up his present, and went back over to his bed “I got you a little gift” I said as I placed it on his cover, Jack smiled as soon S I handed it to him, “no way you didn’t have to do this Adam” he said smiling at the gift , “just shut the fuck up and open it” I said back laughing. Jack ripped it open, it was a card, and something fell out of it, Jack picked it up, his face and smiled dropped. Then his face lit it up with pure excitement “no fucking way” he whispered. It was two ticket to go see the Miami Dolphins play. Jack looked up at me smiling, he instantly threw his covers off and huggged me and began jumping up and down whilst grabbing on to me “you fucking beast, I love you, Thankyou bro Thankyou” he said not being able to contain his excitement. “It’s okay bro I’m glad you like it” , I said to him, “like it? Ru kidding me, no friend has ever got me something like that this before Thankyou so much” he said back to me still hugging me , “don’t worry about it” I said back to him again. Jack released me from his hug, and then just staired at the tickets smiling. I looked at him and then burst out laughing realising he had morning wood pitching a tent in his boxers, “Jack you might wanna sort that out” I said gesturing to his boxers. Jack looked down “oh shit” he said instantly covering it with his hands and turning around , as I continued to laugh . “It’s the morning I can’t help it” he said to me still turned around , “go have a shower and make sure your ready for tonight” I said to him, as he walked in to the bathroom with his hands still covering his underwear.

I giggled to my self watching this sight. Jack walked in and then cheered as he closed the door still excited from the present I gave him.



As the sky got darker and the evening came, it was around 9pm and Jack was clearly buzzing to go out and drink for his birthday. Jack came out of the showering with a towel around his waist and water dripping down his muscles he danced as he put on his boxers under his towel and got ready for the night. “Okay so this is the plan, we gonna go to Kelly’s Bar and then the Irish bar O’brians after as mason said they always let people in with out ID’s and plus we have our fakes so it should be fine” .

I smiled at Jack as I put my jumper on “sounds like a plan” I said winking at him, “you better get lucky tonight since it’s your birthday” I added , “I’m gonna make sure of it” he replied smiling.



Me and Jack met up with the other boys, a few from the frat like hunter and Corey, there was a couple of jacks class mates and a few from the football team. It was a solid group. As we made it in to the first bar, everyone got in and served with out being ID’d which was a success, Jack was getting bought drinks left right and centre which he loved and was clearly already getting drunk.

We all did green tea shots together, then we all did tequila shots. They had some good music playing at the bar, so we all grabbed a corona and started to dance, the bar was filling up and before I even knew it, Jack was already dancing with a girl. Jack smiled at me and I winked back at him as he put his hands on the hips of the girl and then moved it on to her ass, he then went in and started to make out with her, the other boys cheered as he did so. Me and the other boys tried our luck with the other girls , Corey was turned down by one but hunter managed to make out with one. After a few more hours Jack was making out with girl after girl, a few of us told us pointed at Jack and told it was his birthday and they replied “the hot one?” , and we nodded, the girls were loving Jack tonight and it looked like Jack was loving it too.



We all decided to move on to the Irish bar next and our group was now considerably bigger there was atleast 20 of us now with a big mixture of girls and boys.

They had live music at the next place which everyone loved, the girls were very drunk and so was Jack, his confidence was through the roof, he was chatting to any girl who showed him any sort of attention. Mason the frat leader decided to join us, and we were all very drunk at this point, being a frat leader was like being a little celebrity around here, mason was also a magnet for the ladies, every time I’d look up Jack and mason would be making out with a different girl. Then it was my turn, I started to talk to this girl I just met and it only took about 10 seconds before I was Making out with her, I heard some cheers in the background as I got my first one of the night but I just locked in for the kiss and didn’t let them interrupt me. I tried to hopefully get her to come home from me but she was also with a big group of girls and didn’t want to leave them which sucked for me.

