My Former Str8 Gym Teacher and Bully

Chapter 20: The Final Chapter

It was a beautiful late Spring day, as Dunkin was walking to his parents and brothers gravestones. It has now been 9 years since the now 34 year old Dunkin returned home to Pennington. As he bent down to lay freshly cut flowers from his backyard on his parents gravestone, Dunkin pressed his hand against their granite stone, realizing in a few months it will be the 10th anniversary of their passing. He sighed, as he lowered his head and for the next 20 minutes, he updated his parents on recent life events. After, Dunkin scooted over and laid the rest of the flowers on Jackson’s stone, along with some pictures he found recently when they were little boys from their summers at the beach house.

“Happy birthday big brother! Miss you so much!” Dunkin said and sat quiet for some.

Suddenly Dunkin looked up, as he heard the sounds of footsteps approaching him, which startled him. There walking towards him, was Tyler.

“Jackson Harrison, come over here and say happy birthday to your uncle!” Dunkin said, as he lifted himself off from the ground.

Tyler and Dunkin have now been together for almost 9 years and married for 4. Guess Tyler was right all those years ago, he and Dunkin would be married by 30. Walking behind him and who Dunkin was calling out, was their 2 year old son. With Tyler’s blessing, Dunkin was able to name their son after his late brother Jackson and father Harrison.

“Hey Dunkie, can you help me with this cranky stinker!” Tyler said, as he handed Dunkin their 3 month old daughter, who they named after Dunkin’s mother and planted a kiss on his lips.

“Dunkie, I give you and the kids all the time you need before we have to drop these little terrors at my sister's house and head off to Boston.

Happy Birthday Jackson!!

Don’t worry Alice and Harrison, Dunkie is behaving!” Tyler said, as he giggled and gave the peace sign into the air and started walking back to the car.

“Hey everyone, I want to introduce you to the newest Finister family member. Everyone…meet Alice Catherine Worthington. She is named after you mom and Tyler's Grandmother.” Dunkin said, while holding his daughter, as Jackson sat in front of his uncle's tombstone.

After Tyler and Dunkin dropped off their children at Sloane’s house, they headed to Boston. A lot has changed for the couple, these past couple of years. After two successful novel series and a massive Netflix deal, Dunkin decided to step away from Hollywood and decided to retire. He wanted to focus on raising his children at the house he grew up in. Dunkin realized he loved to read and write, so he went back to school and is now a teacher at Pennington High, as their AP Literature and Composition teacher.

Tyler on the other hand, stepped down as a board member at Hilton Worldwide Holdings Inc and stepped back from the day to day grind of his rental company. He appointed Leonardo to take over the helm of his extremely successful business. His main focus now is helping Dunkin raise their children and running his successful Penn’s Gym, which expanded into towns like Westport, Greenwich and New Cannan.

After a two hour drive, the couple finally arrived at 428 Marlborough St, in the Fenway–Kenmore section of Boston. Once the couple found a parking space, they were greeted by Tylers younger brother, Paxton and husband Jameson (yes, that Jameson from chapter 3 and the one Paxton cheated on with Chad). The couple recently got married a few months ago and currently live in the Battery Park neighborhood of Manhattan. After a couple of minutes of playing catchup, they were now greeted by Olivia and Henry Montgomery, Chad’s sister and father.

“I am so glad everyone was able to come and celebrate my big brother's great accomplishment today! Olivia said, as the crowd cheered.

There was an important reason why everyone was in Boston today. Chadworth Montgomery was graduating from Harvard Medical School. After their trip from Italy years ago, Chad decided to become a doctor. Just then, with all smiles, was Chad stepping out of his apartment. By the time the group reached Tercentenary Theatre, they said their goodbye to Chad. The group was now looking for their seats. Waving the group down was Daniel.

Since their trip to Italy 8 years ago, Daniel and Chad have been in a long and loving relationship. Daniel returned back to the States later that year, as Chad was going to attend UConn. Chad decided to attend the UConn School of Medicine and enrolled in the Special Program in Medicine. Daniel was able to find a job at Boston College, where he became the head coach of their baseball team. After 4 years, Chad decided to transfer to Harvard to be by Daniel’s side.

