Two farm boys collide at university

As both Hollywood studio executive Dawn Steel and actress Sharon Stone said, you can't fuck your way to the top. You can only fuck your way to the middle*, and after that you have to produce.

*Okay, they said "sleep," not "fuck."

Well, Sharon actually said, "After that, you have to claw your way to the top."

But unless he's going to do so with work, that's not the lesson Spencer needs. He probably thought he was clawing his way to the top with his ass.
 
Well, Sharon actually said, "After that, you have to claw your way to the top."

But unless he's going to do so with work, that's not the lesson Spencer needs. He probably thought he was clawing his way to the top with his ass.
Yep--he thinks his ass can deliver lots but what a surprise. Loved Henk and Sara's response. Then the fuckboys drop kicked him too.
 
Tuesday Evening: The Wine Shed Showdown

The Stellenbosch dusk draped the campus in a soft purple haze, the wine shed’s fairy lights casting a warm glow over its weathered wooden walls. Inside, the air was thick with the scent of fermenting grapes and candle wax, barrels stacked high, a cluttered testament to Rachel, JP, and Doug’s Chenin Blanc empire. Spencer Clarke stepped through the door, his black gym shorts snug, navy tank clinging to his chest, blonde fuzz catching the light. His blue eyes burned with a desperate edge, the captaincy loss to Dylan still a raw wound, Henk and Sarah’s potjie night rejection a bruise on his pride. The wine shed—his 15% equity pitch—was his last stronghold, the one goal he could still claim. He carried his laptop like a weapon, the PowerPoint within polished to perfection, Doug’s support secured in a sweaty, cum-slick night he thought guaranteed victory.

Rachel stood at the table, pouring wine, her dark hair tied back, her smile tight. “Spense, you’re here—grab a glass.” JP lounged in a chair, sandy hair flopping, his usual grin replaced by a wary squint, arms crossed. Doug hovered near a barrel, olive skin flushed, dark eyes darting to Spencer, then away, his silence louder than the clink of bottles. Spencer set his laptop down, forcing a Joburg grin, though his hands trembled slightly. “Lekker, Rach—let’s seal this deal, hey?” His voice was smooth, but the need beneath it cracked through, a City Shark circling his final prize.

He launched into his pitch, slides flashing—Paarl distributors, warehouse splits with VDMDW surplus barrels, profit margins mapped to the cent. “Your Chenin’s gold, but you’re choking on supply, distro’s a mess. I’ve got three contacts ready to triple your reach, storage sorted, 10% margins year one, 25% by three. I’m your guy—hustle, network, all in. For that, 15% equity, full partner.” His eyes flicked to Doug, expecting a nod, but Doug’s gaze stayed on the floor, lips pressed thin. Rachel leaned forward, JP’s fingers tapped the table, and Spencer pushed harder, voice rising. “This is it, bru—we build an empire together.”

Rachel exchanged a look with JP, then spoke, her voice calm but unyielding. “Spense, we sent your proposal to Jo and Piet—wanted their take, since they’re in the game.” Spencer’s grin faltered, a cold twist in his gut. Jo and Piet? He hadn’t counted on them, hadn’t thought the farm boys would weigh in. Rachel continued, “They ran it by Jacques. He tore it apart.”

JP cut in, blunt, no warmth. “Jacques spotted holes, bru. Your distro contacts? Two are tied to shaky co-ops, one’s under investigation—dodgy numbers. Warehouse split’s a cash sink; VDMDW’s barrels are locked in their own deals, not free for us. Margins look pretty, but they lean on best-case scenarios, no buffer for drought or pests. He said it’s a gamble, not a plan, and 15% for a consultant’s no deal.”

Spencer’s breath caught, anger flaring, blue eyes darting to Doug. “You knew about this? We had a deal—15%, you backed me.” Doug’s dark hair fell over his eyes, his voice low, almost a whisper. “I didn’t know, Spense—they sent it after. Jacques’s word… it’s solid.” The betrayal stung, Doug’s silence a knife, no trace of their night’s heat.

Rachel folded her arms, resolute. “We’re not taking it, Spense. Plan’s got good bits—distributors, we’ll chase those ourselves—but equity stays with us three. You can consult, no stake, or walk. It’s business.” JP nodded, his stare cold. “You pushed too hard, bru. Jacques said you’re selling flash, not substance. We’re good without it.”