As it got to about 2am all the boys where going home one by one, untill it was just me Jack and hunter and a few of the girls we met. Jack had a girl who he was linking arms with, “I’m gonna head” said hunter, and then it was just the three of us, I didn’t want to stay and be a third wheel, so I was gonna call an Uber , but Jack said “I just called us an Uber” which wasn’t good for me because I didn’t wanna stay with them while they hooked up, “this is Sophia, she’s gonna come to back to our room” , Jack said smiling, I introduced my self to Sophia but told Jack “I’m just gonna call an Uber my self and ask to stay at hunters on the floor then” I replied to him, Jack looked at me confused “don’t be silly just get in the Uber and we can make it work some how” he replied adamantly. I was not sure how this was gonna work, maybe I’d just have to wait outside the room for about an hour for her to leave, or maybe I’d just wonder the streets for a while who knows. As we got in the Uber jack and Sophia where giggling like a couple of horny teenagers not being able to keep theirs hands off each other. Sophia sat in the middle of me and Jack , and before the car even had the chance to drive Jack started to make out with her again, I just staired out the window and pretended not to hear or notice it which wasn’t helped by the constant sounds of lips smacking together, and in the corner of my eye I saw Jack moving his hand up her leg, I just went on my phone to ignore it. Jack then started to whisper with her and I couldn’t quite make out what they where saying, then I felt a touch on my leg, it was Sophia, I looked at them , “what are you doing” I murmured, “just go along with it” Jack said to me , I was really confused but I was also very drunk so I did. Sophias hand ran up my leg and then she kissed me, on my neck and then my cheek and then my lips, I looked over to Jack and he looked at me and winked and smiled. Then started to kiss Sophia’s neck, she squeezes my leg tighter and then we arrived at our dorms.

We all giggled and got out the car, Jack very drunkenly picked up Sophia and carried her, we walked to our dorm and I unlocked it not knowing what was going to happen. AS the door closed behind us Jack still carrying Sophia chucked her on to his bed and started to make out with her. I just stood by the door not knowing what to do, do I leave? Do I join? And then Jack stopped kissing her , and looked over at me “this is a two man job I need some help” he said smiling at me, I smiled back and walked over , Sophia smiled at both of us she stood up and kissed me then started to make out with me , as she did she broke the kiss by removing my t shirt and revealing my abs, she then turned to Jack and took his top off revealing a rock hard six pack. She smiled at both of our bodies and placed a hand on either of our abs and used her finger to trail along the lines of our six packs. “Undress me” she said seductively so me and Jack went in and quickly threw her top off , we both went to undo her bra and our hands touched, Jack quickly retreated his hand and I ended up pulling her bra off revealing her boobs, Jack kissed her neck and I started to make out with the other side of her neck, she let out a soft moan and Jack then picked her up by her waist and threw her on to the bed, Jack crawled over to her and I removed her pants, and then her underwear revealing her wet pussy, I ran my fingers along it and then started to play with her