The move to Boston, while at times, did put a strain on their long distance relationship, Chad and Daniel were able to make it work. Daniel was close to his son, as his now ex-wife and son were living in Boston. On the weekends and offseason, he would spend as much as he can with his loving boyfriend. After the trip and the 4th of July weekend, the four ended up being friends, actually best friends. Dunkin and Tyler patched everything up with Daniel and over the years, they all became extremely close, according to everyone, best friends. With the help of Tyler, Chad was able to get a residency at Massachusetts General Hospital in Boston.

After the ceremony, the group had a wonderful dinner at Giulia. Later on in the night, Daniel was overlooking the beautiful night sky of Boston at Boston University Docks. As Daniel mind was now lost in translation while feeling the night cool crisp air, while hearing the water from the Charles River smacking the docks, he overheard some footsteps approaching him.

“You know Tyler, we have been friends for years now, I even know how you walk!” Daniel said, while still looking at the water, never turning his head around.

As Tyler started laughing, Daniel at this point knew him far too well. By the time he got to Daniel, he wrapped his arm around Daniel, as both of them now were overlooking the water.

“Hey buddy, thank you again for everything, it truly means alot to me!” Daniel said, as he patted Tyler’s chest as they both continued to stir at each other, with big smiles on their faces.

“WAIT… IS IT HAPPENING TONIGHT?” Tyler said in total excitement, as he grabbed on to Daniel’s shirt and started to jump up and down.

Just then, Daniel dug his right hand into his pocket and popped out a box, the size of an engagement ring box. As Daniel was holding the box in his hand, he looked at Tyler and both were now showcasing huge massive smiles and hugged it out with excitement about what was set to occur late tonight. Just then, the friends looked up and saw Dunkin approaching them.

“HOLD THE FRONT DOOR! IS IT HAPPENING TONIGHT!!” Dunkin said in total excitement, as he was now running towards them, while eyeing the box Daniel was holding.

The friends were now celebrating in excitement, jumping up and down, looking at the ring Daniel was set to propose to Chad. A few weeks ago, Daniel asked Tyler to help him pick out the engagement ring. Tyler used his connections to have De Beers Forevermark make a custom design engagement ring. Daniel gave one final hug to his dear friends, as he was heading off to look for Chad.

“We will be right there Daniel, don’t start anything without us. Just give us a few minutes.” Tyler said, as all three friends looked at each other with pure joy.

As Daniel was walking away, Dunkin swiped his thumb across Tyler cheek, as Tyler grabbed a hold of his husband and went in for a deep and passionate kiss. Dunkin’s mind was now flooded, as he started to remember how all of this started. From his high school years, where Tyler and his friends would torment him. Then fast forward after 8 years of living in LA after running away from his family and past and returning then to Pennington. The night he saw Daniel at Griswold Inn and sucking this thick uncut cock, to bumping into Tyler at the gym the following day and all the things that came after that.

As Tyler squeezed Dunkin’s firm ass, Dunkin then started to remember the night Tyler and him became an official couple after they said they loved each other after he took Tyler’s anal virginity at that super expensive suite at The Ritz-Carlton New York. Then he remembered their magical wedding at the palácio de sant'anna in Lisbon Portugal. Their wedding was at the beautiful palace from the 18th century in neoclassic style and had astonishing views of Lisbon, along with their terraces and gardens. Finally, before Tyler would snap him out of all these memories, he thought about the night his son was born and recently his daughter. A smile now would appear on his face, thinking of how far he came and the right decision about returning to Pennington.

“Babe I love you! Tyler Alexander Worthington, who would have thought you and I would be here. I am going to sound so cheesy, but our crazy love story will never have an ending!”

As Nora Ephron wrote, "When you realize you want to spend the rest of your life with somebody, you want the rest of your life to start as soon as possible."

I LOVE YOU!” Dunkin said, as gazed into his husband's eyes and planted a kiss on his cheek.

“Dunkin James Finster, you may have called our relationship from the start madness, everything that has happened to us, but I call it a love story. We were always meant to be with each other. The beginning of our story didn’t go so well. However, I’ll be loving you, always and forever.