Spencer’s hands clenched, laptop screen glowing mockingly, his empire crumbling. “This is mine,” he snapped, voice cracking, desperation spilling. “I built this—contacts, numbers, Doug’s yes. You can’t just—” Rachel cut him off, sharp. “We can, Spense. Jo and Piet trusted Jacques; we trust them. You’re out.” Doug looked away, guilt in his slumped shoulders, offering no lifeline.

Fury choked Spencer, his chest tight, blue eyes stinging as he slammed his laptop shut. “Fuck you all,” he muttered, grabbing his bag, storming out, the shed door banging behind him. The campus was dark, stars indifferent, his footsteps heavy on the path back to his dorm. No captaincy, no gang, now no wine shed—every goal shattered, his charm a spent bullet. The City Shark was beached, alone, Jo and Piet’s shadow looming larger than ever, Jacques’s verdict the final blow.

Wednesday Afternoon:

The Stellenbosch quad hummed with post-practice chaos, the late afternoon sun baking the grass where the water polo squad sprawled, beers cracked, laughter bouncing off the oaks. Kyle’s tanned face grinned as he tossed a ball, Liam’s dark hair damp from the pool, their banter light but edged with the captaincy’s aftertaste. The wine crew joined, Rachel and JP toasting their decision to go solo, bottles of Chenin Blanc glinting, Doug trailing behind, his olive skin pale, dark eyes distant. The potjie night’s fire scar lingered, a ghost of Spencer’s last stand, and his name hung unspoken, a shadow over the group.

Kyle, buzzed on Black Label, broke the silence, leaning back on a blanket. “Spense lost it in the gym, hey—glared at me like I’d knifed him when Dylan got captain.” His voice was half-laugh, but unease flickered, Henk’s potjie night gossip still fresh: Spense tried kak with me and Sar—too far. Liam nodded, quieter, his new girlfriend’s presence grounding him. “Ja, cornered me too—thought we’d locked it for him. Felt kak when it fell through.”

Rachel, sipping wine, raised an eyebrow, her pragmatism sharp. “He lost more than that—his wine shed pitch crashed. Jacques tore it to bits, said it was all flash.” Doug froze, bottle halfway to his lips, the mention of Spencer’s proposal hitting like a stone. He’d replayed their night—the shed, Spencer’s relentless pounding, the 15% promise—endlessly, guilt gnawing since he stayed silent in the meeting. Prompted by Rachel’s words, he muttered, voice low, “He didn’t just pitch. Got… close, pushed me to back him. Felt like a deal, not a choice.”

Kyle’s head snapped up, eyes narrowing, beer forgotten. “What’s that, bru?” Liam leaned in, his own guilt stirring, sensing a pattern. Doug’s jaw tightened, dark hair falling forward, then he spilled, raw and halting. “In the shed, after hours—he made it seem like… if I said yes, it was more than business. I fell for it, thought it meant something.” He didn’t say sex, but the weight landed, heavy in the quad’s hum.

Kyle’s bravado cracked, his voice sharp. “Fok, same. Before the captain vote, he had me over—said it’d seal my support. I thought it was just us, mates, you know?” Liam’s face flushed, his confession softer, laced with hurt. “Me too. Night before the trial, he… made me feel I owed him. Promised my vote, but Coach didn’t care.” The three locked eyes, shock settling—Spencer had played them all, sex his currency for control, each believing they were unique, not pawns.

Kyle slammed his beer down, anger flaring. “Bloody hell, he used us like tools—votes, equity, whatever he wanted.” Liam’s regret cut deeper, his voice low. “Thought he was a friend, not… this. I backed him to Coach, but it was about that night, not the pool.” Doug’s pain was quietest, his dark eyes glistening. “I thought we had something, but it was just his plan—15%, nothing else. When it failed, he was gone.”

Their talk turned bitter under the oak’s shade, the quad’s chatter fading. Kyle’s ego burned, his loyalty to Spencer ashes. “I pushed for him, got nothing but a glare.” Liam’s hurt was personal, his girlfriend a shield. “Should’ve seen it—guy’s all charm, no soul.” Doug’s betrayal stung deepest, his role in the wine shed a wound. “He didn’t care about us, just the deal.” They pieced it together—Spencer’s seduction, promises, control—left them used, trust shattered. No plan for revenge, just a quiet vow: step back, warn the gang, let Spencer’s world collapse.