clit , she grabbed my hair and pulled me towards it and I began to lick it making her moan, whilst I was eating her out I heard the sounds of Jack belt buckle, I looked up and she was removing his belt, he then slipped off his jeans and placed his big bulge over her face for her to do the rest of the work, she put her fingers in the waistband of his boxers and pulled it down revealing a massive and rock hard 9 inch dick , it sprung out and she grabbed it and started to lick it “ugh ugh” Jack let out a couple moans, as she tried to fit it in her mouth, I was getting very horny so I stopped eating her out and I stood up up and took my jeans off and then my boxers makikg my hard dick pop out, they both looked over to me smiling as I did so looking at me then down at my dick, I climbed over on the bed not knowing how close I should get to Jack so it’s not wierd, but Sophia’ grabbed my dick and pulled me closer , she took it in her mouth, ugh I moaned, she then licked jacks and then mine , she alternated between sucking both of our dicks. One after the other, me and Jack just looked down at our dicks as she worshipped them, “turn over” Jack said to Sophia , she took my dick out of her mouth and turned her body over, Jack walked behind her and bent her over her bed. I went to her mouth side and he began to fuck her in doggy, he went in slow then began to pound her, his abs crashed in to her bum , I put my dick in to her mouth as she sucked it, every time Jack would thrust to her she would gag on my dick. I looked up at Jack and we made eye contact for a few seconds in pleasure then he looked back down at Sophia, “your turn Adam” he said to me as he took his dick out of her pussy, both of us naked, walked by each other trying to not hit our dicks in to one another switched positions, I began to put my dick in to Sophia and fuck her and fuck her, I didn’t bother starting slow and just rapidly fucked her, she was so wet, she moaned every time I crashed in to her, I looked up at Jack and he looked at me and smiled, I then did a big thrust in to her making her moan , but as her mouth was on jacks dick she would go down further makikg him moan again, I started to do it harder and harder, something about making her mouth push on to jacks Dick and make him moan wierdly turned him on. Being quite drunk I pushed her back down and then I used my hand to push her head on to jacks dick , Jack looked up at me and moaned when I did this, but then the pleasure got too much for me aswell , “fuck I’m cumming I’m cumming” I said , and I tok my dick out of her pussy and my cum sprayed all over her back, spurt after spurt it squirted out, Jack looked at my dick as the cum sprayed all over Sophia’s back, it looked like the pleasure was getting too much for Jack Aswell as he screws up his face and opened his mouth , “I’m gonna cum” he said and took his dick out of her mouth and shot his loud all over her mouth and hair and even some on her back aswell, I looked at his dick as it sprayed out all his juices, we both tried to catch our breathe and the pleasure was so nice we just enjoyed the moment , as we both stood opposite each other sweating, completely naked with sweat running down our abs, and our rock hard dicks still throbbbing with cum dribbling out of them with a fit girl in between us, we both crashed next to Sophia naked and sat up , Jack began to giggle and then so did I , he looked at Sophia then at me and smiled.
Did Sophia cum too?
 