I LOVE YOU AS WELL!” Tyler said as he informed Dunkin they should meet up with the group and watch Daniel and Chad continue their love story.

“It's Dunkie babe, always and forever!” Dunkin said as the couple locked hands and started walking back to the group.

The end
 
Chapter 20: The Final Chapter

It was a beautiful late Spring day, as Dunkin was walking to his parents and brothers gravestones. It has now been 9 years since the now 34 year old Dunkin returned home to Pennington. As he bent down to lay freshly cut flowers from his backyard on his parents gravestone, Dunkin pressed his hand against their granite stone, realizing in a few months it will be the 10th anniversary of their passing. He sighed, as he lowered his head and for the next 20 minutes, he updated his parents on recent life events. After, Dunkin scooted over and laid the rest of the flowers on Jackson’s stone, along with some pictures he found recently when they were little boys from their summers at the beach house.

“Happy birthday big brother! Miss you so much!” Dunkin said and sat quiet for some.

Suddenly Dunkin looked up, as he heard the sounds of footsteps approaching him, which startled him. There walking towards him, was Tyler.

“Jackson Harrison, come over here and say happy birthday to your uncle!” Dunkin said, as he lifted himself off from the ground.

Tyler and Dunkin have now been together for almost 9 years and married for 4. Guess Tyler was right all those years ago, he and Dunkin would be married by 30. Walking behind him and who Dunkin was calling out, was their 2 year old son. With Tyler’s blessing, Dunkin was able to name their son after his late brother Jackson and father Harrison.

“Hey Dunkie, can you help me with this cranky stinker!” Tyler said, as he handed Dunkin their 3 month old daughter, who they named after Dunkin’s mother and planted a kiss on his lips.

“Dunkie, I give you and the kids all the time you need before we have to drop these little terrors at my sister's house and head off to Boston.

Happy Birthday Jackson!!

Don’t worry Alice and Harrison, Dunkie is behaving!” Tyler said, as he giggled and gave the peace sign into the air and started walking back to the car.

“Hey everyone, I want to introduce you to the newest Finister family member. Everyone…meet Alice Catherine Worthington. She is named after you mom and Tyler's Grandmother.” Dunkin said, while holding his daughter, as Jackson sat in front of his uncle's tombstone.

After Tyler and Dunkin dropped off their children at Sloane’s house, they headed to Boston. A lot has changed for the couple, these past couple of years. After two successful novel series and a massive Netflix deal, Dunkin decided to step away from Hollywood and decided to retire. He wanted to focus on raising his children at the house he grew up in. Dunkin realized he loved to read and write, so he went back to school and is now a teacher at Pennington High, as their AP Literature and Composition teacher.

Tyler on the other hand, stepped down as a board member at Hilton Worldwide Holdings Inc and stepped back from the day to day grind of his rental company. He appointed Leonardo to take over the helm of his extremely successful business. His main focus now is helping Dunkin raise their children and running his successful Penn’s Gym, which expanded into towns like Westport, Greenwich and New Cannan.

After a two hour drive, the couple finally arrived at 428 Marlborough St, in the Fenway–Kenmore section of Boston. Once the couple found a parking space, they were greeted by Tylers younger brother, Paxton and husband Jameson (yes, that Jameson from chapter 3 and the one Paxton cheated on with Chad). The couple recently got married a few months ago and currently live in the Battery Park neighborhood of Manhattan. After a couple of minutes of playing catchup, they were now greeted by Olivia and Henry Montgomery, Chad’s sister and father.

“I am so glad everyone was able to come and celebrate my big brother's great accomplishment today! Olivia said, as the crowd cheered.

There was an important reason why everyone was in Boston today. Chadworth Montgomery was graduating from Harvard Medical School. After their trip from Italy years ago, Chad decided to become a doctor. Just then, with all smiles, was Chad stepping out of his apartment. By the time the group reached Tercentenary Theatre, they said their goodbye to Chad. The group was now looking for their seats. Waving the group down was Daniel.