The trio split, Kyle to his dorm, Liam to his girl, Doug to the shed, each carrying a new wariness. Spencer, holed up in his room, oblivious, stared at his silent phone—no replies, no invites, only vinyls and coffee’s faint musk. The wine shed was his final blow, but the quad’s reckoning sealed it—no captaincy, no gang, no equity, no allies. Jo’s freckled grin flickered, a ghost of first-year chaos, and for the first time, Spencer felt the weight of nothing, the City Shark drowned in his own game.
 
Tuesday Evening: The Wine Shed Showdown

The Stellenbosch dusk draped the campus in a soft purple haze, the wine shed’s fairy lights casting a warm glow over its weathered wooden walls. Inside, the air was thick with the scent of fermenting grapes and candle wax, barrels stacked high, a cluttered testament to Rachel, JP, and Doug’s Chenin Blanc empire. Spencer Clarke stepped through the door, his black gym shorts snug, navy tank clinging to his chest, blonde fuzz catching the light. His blue eyes burned with a desperate edge, the captaincy loss to Dylan still a raw wound, Henk and Sarah’s potjie night rejection a bruise on his pride. The wine shed—his 15% equity pitch—was his last stronghold, the one goal he could still claim. He carried his laptop like a weapon, the PowerPoint within polished to perfection, Doug’s support secured in a sweaty, cum-slick night he thought guaranteed victory.

Rachel stood at the table, pouring wine, her dark hair tied back, her smile tight. “Spense, you’re here—grab a glass.” JP lounged in a chair, sandy hair flopping, his usual grin replaced by a wary squint, arms crossed. Doug hovered near a barrel, olive skin flushed, dark eyes darting to Spencer, then away, his silence louder than the clink of bottles. Spencer set his laptop down, forcing a Joburg grin, though his hands trembled slightly. “Lekker, Rach—let’s seal this deal, hey?” His voice was smooth, but the need beneath it cracked through, a City Shark circling his final prize.

He launched into his pitch, slides flashing—Paarl distributors, warehouse splits with VDMDW surplus barrels, profit margins mapped to the cent. “Your Chenin’s gold, but you’re choking on supply, distro’s a mess. I’ve got three contacts ready to triple your reach, storage sorted, 10% margins year one, 25% by three. I’m your guy—hustle, network, all in. For that, 15% equity, full partner.” His eyes flicked to Doug, expecting a nod, but Doug’s gaze stayed on the floor, lips pressed thin. Rachel leaned forward, JP’s fingers tapped the table, and Spencer pushed harder, voice rising. “This is it, bru—we build an empire together.”

Rachel exchanged a look with JP, then spoke, her voice calm but unyielding. “Spense, we sent your proposal to Jo and Piet—wanted their take, since they’re in the game.” Spencer’s grin faltered, a cold twist in his gut. Jo and Piet? He hadn’t counted on them, hadn’t thought the farm boys would weigh in. Rachel continued, “They ran it by Jacques. He tore it apart.”

JP cut in, blunt, no warmth. “Jacques spotted holes, bru. Your distro contacts? Two are tied to shaky co-ops, one’s under investigation—dodgy numbers. Warehouse split’s a cash sink; VDMDW’s barrels are locked in their own deals, not free for us. Margins look pretty, but they lean on best-case scenarios, no buffer for drought or pests. He said it’s a gamble, not a plan, and 15% for a consultant’s no deal.”

Spencer’s breath caught, anger flaring, blue eyes darting to Doug. “You knew about this? We had a deal—15%, you backed me.” Doug’s dark hair fell over his eyes, his voice low, almost a whisper. “I didn’t know, Spense—they sent it after. Jacques’s word… it’s solid.” The betrayal stung, Doug’s silence a knife, no trace of their night’s heat.

Rachel folded her arms, resolute. “We’re not taking it, Spense. Plan’s got good bits—distributors, we’ll chase those ourselves—but equity stays with us three. You can consult, no stake, or walk. It’s business.” JP nodded, his stare cold. “You pushed too hard, bru. Jacques said you’re selling flash, not substance. We’re good without it.”

Spencer’s hands clenched, laptop screen glowing mockingly, his empire crumbling. “This is mine,” he snapped, voice cracking, desperation spilling. “I built this—contacts, numbers, Doug’s yes. You can’t just—” Rachel cut him off, sharp. “We can, Spense. Jo and Piet trusted Jacques; we trust them. You’re out.” Doug looked away, guilt in his slumped shoulders, offering no lifeline.