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I woke up in the middle of the night quite confused abt where I was, I looked around and realised I was still in jacks bed, I was on the end still completely naked, next to me was Sophia then Jack at the other end all completely naked and fast asleep. I wiped my eyes and slowly got up to check my phone it was 5am, I carefully put my boxers back on so I didn’t disturb them and got back in to my own bed so it wasn’t as awkward when we woke up in the morning.

I rested my eyes and tried to go back to sleep for a little while longer.



I was awoken a few hours later to the sound of my alarm at 10am, I completely forgot I had set it. As I wanted to get up early today to study for my test tomorrow, I wiped my eyes and looked over to jacks bed, Sophia was gone, she must of left an hour or two ago with out saying anything. Jack was still naked lying on top of his bed.



My alarm was still beeping away which made Jack slowly start to wake up, Jack let out a morning tired groan, I switched off my alarm, but Jack was awake now, he rubbed his eyes.

“You alright bro” I said to a tired Jack. Jack groaned again probably experiencing the hangover of his life right now, “fucking hell” he murmured as he began to sit up, jacks eyes widened a little as he realised he was still naked, “fuck where are my clothes” he said , as he quickly tried to get under his blanket. This made me laugh, “their all over the floor bro” I said back to him, Jack looked around the room, “oh Yh I forgot about our little adventure last night with whatever her name was” he said giggling to him self. “Sophia” I replied correcting him, “oh Yh Sophia, she was a horny one, was that your first threesome?” Jack turned to me and asked. “Yh it was for me, was it yours” I asked back, “No I’ve had two threesomes before at the end of high school but they where both with 2 girls and me, this was my thirst threesome with another boy tho” Jack said letting out a snigger of laughter so things weren’t as awkward. This made me laugh aswell, “did u enjoy it?” He added, Jack looked at me for a second untill I answered “well I came on her so I guess I did yeah, did you?” I asked back, “Yh it was definitely a pleasurable first for me” Jack replied trying not to laugh. “What do you say we go back to that bar tonight?” Jack asked me. “I cant tell if you’re being serious? No way am I going back tonight I’m hungover as fuck” I replied laughing, “of course I’m being serious that was so fun our hangovers will pass” Jack said trying to convince me. “not tonight bro I’ve gotta study I’ve got some early test bull shit their making everyone do. “Booooring” Jack shouted, Jack then went to stand up then stopped him self, “shit I just realised I’m still naked, can you pass me my boxers” he asked , “fine” I said and I got out of bed in my boxers, I went to the corner of the room and grabbed jacks boxers, “how the fuck did they get over here” I asked him laughing, “don’t ask me bro I haven’t got a clue” he said smiling, I chucked Jack his boxers, and when I did I realised they where a little wet “eww why are your boxers wet, did u pee your pants or something” I asked him wiping my hand on his sheets, Jack looked confused and looked at his boxers “shit that might not be piss” he said looking at me with a look of suprise , “what else would tha- “ I stopped mid sentence when I realised what that was , “eurgh thanks Jack I’ve just touched your pree cum” I said to him with a disgust look but also trying not to laugh, I went over and wiped it on jacks shoulder, “dont wipe it on me” he said laughing “fuck off it’s your cum you can have it back” I replied sniggering. “My bad” Jack added and we both started laughing.



Jack took his wet boxers under his covers and slipped them on, he took his cover off and headed to the bathroom, jacks hair was all messed up from his sleep , I looked at his toned muscular body for a split second then looked down at his boxers with an obvious wet patch where his bulge is, I looked away quickly and shook my head not sure why I was looking for so long.



After Jack had a shower I hopped in aswell, and we both dragged our selves to our classes very hungover. Some other people in my class were talking about going to the bar aswell tonight, but these where the type of people that didn’t have to study for a test and could still pass with flying colours but that was not what I was like unfortunately and plus even the thought of alcohol made my stomach turn.



I decided to get my self a healthy lunch and smoothie so my body would feel a bit better after last night and as soon I got back to my dorm I cracked open my text books and began studying.

But not even after 10 minutes had passed, Jack came back. Jack was carrying a case of coronas as he walked in “Adam please come out with me” he insisted, “Jack I can’t, not tonight” I said trying not not to think about how fun it would be. “Pleasssseeee, I’ll give you a blowjob and you your drinks all night” Jack said jokingly, I laughed when he said that, “that offer sounds tempting but I’m gonna have to decline” I said again, forcing my self to not be persuaded.

“Fine I guess I’ll go with hunter and Corey since your being mr boring” Jack said as he put his baseball cap on in the mirror, “do you have any condoms” jack asked me smirking, I burst out laughing, “yh I do bro too drawer by my bed” I said to him laughing, “always gotta be prepared” he Replied winking at me, Jack grabbed his case of coronas and headed out the door “see ya” .
 
After Jack left I finally got a little quiet and began to study, I hated studying it was soo boring, and I get very easily distracted.

I managed to some how cram in atleast an hour and a half of straight studying after Jack left and rewarded my self with some social media scrolling , as I was scrolling through social media a post on instagram came up from my ex, it was her in a bikini. I stared at it for 5 minutes, I slipped my hand in my boxers and felt my dick getting hard , I went to unzip my jeans but then I stopped my self “focus Adam” I said to my self. And I put my phone down and tried to study again. But every time I tried to study I’d get flashbacks to last night with Jack and Sophia, I kept getting mental images of my dick t in and out of her mouth and jacks six pack crashing in to her ass, I shook my head and tried not to think about it.

I played some calming music and got back to my text books.