Since their trip to Italy 8 years ago, Daniel and Chad have been in a long and loving relationship. Daniel returned back to the States later that year, as Chad was going to attend UConn. Chad decided to attend the UConn School of Medicine and enrolled in the Special Program in Medicine. Daniel was able to find a job at Boston College, where he became the head coach of their baseball team. After 4 years, Chad decided to transfer to Harvard to be by Daniel’s side.

The move to Boston, while at times, did put a strain on their long distance relationship, Chad and Daniel were able to make it work. Daniel was close to his son, as his now ex-wife and son were living in Boston. On the weekends and offseason, he would spend as much as he can with his loving boyfriend. After the trip and the 4th of July weekend, the four ended up being friends, actually best friends. Dunkin and Tyler patched everything up with Daniel and over the years, they all became extremely close, according to everyone, best friends. With the help of Tyler, Chad was able to get a residency at Massachusetts General Hospital in Boston.

After the ceremony, the group had a wonderful dinner at Giulia. Later on in the night, Daniel was overlooking the beautiful night sky of Boston at Boston University Docks. As Daniel mind was now lost in translation while feeling the night cool crisp air, while hearing the water from the Charles River smacking the docks, he overheard some footsteps approaching him.

“You know Tyler, we have been friends for years now, I even know how you walk!” Daniel said, while still looking at the water, never turning his head around.

As Tyler started laughing, Daniel at this point knew him far too well. By the time he got to Daniel, he wrapped his arm around Daniel, as both of them now were overlooking the water.

“Hey buddy, thank you again for everything, it truly means alot to me!” Daniel said, as he patted Tyler’s chest as they both continued to stir at each other, with big smiles on their faces.

“WAIT… IS IT HAPPENING TONIGHT?” Tyler said in total excitement, as he grabbed on to Daniel’s shirt and started to jump up and down.

Just then, Daniel dug his right hand into his pocket and popped out a box, the size of an engagement ring box. As Daniel was holding the box in his hand, he looked at Tyler and both were now showcasing huge massive smiles and hugged it out with excitement about what was set to occur late tonight. Just then, the friends looked up and saw Dunkin approaching them.

“HOLD THE FRONT DOOR! IS IT HAPPENING TONIGHT!!” Dunkin said in total excitement, as he was now running towards them, while eyeing the box Daniel was holding.

The friends were now celebrating in excitement, jumping up and down, looking at the ring Daniel was set to propose to Chad. A few weeks ago, Daniel asked Tyler to help him pick out the engagement ring. Tyler used his connections to have De Beers Forevermark make a custom design engagement ring. Daniel gave one final hug to his dear friends, as he was heading off to look for Chad.

“We will be right there Daniel, don’t start anything without us. Just give us a few minutes.” Tyler said, as all three friends looked at each other with pure joy.

As Daniel was walking away, Dunkin swiped his thumb across Tyler cheek, as Tyler grabbed a hold of his husband and went in for a deep and passionate kiss. Dunkin’s mind was now flooded, as he started to remember how all of this started. From his high school years, where Tyler and his friends would torment him. Then fast forward after 8 years of living in LA after running away from his family and past and returning then to Pennington. The night he saw Daniel at Griswold Inn and sucking this thick uncut cock, to bumping into Tyler at the gym the following day and all the things that came after that.

As Tyler squeezed Dunkin’s firm ass, Dunkin then started to remember the night Tyler and him became an official couple after they said they loved each other after he took Tyler’s anal virginity at that super expensive suite at The Ritz-Carlton New York. Then he remembered their magical wedding at the palácio de sant'anna in Lisbon Portugal. Their wedding was at the beautiful palace from the 18th century in neoclassic style and had astonishing views of Lisbon, along with their terraces and gardens. Finally, before Tyler would snap him out of all these memories, he thought about the night his son was born and recently his daughter. A smile now would appear on his face, thinking of how far he came and the right decision about returning to Pennington.

“Babe I love you! Tyler Alexander Worthington, who would have thought you and I would be here. I am going to sound so cheesy, but our crazy love story will never have an ending!”

As Nora Ephron wrote, "When you realize you want to spend the rest of your life with somebody, you want the rest of your life to start as soon as possible."

I LOVE YOU!” Dunkin said, as gazed into his husband's eyes and planted a kiss on his cheek.