Fury choked Spencer, his chest tight, blue eyes stinging as he slammed his laptop shut. “Fuck you all,” he muttered, grabbing his bag, storming out, the shed door banging behind him. The campus was dark, stars indifferent, his footsteps heavy on the path back to his dorm. No captaincy, no gang, now no wine shed—every goal shattered, his charm a spent bullet. The City Shark was beached, alone, Jo and Piet’s shadow looming larger than ever, Jacques’s verdict the final blow.

Wednesday Afternoon:

The Stellenbosch quad hummed with post-practice chaos, the late afternoon sun baking the grass where the water polo squad sprawled, beers cracked, laughter bouncing off the oaks. Kyle’s tanned face grinned as he tossed a ball, Liam’s dark hair damp from the pool, their banter light but edged with the captaincy’s aftertaste. The wine crew joined, Rachel and JP toasting their decision to go solo, bottles of Chenin Blanc glinting, Doug trailing behind, his olive skin pale, dark eyes distant. The potjie night’s fire scar lingered, a ghost of Spencer’s last stand, and his name hung unspoken, a shadow over the group.

Kyle, buzzed on Black Label, broke the silence, leaning back on a blanket. “Spense lost it in the gym, hey—glared at me like I’d knifed him when Dylan got captain.” His voice was half-laugh, but unease flickered, Henk’s potjie night gossip still fresh: Spense tried kak with me and Sar—too far. Liam nodded, quieter, his new girlfriend’s presence grounding him. “Ja, cornered me too—thought we’d locked it for him. Felt kak when it fell through.”

Rachel, sipping wine, raised an eyebrow, her pragmatism sharp. “He lost more than that—his wine shed pitch crashed. Jacques tore it to bits, said it was all flash.” Doug froze, bottle halfway to his lips, the mention of Spencer’s proposal hitting like a stone. He’d replayed their night—the shed, Spencer’s relentless pounding, the 15% promise—endlessly, guilt gnawing since he stayed silent in the meeting. Prompted by Rachel’s words, he muttered, voice low, “He didn’t just pitch. Got… close, pushed me to back him. Felt like a deal, not a choice.”

Kyle’s head snapped up, eyes narrowing, beer forgotten. “What’s that, bru?” Liam leaned in, his own guilt stirring, sensing a pattern. Doug’s jaw tightened, dark hair falling forward, then he spilled, raw and halting. “In the shed, after hours—he made it seem like… if I said yes, it was more than business. I fell for it, thought it meant something.” He didn’t say sex, but the weight landed, heavy in the quad’s hum.

Kyle’s bravado cracked, his voice sharp. “Fok, same. Before the captain vote, he had me over—said it’d seal my support. I thought it was just us, mates, you know?” Liam’s face flushed, his confession softer, laced with hurt. “Me too. Night before the trial, he… made me feel I owed him. Promised my vote, but Coach didn’t care.” The three locked eyes, shock settling—Spencer had played them all, sex his currency for control, each believing they were unique, not pawns.

Kyle slammed his beer down, anger flaring. “Bloody hell, he used us like tools—votes, equity, whatever he wanted.” Liam’s regret cut deeper, his voice low. “Thought he was a friend, not… this. I backed him to Coach, but it was about that night, not the pool.” Doug’s pain was quietest, his dark eyes glistening. “I thought we had something, but it was just his plan—15%, nothing else. When it failed, he was gone.”

Their talk turned bitter under the oak’s shade, the quad’s chatter fading. Kyle’s ego burned, his loyalty to Spencer ashes. “I pushed for him, got nothing but a glare.” Liam’s hurt was personal, his girlfriend a shield. “Should’ve seen it—guy’s all charm, no soul.” Doug’s betrayal stung deepest, his role in the wine shed a wound. “He didn’t care about us, just the deal.” They pieced it together—Spencer’s seduction, promises, control—left them used, trust shattered. No plan for revenge, just a quiet vow: step back, warn the gang, let Spencer’s world collapse.

The trio split, Kyle to his dorm, Liam to his girl, Doug to the shed, each carrying a new wariness. Spencer, holed up in his room, oblivious, stared at his silent phone—no replies, no invites, only vinyls and coffee’s faint musk. The wine shed was his final blow, but the quad’s reckoning sealed it—no captaincy, no gang, no equity, no allies. Jo’s freckled grin flickered, a ghost of first-year chaos, and for the first time, Spencer felt the weight of nothing, the City Shark drowned in his own game.
Jayson, another awesome use of words and characters. You are excellent with this process. Your stories offer more than sex but a look at life lessons and the value of true friends and relationships. And partnerships base on trust and integrity. Value others...THANKS
 
Is Spencer redeemable, though?