3 hours had passed and I was on a roll so much so that I had conked out, and I was awoken to cheering and banging in the hall. I wiped my eyes and woke up, I must of fallen asleep mid study. I tried to get back on and study more but the sounds from the hall got louder, obviously quite a few people are getting back from their drunken nights out. Then I heard what it sounds like jacks voice shouting in the hall, I went to stand up and open the door but before I could even leave my desk, the dorm room swang open and Hunter and Jack came crashing in. Hunter had jack arm over his shoulders and he was trying to lift Jack up and keep him up right. “What the fuck” I said not knowing what was happening but after a few seconds I realised, Jack was obviously very drunk and hunter had taken him home. “He’s all yours now buddy” hunter said obviously a bit annoyed by jacks drunken state. Hunter threw Jack on to his bed and left the dorm as quick as he could. “Adam hey Adam hey” Jack said slurring his words. “You alright there bro, how was your night” I said to Jack trying to keep his flopping body up right, “I miffed you” Jack said drunkenly . “I missed you two bro” I said trying not to giggle at his drunken state.

I helped Jack take his shoes off, “you’re so nice man” he said when I took them off, “it’s okay bro” I replied. I walked back to my desk but I realised there was no way I was gonna be able to study with a drunk Jack in the room now. Jack stood up and started to take his belt off, “what r u doing” I asked , “it’s shower time” he said back. Jack took his belt off and then stepped out of his jeans, he was wearing white boxers. He then took of his top so was standing in his room in just his boxers, he stumbled towards his towel, and tried to walk in a straight line to the bathroom, but before he got to the door he said “I don’t need these in the shower” he said referring to his boxers, and he pulled his boxers down to his ankles and kicked them off “argh Jack I can see your fucking ass” I said laughing , Jack giggled and walked in to the bathroom naked.

I laughed and shook my head smiling at him in his dunken state. Jack was in the bathroom for about 10 minutes and then came out with a towel around his waist, he grabbed his phone and showed it to me “look no one is answering my calls” he said showing his unanswered calls to Sophia, Charlotte, Bella , Amy. “Jack it’s 2am that’s probably why, and plus why are you trying get ahold of all those girls” I asked. “Cos I’m horny and wanna fuck” Jack said sniggering to him self still standing in the middle of the room with his towel around his waist. “Just go to bed I’m sure you can see them tomorrow” I replied. “That’s not good enough, I am going to jerk off instead then” he said looking at me with a drunk face. “Jack you cant jerk off im right here, you shoulda done it in the shower” I replied back to him not sure if he was joking or not.

“Okay fine mr boring” he replied and sat on his bed still in his towel, Jack then went on his phone for a bit, then gestured me over , “come look at this” he said, not sure what I was going to see but I walked over and sat on his bed next to him, he showed me a video of this only fans girl undressing from a bikini, “she’s fucking hot” I replied, as soon as I saw that it made me think of the post my ex girlfriend made a little while ago and I instantly felt my self get a semi boner, I tried to control it since I was sat next to Jack in a towel and that would be wierd but it wasn’t helping. Jack then proceeded to scroll through her posts one after the other getting more saucy than the last, we sat next to each other watching her slowly getting undressed, normally I’d just go straight to the shower and jerk off over my ex girlfriend but the fact me and Jack were both watching it was for some wierd reason making it more interesting. Jack went to the next post and it was her sex tape, she was getting fucked in doggy, “fucking hell” Jack said as we both sat and watched her sex tape play out, as we watched I noticed a bulge in jacks towel started to form, and after about 5 seconds Jack moved his hand on top of it and began to squeeze it a bit, jacks phone was in his left hand and he was using his right hand to play with his bulge, I don’t know what came over me but when he started to do that, I moved my hand to my bulge in my jeans and started to play with mine. Jack looked over at my hands for a second and saw me doing the same and then looked back at the phone but didn’t say anything.