“Dunkin James Finster, you may have called our relationship from the start madness, everything that has happened to us, but I call it a love story. We were always meant to be with each other. The beginning of our story didn’t go so well. However, I’ll be loving you, always and forever.

I LOVE YOU AS WELL!” Tyler said as he informed Dunkin they should meet up with the group and watch Daniel and Chad continue their love story.

“It's Dunkie babe, always and forever!” Dunkin said as the couple locked hands and started walking back to the group.

The end
Beautiful,nice way to tie everything up.sad its over though lol
 
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Beautiful,nice way to tie everything up.sad its over though lol
@Matlock21 maybe this story is over - but I have been thinking of keeping the Dunkin and Tyler Universe alive, in a different story or even perspective. Just thinking what my next story will be.
 
Thanks for the great ride. Those guys really got to me and I wasn’t ready to say goodbye.
I’m not to proud to say it but I legit cried. Not a full on ugly cry but the tears came just the same.
I’m glad you finished it with everyone in a good place, Contentment.
It’s that place you hope to land when the highs of happiness calm down and become something sustainable, contentment and you captured it.
 
Thanks for the great ride. Those guys really got to me and I wasn’t ready to say goodbye.
I’m not to proud to say it but I legit cried. Not a full on ugly cry but the tears came just the same.
I’m glad you finished it with everyone in a good place, Contentment.
It’s that place you hope to land when the highs of happiness calm down and become something sustainable, contentment and you captured it.
Love reading that! I feel a lot of people had a real strong connection and attachment with the characters of Dunkin and Tyler and their love story.

This was the longest story I ever wrote! I loved telling it, but there is so much you can do since this is the erotic story section lol.

I mean I feel if you take out the sex stuff, I probably could have written a real novel out of this and kept going on and on.
 
Love reading that! I feel a lot of people had a real strong connection and attachment with the characters of Dunkin and Tyler and their love story.

This was the longest story I ever wrote! I loved telling it, but there is so much you can do since this is the erotic story section lol.

I mean I feel if you take out the sex stuff, I probably could have written a real novel out of this and kept going on and on.
Have you written or published a non erotic novel? Perhaps a romance novel along these lines is in your literary future! Either way, thanks again for a great ride.
 
Have you written or published a non erotic novel? Perhaps a romance novel along these lines is in your literary future! Either way, thanks again for a great ride.
Nope. I just do these for fun and to clear my head when stressed out.

I do wonder if I could turn this story into a romance novel.

is there a section in this forum that you can tell regular stories and not just about erotic sex involved?

I feel like these two i could potentially write a romance novel about them and expand more into their lives and past.

I would have lived digger deeper into their high school years.
 
Nope. I just do these for fun and to clear my head when stressed out.

I do wonder if I could turn this story into a romance novel.

is there a section in this forum that you can tell regular stories and not just about erotic sex involved?

I feel like these two i could potentially write a romance novel about them and expand more into their lives and past.

I would have lived digger deeper into their high school years.
I don’t think there is a non erotic section, there is this Et Cetera, Et Cetera but it would probably get lost there. There are tons of writers forums that cater to m/m romance themes.
Though not exclusively, a fair amount of m/m, soft core romance novels are penned by women. I have a novelist friend that writes romance for both women and men and is published under two names depending on the audience Neither wildly successful but her m/m fiction has sold better than her m/f romance novels. Go figure.

I would suggest turning it into a screenplay but as written it might be too expensive of a project to produce because of the number of locations and lavish settings. That’s just my production design backround talking, but seriously it would make a great movie.
Best of luck and let us know if you do take the story further.
 
Chapter 20: The Final Chapter

It was a beautiful late Spring day, as Dunkin was walking to his parents and brothers gravestones. It has now been 9 years since the now 34 year old Dunkin returned home to Pennington. As he bent down to lay freshly cut flowers from his backyard on his parents gravestone, Dunkin pressed his hand against their granite stone, realizing in a few months it will be the 10th anniversary of their passing. He sighed, as he lowered his head and for the next 20 minutes, he updated his parents on recent life events. After, Dunkin scooted over and laid the rest of the flowers on Jackson’s stone, along with some pictures he found recently when they were little boys from their summers at the beach house.