Obviously it's up to Jayson to decide, but what do y'all think?
Spencer is still young and is redeemable if he wants to be. Can he own up to his mistakes and be willing to change? All of us have this opportunity if taken unless we like who we are and want no friends. It is difficult for some to see their own short comings and have a willingness to put in t he work needed for real change.
 
The Stellenbosch campus pulsed with life beyond Spencer Clarke’s dorm room, but inside, the world was a suffocating void. Monday morning dawned grey, the quad’s chatter filtering through his cracked window like a taunt, but Spencer didn’t move from his bed. The wine shed rejection—Rachel and JP’s cold dismissal, Jacques van der Merwe’s verdict tearing his proposal to shreds—had landed like a sledgehammer, following the captaincy loss to Dylan and Henk and Sarah’s potjie night rebuff. His empire, built on calculated charm and sweat-soaked deals, was ash, and with it, his sense of self. His blonde hair, once meticulously styled, hung greasy and limp, blue eyes dulled to a vacant stare, the Joburg polish that had won him the gang’s cheers replaced by a hollow husk.

He wore the same black gym shorts and faded navy tank for days, the fabric sour with sweat, whisky’s sharp tang clinging to his breath. The room was a graveyard of neglect—empty Black Label cans scattered on the desk, crumpled lecture notes spilling from his untouched laptop bag, vinyl crates gathering dust, Miriam Makeba’s soul silenced. His pour-over coffee rig, once a ritual of precision, sat abandoned, a thin film of grime on its glass. The phone, once buzzing with gang texts, lay dark, no pings from Kyle, Liam, Doug, or anyone. Their rejections echoed—Kyle’s once-off, Liam’s with my girl, Doug’s need sleep—each a nail in the coffin of his social world. He’d stopped texting, the silence a confirmation: no one cared.

Monday blurred into Tuesday, lectures skipped, the campus a distant hum. Spencer stared at the ceiling, whisky bottle cradled against his chest, its burn the only thing cutting through the fog. He’d tried to leave once, Tuesday noon, pulling on his leather jacket, but the quad’s sight—rugby lads tossing a ball, Rachel laughing with JP—sent him retreating, blinds drawn tighter. Wednesday, he didn’t eat, the whisky his meal, its heat pooling in his gut as he replayed his failures. The captaincy meeting, Coach’s betrayal—“Your actions? Anything but captain material”—stabbed deepest, the memory of their office encounter a bitter twist. Thursday, he cracked a second bottle, the liquor dulling the ache but not the truth: he’d fucked over Kyle, Liam, Doug, used them for power, and now he was alone.

Friday night cloaked the campus in a velvet dark, the quad’s laughter a distant echo, a party Spencer wasn’t invited to. He sprawled on his bed, whisky bottle half-empty, its amber glow catching the desk lamp’s flicker, the room a chaos of cans, clothes, and despair. His phone lay beside him, screen black, a lifeline he’d ignored until the liquor loosened his walls. The weight of nothing—no gang, no team, no wine shed—pressed down, and a memory flickered: Jo van der Merwe’s freckled grin, first-year nights of reckless dares, a warmth Spencer had chased but never held. Jo was gone, on the farm with Piet, but he was all Spencer had left, a ghost of connection in a world turned cold.

He fumbled for the phone, hands trembling, whisky sloshing as he scrolled to Jo’s name. His thumb hovered, doubt clawing—Why would he care? I burned everyone. But despair won, and he hit record, voice slurring, raw with a vulnerability he’d never shown. “Jo, bru… fucked it all up. Gang’s gone, team’s gone, wine shed… all of it. I’m a mess, man, don’t even know why I’m telling you. Just… need a friend, hey? Miss you, miss those days.” The words spilled, jagged, tears pricking as he sent the voice note, phone slipping to the sheets. He sank back, whisky bottle clutched, eyes drifting shut, the room spinning as he waited, expecting silence.

