Big Cock Big Law

[joeyd]

This was one terrific read. I was sorry it had to end. Perhaps someday you can revisit John in his future if your literary muse takes you there. Thanks for an interesting narrative.

 

[brodysseus]

In an alternative universe i’d have loved for Jason and John to be together

 

[davekcmo]

This was one terrific read. I was sorry it had to end. Perhaps someday you can revisit John in his future if your literary muse takes you there. Thanks for an interesting narrative.

Thanks! That's best compliment an author can receive. I enjoyed writing it, but it was going on and on, and I wanted it to feel finished. But when I started the story back at school it had a feeling of more, and I just wasn't ready to do more. Maybe in a while I'll pick it up.

 

[davekcmo]

In an alternative universe i’d have loved for Jason and John to be together

I know, but I needed Jason to be conflicted about his role in trying to keep John there, and you know, he needed a contrast to George and Ron I think. I didn't get the vibe that Jason was down in the steamroom getting his rocks off. And the vibe from the tax side of the house was supposed to be more professional and buttoned up. I dunno, tough to say. I am letting it sit for a while before I delve back into this world. To be honest, I've started a couple of other stories, so I'll have to see which horse I continue to ride. Thanks for your interest though. I'm glad you enjoyed it!