“Happy birthday big brother! Miss you so much!” Dunkin said and sat quiet for some.

Suddenly Dunkin looked up, as he heard the sounds of footsteps approaching him, which startled him. There walking towards him, was Tyler.

“Jackson Harrison, come over here and say happy birthday to your uncle!” Dunkin said, as he lifted himself off from the ground.

Tyler and Dunkin have now been together for almost 9 years and married for 4. Guess Tyler was right all those years ago, he and Dunkin would be married by 30. Walking behind him and who Dunkin was calling out, was their 2 year old son. With Tyler’s blessing, Dunkin was able to name their son after his late brother Jackson and father Harrison.

“Hey Dunkie, can you help me with this cranky stinker!” Tyler said, as he handed Dunkin their 3 month old daughter, who they named after Dunkin’s mother and planted a kiss on his lips.

“Dunkie, I give you and the kids all the time you need before we have to drop these little terrors at my sister's house and head off to Boston.

Happy Birthday Jackson!!

Don’t worry Alice and Harrison, Dunkie is behaving!” Tyler said, as he giggled and gave the peace sign into the air and started walking back to the car.

“Hey everyone, I want to introduce you to the newest Finister family member. Everyone…meet Alice Catherine Worthington. She is named after you mom and Tyler's Grandmother.” Dunkin said, while holding his daughter, as Jackson sat in front of his uncle's tombstone.

After Tyler and Dunkin dropped off their children at Sloane’s house, they headed to Boston. A lot has changed for the couple, these past couple of years. After two successful novel series and a massive Netflix deal, Dunkin decided to step away from Hollywood and decided to retire. He wanted to focus on raising his children at the house he grew up in. Dunkin realized he loved to read and write, so he went back to school and is now a teacher at Pennington High, as their AP Literature and Composition teacher.

Tyler on the other hand, stepped down as a board member at Hilton Worldwide Holdings Inc and stepped back from the day to day grind of his rental company. He appointed Leonardo to take over the helm of his extremely successful business. His main focus now is helping Dunkin raise their children and running his successful Penn’s Gym, which expanded into towns like Westport, Greenwich and New Cannan.

After a two hour drive, the couple finally arrived at 428 Marlborough St, in the Fenway–Kenmore section of Boston. Once the couple found a parking space, they were greeted by Tylers younger brother, Paxton and husband Jameson (yes, that Jameson from chapter 3 and the one Paxton cheated on with Chad). The couple recently got married a few months ago and currently live in the Battery Park neighborhood of Manhattan. After a couple of minutes of playing catchup, they were now greeted by Olivia and Henry Montgomery, Chad’s sister and father.

“I am so glad everyone was able to come and celebrate my big brother's great accomplishment today! Olivia said, as the crowd cheered.

There was an important reason why everyone was in Boston today. Chadworth Montgomery was graduating from Harvard Medical School. After their trip from Italy years ago, Chad decided to become a doctor. Just then, with all smiles, was Chad stepping out of his apartment. By the time the group reached Tercentenary Theatre, they said their goodbye to Chad. The group was now looking for their seats. Waving the group down was Daniel.

Since their trip to Italy 8 years ago, Daniel and Chad have been in a long and loving relationship. Daniel returned back to the States later that year, as Chad was going to attend UConn. Chad decided to attend the UConn School of Medicine and enrolled in the Special Program in Medicine. Daniel was able to find a job at Boston College, where he became the head coach of their baseball team. After 4 years, Chad decided to transfer to Harvard to be by Daniel’s side.

The move to Boston, while at times, did put a strain on their long distance relationship, Chad and Daniel were able to make it work. Daniel was close to his son, as his now ex-wife and son were living in Boston. On the weekends and offseason, he would spend as much as he can with his loving boyfriend. After the trip and the 4th of July weekend, the four ended up being friends, actually best friends. Dunkin and Tyler patched everything up with Daniel and over the years, they all became extremely close, according to everyone, best friends. With the help of Tyler, Chad was able to get a residency at Massachusetts General Hospital in Boston.