Saturday dawned with a soft light creeping through the blinds, the campus stirring beyond Spencer’s haze. His phone buzzed, a single vibration that jolted him from a whisky-soaked stupor, head pounding, mouth dry as dust. He groped for the device, squinting at the screen, heart lurching at Jo’s name. The text was brief, but its warmth pierced the fog: “Spense, fok, you sound rough. Get on the first bus to Montagu, 10 a.m.—come to the farm, sort your head out. Piet’s cool with it. Don’t overthink, just come.”

Spencer’s breath caught, tears stinging anew, Jo’s words a lifeline he didn’t deserve. The farm—Montagu, Jo and Piet’s world of dirt and roots—felt like another planet, but Jo’s quick reply, no hesitation, was a spark in the dark. He stumbled from bed, the room tilting, and splashed water on his face, the cold a slap to his senses. His duffel lay in a corner, and he stuffed it with jeans, a clean tee, his creased leather jacket—urban armor for a place he didn’t understand. The whisky bottle stared from the desk, half-empty, but he left it, a small act of defiance against the void.

The campus was a blur as he shuffled to the bus stop, head throbbing, heart racing with equal parts dread and hope. The 10 a.m. bus to Montagu rumbled up, its diesel fumes sharp, and Spencer boarded, duffel clutched, blue eyes fixed on the window as Stellenbosch faded. Jo’s text looped in his mind—sort your head out—a promise, a challenge, the only thing tethering him to something beyond the wreckage of his life.
 
Saturday morning broke over the VDMDW farm, the river glinting gold, wheat fields swaying under a cloudless sky. Spencer Clarke stepped off the bus, duffel slung over his shoulder, leather jacket creased, blonde hair a mess from the ride. The whisky hangover throbbed in his temples, but Jo’s text—“Spense, shit, sounds rough. Get your ass to the farm—stay a bit, clear your head”—was a lifeline he’d clung to. The farm’s sprawl, vines heavy with grapes, sheep dotting the hills, felt alien to his urban edge, but Jo’s freckled grin, waiting at the bus stop, was a beacon. “Spense, you look like hell,” Jo said, lanky frame in shorts and a faded rugby jersey, green eyes warm, no trace of judgment. “C’mon, let’s fix you.”

Back on the farm Piet stood by the farmhouse, stocky and sunburnt, brown eyes cautious but not unkind, his faded blue cap a fixture. “Spense,” he nodded, voice reserved, “good you’re here.” The welcome, spare but genuine, eased the knot in Spencer’s chest, and he followed them inside, the kitchen smelling of coffee and mielie bread, Anna’s soft hum a quiet backdrop. The farm was a world of rhythm—Frans’s sharp orders to farmhands, the tractor’s low drone, the river’s murmur—and Spencer threw himself into it, desperate to outrun his despair.

Days blurred into a cycle of labour and tentative belonging. Mornings, he hauled hay with Jo, their shoulders brushing, sweat soaking their shirts as they stacked bales under the blazing sun. Jo’s laughter, loud and unguarded, sparked memories of first-year chaos, and Spencer leaned into it, his old charm flickering. “Still got that fire, Jo,” he’d say, blue eyes glinting, wiping sweat with a grin. Jo chuckled, tossing a bale, “You’re soft, bru—farm’ll toughen you.” The tease was light, but Spencer’s gaze lingered, testing, his hand grazing Jo’s arm, a deliberate echo of Stellenbosch nights.

Afternoons, he trailed Piet in the vineyard, learning to check soil, Piet’s quiet precision a contrast to Jo’s wild energy. Piet’s brown eyes watched him, not hostile but wary, clocking Spencer’s ease with Jo. “You’re quick to learn, Spense,” Piet said once, voice neutral, but the unspoken hung heavy: Don’t overstep. Spencer nodded, playing the guest, but his mind churned—Jo was the spark he’d lost, the one who’d seen him before the deals, the betrayals.

Nights were braais by the river, the oak’s shade cooling the heat, meat sizzling on the fire, Jo’s stories—lambing disasters, Piet’s odd rocks—filling the air with laughter. Spencer sat close to Jo, their knees brushing, his whisky-rough voice softer now, laced with intent. “Remember the quad dashes, bru? You and me, unstoppable,” he said, winking, hand lingering on Jo’s shoulder. Jo laughed, green eyes bright, brushing it off. “Ja, Spense, wild times—I’m settled now, hey” But Spencer pressed, leaning closer, “Still got that spark, don’t you?” His fingers trailed Jo’s arm, a calculated move, the farm’s glow hiding his hunger.

