Do they have frats over there? This story isn't told by an American we don't some of these words like you do. Which makes the story sus, or EU or UK.
As far as I know, we don't have fraternities in the UK. But we do seem to be adopting a lot of US traditions such as Prom Night in recent years, so who knows.
 
maybe unpopular take but not liking that corey got involved.. it was special for adam n jack, becuz their so close.. unless it made them jealous and realize they dont wana do that wit another guy again..
I agree with your feelings about Corey barging in. Granted, it was hot! And maybe the fact that he went a little further than Adam and Jack had up to that point (i.e. up Adam's bum 😂), may persuade them to go further themselves... 🤞
 
Do they have frats over there? This story isn't told by an American we don't some of these words like you do. Which makes the story sus, or EU or UK.
Yes we do have frats. But not that concerned with coveting up nudity.
 
Very good story. As an European I didn’t realize that Americans seem to be so prude
As an American, I can tell you that this writer is not an American. The word choice indicates the UK or Australia maybe.
But Americans are very weird about being naked around each other, so that element of the story checks out.
As a guy in a fraternity, I can tell you this writer was never in a fraternity.
 
I can't wait for LPSG to rebuild their erotic stories forum with actual comment sections so I don't have to get notified whenever the language police or the authenticity investigators decide to start spamming
 
As an American, I can tell you that this writer is not an American. The word choice indicates the UK or Australia maybe.
But Americans are very weird about being naked around each other, so that element of the story checks out.
As a guy in a fraternity, I can tell you this writer was never in a fraternity.
Why? Why you feel the need to express this? You didn’t enjoy the story? You think a comment like this will provide inspiration for the author to continue a story that many of us have enjoyed and hope to follow as it develops. Just why…
 
I have very much enjoyed this story but as an American it does jump out at me obviously that it wasn't written by an American. Normally this wouldn't bother me as it's a fictional story and very hot but it's the fact that the author initially framed it as "a true story" that I think has motivated people to comment on it. I think it's perfectly valid to offer constructive critique as feedback to a story especially one posted on a forum like this, if the author didn't want any feedback they could post this on another platform like nifty that doesn't allow for comments and discussion.

To everyone aggressively responding to those comments instead of ignoring them or just saying "yeah but it's just a story", you're just making this a bigger deal than it otherwise would be!
 
I have very much enjoyed this story but as an American it does jump out at me obviously that it wasn't written by an American. Normally this wouldn't bother me as it's a fictional story and very hot but it's the fact that the author initially framed it as "a true story" that I think has motivated people to comment on it. I think it's perfectly valid to offer constructive critique as feedback to a story especially one posted on a forum like this, if the author didn't want any feedback they could post this on another platform like nifty that doesn't allow for comments and discussion.

To everyone aggressively responding to those comments instead of ignoring them or just saying "yeah but it's just a story", you're just making this a bigger deal than it otherwise would be!
Star Wars was framed as a true story: "long time ago in a galaxy far far away". Many fairytales have "happened a long time ago in a far away kingdom" or something at the beginning. It's just a small detail that is used for some reason.