After the ceremony, the group had a wonderful dinner at Giulia. Later on in the night, Daniel was overlooking the beautiful night sky of Boston at Boston University Docks. As Daniel mind was now lost in translation while feeling the night cool crisp air, while hearing the water from the Charles River smacking the docks, he overheard some footsteps approaching him.

“You know Tyler, we have been friends for years now, I even know how you walk!” Daniel said, while still looking at the water, never turning his head around.

As Tyler started laughing, Daniel at this point knew him far too well. By the time he got to Daniel, he wrapped his arm around Daniel, as both of them now were overlooking the water.

“Hey buddy, thank you again for everything, it truly means alot to me!” Daniel said, as he patted Tyler’s chest as they both continued to stir at each other, with big smiles on their faces.

“WAIT… IS IT HAPPENING TONIGHT?” Tyler said in total excitement, as he grabbed on to Daniel’s shirt and started to jump up and down.

Just then, Daniel dug his right hand into his pocket and popped out a box, the size of an engagement ring box. As Daniel was holding the box in his hand, he looked at Tyler and both were now showcasing huge massive smiles and hugged it out with excitement about what was set to occur late tonight. Just then, the friends looked up and saw Dunkin approaching them.

“HOLD THE FRONT DOOR! IS IT HAPPENING TONIGHT!!” Dunkin said in total excitement, as he was now running towards them, while eyeing the box Daniel was holding.

The friends were now celebrating in excitement, jumping up and down, looking at the ring Daniel was set to propose to Chad. A few weeks ago, Daniel asked Tyler to help him pick out the engagement ring. Tyler used his connections to have De Beers Forevermark make a custom design engagement ring. Daniel gave one final hug to his dear friends, as he was heading off to look for Chad.

“We will be right there Daniel, don’t start anything without us. Just give us a few minutes.” Tyler said, as all three friends looked at each other with pure joy.

As Daniel was walking away, Dunkin swiped his thumb across Tyler cheek, as Tyler grabbed a hold of his husband and went in for a deep and passionate kiss. Dunkin’s mind was now flooded, as he started to remember how all of this started. From his high school years, where Tyler and his friends would torment him. Then fast forward after 8 years of living in LA after running away from his family and past and returning then to Pennington. The night he saw Daniel at Griswold Inn and sucking this thick uncut cock, to bumping into Tyler at the gym the following day and all the things that came after that.

As Tyler squeezed Dunkin’s firm ass, Dunkin then started to remember the night Tyler and him became an official couple after they said they loved each other after he took Tyler’s anal virginity at that super expensive suite at The Ritz-Carlton New York. Then he remembered their magical wedding at the palácio de sant'anna in Lisbon Portugal. Their wedding was at the beautiful palace from the 18th century in neoclassic style and had astonishing views of Lisbon, along with their terraces and gardens. Finally, before Tyler would snap him out of all these memories, he thought about the night his son was born and recently his daughter. A smile now would appear on his face, thinking of how far he came and the right decision about returning to Pennington.

“Babe I love you! Tyler Alexander Worthington, who would have thought you and I would be here. I am going to sound so cheesy, but our crazy love story will never have an ending!”

As Nora Ephron wrote, "When you realize you want to spend the rest of your life with somebody, you want the rest of your life to start as soon as possible."

I LOVE YOU!” Dunkin said, as gazed into his husband's eyes and planted a kiss on his cheek.

“Dunkin James Finster, you may have called our relationship from the start madness, everything that has happened to us, but I call it a love story. We were always meant to be with each other. The beginning of our story didn’t go so well. However, I’ll be loving you, always and forever.

I LOVE YOU AS WELL!” Tyler said as he informed Dunkin they should meet up with the group and watch Daniel and Chad continue their love story.

“It's Dunkie babe, always and forever!” Dunkin said as the couple locked hands and started walking back to the group.

The end
Said to see it go, but happy that it is over if that makes sense. The time jumps are killing me. There was no mention of Daniel & Tyler hooking up. Was there any fallout over it? Did fucking Daniel get rid of all of Tyler's doubts about staying with Dunkin or was it just time. Did he have a conversation with Dunkin about how he felt dumb for allowing Daniel to fuck him and not do anything about it?