Piet watched, his face unreadable, brown eyes narrowing as Spencer’s flirtation grew bolder. By Wednesday, the tension simmered—Spencer’s winks, his casual touches, Jo’s oblivious chuckles grating on Piet’s nerves. Thursday morning, chopping wood with Jo, Spencer pushed too far. Shirtless, sweat gleaming, he leaned in, axe paused, voice husky. “You’re the same fire, Jo—miss that, bru.” His hand grazed Jo’s back, lingering, a clear line crossed. Jo stepped back, green eyes narrowing, kind but firm. “Spense, I’m with Piet—like properly. Cool it, hey?” He walked off, leaving Spencer frozen, axe heavy, the farm’s dirt a mirror to his misstep, Piet’s gaze burning from the barn.
Thursday evening, the VDMDW farm settled into a restless quiet, the river’s murmur drowned by the storm brewing in Piet’s chest. Spencer’s flirtation with Jo—winks, touches, that wood-chopping move—had crossed from bold to brazen, each glance a needle in Piet’s resolve. Jo’s loyalty held, his sharp rebuff proof, but Piet’s brown eyes saw what Jo missed: Spencer wasn’t healing; he was hunting, his Stellenbosch game cloaked in farm dust. The farmhouse kitchen, warm with Anna’s potjie simmering, felt too small for Piet’s unease, and he slipped out, keys jangling, the Land Rover’s engine a low growl as he headed to Robertson.

Jacques van der Merwe’s office was a fortress of oak and leather, brandy bottles glinting on a shelf, the air heavy with cigar smoke and authority. Jacques sat broad behind his desk, grey hair catching the lamplight, his stern face softening as Piet entered, faded cap in hand. “Pieter, you look like a man with a problem,” Jacques rumbled, pouring two glasses of brandy, the clink of glass a quiet summons. Piet sank into a chair, rough hands gripping the drink, his voice low, his precision laced with fear.

“It’s Spence, Oom,” he started, eyes steady but troubled. “He’s after Jo—flirting, pushing, like he’s playing a game. Winks at braais, touches when they work, today he… got too close, chopping wood. Jo shut it down, but Spence doesn’t stop. I see it, Jo doesn’t. He’s not here to fix himself—he’s chasing control, like he did in Stellenbosch.” The words spilled, raw, his fear for their bond, their farm, laid bare.

Jacques leaned back, brandy swirling, eyes sharp as a hawk’s. “Seen his type, Pieter—all flash, no roots, thinks charm’s a hammer. You’re smarter, always were. Call his bluff, but smart—don’t shout, don’t swing. List his moves like a ledger: what he’s done, who he’s hurt. Lay it out, let silence press ‘til he breaks.” He tapped the desk, voice firm, lessons from their contract battles echoing. “Negotiate like we did with our clause—facts, not feelings. He’ll fold, and you’ll see your own steel. You’ve got it, Pieter—more than you know.”

Piet’s jaw tightened, Jacques’s words a key turning in a lock. He’d faced droughts, budgets, Grandpa’s death, negotiated the farm’s future with Jacques’s guidance—Spencer was just another deal, one he’d close with precision. “How do I make it stick, Oom?” he asked, voice steadier. Jacques’s smile was rare, proud. “Bring Jo in—let him hear it, see it. Corner Spence alone, no audience, just truth. He’s got nowhere to run on your land.” Piet nodded, brandy burning his throat, resolve hardening. “Thanks, Oom. Tomorrow, then.” He stood, cap back on, the Land Rover’s rumble carrying him home, the farm’s stars a map to his next move.
 
Monday blurred into Tuesday, lectures skipped, the campus a distant hum. Spencer stared at the ceiling, whisky bottle cradled against his chest, its burn the only thing cutting through the fog. ... He fumbled for the phone, hands trembling, whisky sloshing as he scrolled to Jo’s name.

Just in time for Spencer to stop himself from turning into his father on the spot.
 
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Saturday morning broke over the VDMDW farm, the river glinting gold, wheat fields swaying under a cloudless sky. Spencer Clarke stepped off the bus, duffel slung over his shoulder, leather jacket creased, blonde hair a mess from the ride. The whisky hangover throbbed in his temples, but Jo’s text—“Spense, shit, sounds rough. Get your ass to the farm—stay a bit, clear your head”—was a lifeline he’d clung to. The farm’s sprawl, vines heavy with grapes, sheep dotting the hills, felt alien to his urban edge, but Jo’s freckled grin, waiting at the bus stop, was a beacon. “Spense, you look like hell,” Jo said, lanky frame in shorts and a faded rugby jersey, green eyes warm, no trace of judgment. “C’mon, let’s fix you.”