AS the video progressed Jack moved his hand away and he was now rock hard under his towel. His boner was trying to poke it way out of his towel, I now aswell felt my dick was rock hard, I readjusted my seat next to Jack and felt our arms touch but I moved it away so it wasn’t weird. Jack then slipped his hand under his towel “she’s so hot” he said as his hand went under his towel, he started to play with it under his towel, he began then to jerk his dick under his towel and I could see his hand and dick going up and down through the towel. I decided to do the same and tried to put my hand in my boxers but cos of the way I was sitting my belt was too tight, so I tried to unclip my belt slowly. Jack looked over at me as I un did my belt, he then looked back at the phone. I unzipped my zipper of my jeans and slipped my hand in my boxers and started to jerk my dick up and down makikg it rock hard, we both jerked under our towel and clothes for a few minutes before Jack said “fuck this towel” and he undid his towel with his right hand and his 9 inch dick sprung out at full attention. I was surprised when he did that as his dick was now right next to me in full view but I didn’t say anything. Jack carried on jerking his dick up and down fully naked now. I thought this was my turn to do the same thing, and work out saying anything I stood up and pulled my jeans down and then I paused for a moment thinking abt it but I said fuck it and pulled my boxers down making my hard dick pop out, I left my jeans and boxers around my ankles and sat back next to Jack, I saw Jack look over at my dick for a second but didn’t say anything and we both just continued to jerk off next to each other.

Jack would let out a heavy breathe once in a while and so would I but we both just kept our eyes fixated on the porn, I would occasionally look over to Jack jerking off and he would do the same, was this wierd? I thought to myself , I’ve never done anything like this and never did I think I ever would, I’ve always only been interested in girls, but then I thought it’s not really gay just jerking off next to your mate is it? Jack started to pick up the pace and I felt his elbow rubbing against mine occasionally as he picked up the pace, I did the same to catch up with him and then I heard jacks breading getting heavier and heavier “argh” he let out a little grunt. I could tell he was close to cumming, so I picked up the pace aswell letting out a grunt, Jack then leaned up “argh ugh argh” he murmured, Jack opened his mouth and closed his eyes as he started to orgasm, “ugh” he moaned again and I looked over and saw cum spraying out of his dick spurt after spurt landing all on his abs, he made a little puddle in his belly button and it started to dribble down and in to the crevices of his six pack. Jack laid their heavily breathing, then I felt my balls shrink and the pleasure got to much “ugh argh” I let out and I pulled my t shirt up and sprayed my dick on to my abs, the cum sprayed out of my dick spurting and throbbing as I came and it was a lot of cum, spraying all over my abs and even chest, a little moan came out and I closed my eyes to take in the pleasure. I let my breathing return to normal and opened my eyes, and we both lay next to each other covered in our cum and rock hard dicks resting flat on our stomachs, it felt like their was an awkward slicence for a few seconds, but then Jack nicely broke it as he burst out laughing, and then I laughed and we couldn’t stop laughing at the situation we were both in covered in our own cum. “Fucking hell we just jerked off next to each other” Jack said still laughing. “Yh I know I thought it would be awkward but it’s really not” I said to him giggling. “Yh I feel fine I could go again” Jack said jokingly. “Shotgun not getting the tissues” Jack quicky blurted out. “Fuck sake” I said laughing as I tried to stand my self up, the cum dribbled down on to my pubes as I stood up, and I held my t shirt still up so it didn’t get covered in cum, I waddled my feet towards the bathroom as my jeans and boxers were still around my ankles, Jack laughed from the bed as he saw me waddle over, I grabbed the tissues and when I hopped back over, Jack laughed at me hopping back to him, with my boxers around my ankles , cum dribbling down my abs, and my still hard dick springing up and down. I handed Jack some tissues and we both wiped the cum off our stomachs and chest, still giggling to our selves every once in a while. “What a way to end the evening” Jack said to my jokingly, “Yh when I said I was gonna study all night I didn’t think I was gonna end it with this” I said to Jack as I pulled my boxers and jeans over my semi hard dick. Jack just sniggered and he got up from his bed still naked and grabbed a pair of boxers from his draw and slipped them on.

Me and Jack hopped in to our separate beds and turned to light off, every like 5 seconds one of us would just burst out laughing at the fact we just jerked off next to each other. I just thought I hope it won’t be awkward in the morning because right now it’s not awkward but Jack was still quite drunk.