Wow I had more questions than I thought and there are still a few more. I know not every situation can be addressed when authoring a story and leaving the reader to assume a few things is normal. Too many questions still floating around in my head and many of them may not be important to the story.

It may not sound like it, but I really did enjoy this story and after some chapters I may have been annoyed, in disbelief, angry and sometimes wondering WTF you were doing. And after some chapters I was like, this was such a great read, I enjoyed the journey of where they came from to what happened to where they wanted to go and finally them getting there. I celebrated the good times and was sad on the less than good days. It is written in such vivid detail (as if I were in the room with them) and it always left me wanting more and I looked forward to the next chapter.

Someone once told me that if an author elicits that type of response from the reader, they've done their job. Congrats on a job well done. Let's see what you do next.
 
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Said to see it go, but happy that it is over if that makes sense. The time jumps are killing me. There was no mention of Daniel & Tyler hooking up. Was there any fallout over it? Did fucking Daniel get rid of all of Tyler's doubts about staying with Dunkin or was it just time. Did he have a conversation with Dunkin about how he felt dumb for allowing Daniel to fuck him and not do anything about it?

Wow I had more questions than I thought and there are still a few more. I know not every situation can be addressed when authoring a story and leaving the reader to assume a few things is normal. Too many questions still floating around in my head and many of them may not be important to the story.

It may not sound like it, but I really did enjoy this story and after some chapters I may have been annoyed, in disbelief, angry and sometimes wondering WTF you were doing. And after some chapters I was like, this was such a great read, I enjoyed the journey of where they came from to what happened to where they wanted to go and finally them getting there. I celebrated the good times and was sad on the less than good days. It is written in such vivid detail (as if I were in the room with them) and it always left me wanting more and I looked forward to the next chapter.

Someone once told me that if an author elicits that type of response from the reader, they've done their job. Congrats on a job well done. Let's see what you do next.
@ndamood4sum No I think the end of chapter 19 eleuded there was no fallout. I assuming everyone figured it out without having to explain, Daniel was told by the others to go to the Hamptons and resolve some unfinished business between him and Tyler. I actually debated if I wanted them or not to smash.

The funny part, chapter 20 was already written before even finishing 18 and starting 19. I already had the plan on how I wanted to end it. If you have not read my other stories, there is always a time jump in the final chapter where they always are married and have kids.

"Some chapters I may have been annoyed, in disbelief, angry and sometimes wondering WTF you were doing. And after some chapters I was like, this was such a great read"

To me that is a wonderful comment as I felt I did my job with telling the story. It can't be all roses and rainbows, that would be a boring story lol.

I will say, this is my longest story I ever written, 20 chapters and 130 pages. I know I read other stories on this forum where they keep telling the story for years, but this one started to burn me out and I really didn't want to jump the shark. With a busy schedule coming up, I decided to end it, instead of making people wait weeks or even months for another chapter.

Dunkin and Tyler and Daniel and Chad were always the end game when I introduced Chad and Tyler.

I am going to take a very long break before my next series. Who knows, Dunkin and Tyler may resurface in a totally different story or universe.
 
@gtru1981 I may be late to the party, but I just want to say that this is so fcking good!!! It's so... Full!? Like, every chapter ties up everything perfectly. The details, their backstories, very well-thought. I can see your love for the characters as well as for the story itself. Thank you for bringing this masterpiece out to the world for everyone to read.
 
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@gtru1981 I may be late to the party, but I just want to say that this is so fcking good!!! It's so... Full!? Like, every chapter ties up everything perfectly. The details, their backstories, very well-thought. I can see your love for the characters as well as for the story itself. Thank you for bringing this masterpiece out to the world for everyone to read.
Thanks! I can't believe it's been over a year since I finished this story. I actually spent the past year rewriting it into a 336 page novel lol about them two.
 
Thanks! I can't believe it's been over a year since I finished this story. I actually spent the past year rewriting it into a 336 page novel lol about them two.
That's amazing! Are you going to publish it? If so, when? No pressure with these questions, really. I just think it would be amazing to read it in a physical book.
 
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