Back on the farm Piet stood by the farmhouse, stocky and sunburnt, brown eyes cautious but not unkind, his faded blue cap a fixture. “Spense,” he nodded, voice reserved, “good you’re here.” The welcome, spare but genuine, eased the knot in Spencer’s chest, and he followed them inside, the kitchen smelling of coffee and mielie bread, Anna’s soft hum a quiet backdrop. The farm was a world of rhythm—Frans’s sharp orders to farmhands, the tractor’s low drone, the river’s murmur—and Spencer threw himself into it, desperate to outrun his despair.

Days blurred into a cycle of labour and tentative belonging. Mornings, he hauled hay with Jo, their shoulders brushing, sweat soaking their shirts as they stacked bales under the blazing sun. Jo’s laughter, loud and unguarded, sparked memories of first-year chaos, and Spencer leaned into it, his old charm flickering. “Still got that fire, Jo,” he’d say, blue eyes glinting, wiping sweat with a grin. Jo chuckled, tossing a bale, “You’re soft, bru—farm’ll toughen you.” The tease was light, but Spencer’s gaze lingered, testing, his hand grazing Jo’s arm, a deliberate echo of Stellenbosch nights.

Afternoons, he trailed Piet in the vineyard, learning to check soil, Piet’s quiet precision a contrast to Jo’s wild energy. Piet’s brown eyes watched him, not hostile but wary, clocking Spencer’s ease with Jo. “You’re quick to learn, Spense,” Piet said once, voice neutral, but the unspoken hung heavy: Don’t overstep. Spencer nodded, playing the guest, but his mind churned—Jo was the spark he’d lost, the one who’d seen him before the deals, the betrayals.

Nights were braais by the river, the oak’s shade cooling the heat, meat sizzling on the fire, Jo’s stories—lambing disasters, Piet’s odd rocks—filling the air with laughter. Spencer sat close to Jo, their knees brushing, his whisky-rough voice softer now, laced with intent. “Remember the quad dashes, bru? You and me, unstoppable,” he said, winking, hand lingering on Jo’s shoulder. Jo laughed, green eyes bright, brushing it off. “Ja, Spense, wild times—I’m settled now, hey” But Spencer pressed, leaning closer, “Still got that spark, don’t you?” His fingers trailed Jo’s arm, a calculated move, the farm’s glow hiding his hunger.

Piet watched, his face unreadable, brown eyes narrowing as Spencer’s flirtation grew bolder. By Wednesday, the tension simmered—Spencer’s winks, his casual touches, Jo’s oblivious chuckles grating on Piet’s nerves. Thursday morning, chopping wood with Jo, Spencer pushed too far. Shirtless, sweat gleaming, he leaned in, axe paused, voice husky. “You’re the same fire, Jo—miss that, bru.” His hand grazed Jo’s back, lingering, a clear line crossed. Jo stepped back, green eyes narrowing, kind but firm. “Spense, I’m with Piet—like properly. Cool it, hey?” He walked off, leaving Spencer frozen, axe heavy, the farm’s dirt a mirror to his misstep, Piet’s gaze burning from the barn.
Thursday evening, the VDMDW farm settled into a restless quiet, the river’s murmur drowned by the storm brewing in Piet’s chest. Spencer’s flirtation with Jo—winks, touches, that wood-chopping move—had crossed from bold to brazen, each glance a needle in Piet’s resolve. Jo’s loyalty held, his sharp rebuff proof, but Piet’s brown eyes saw what Jo missed: Spencer wasn’t healing; he was hunting, his Stellenbosch game cloaked in farm dust. The farmhouse kitchen, warm with Anna’s potjie simmering, felt too small for Piet’s unease, and he slipped out, keys jangling, the Land Rover’s engine a low growl as he headed to Robertson.

Jacques van der Merwe’s office was a fortress of oak and leather, brandy bottles glinting on a shelf, the air heavy with cigar smoke and authority. Jacques sat broad behind his desk, grey hair catching the lamplight, his stern face softening as Piet entered, faded cap in hand. “Pieter, you look like a man with a problem,” Jacques rumbled, pouring two glasses of brandy, the clink of glass a quiet summons. Piet sank into a chair, rough hands gripping the drink, his voice low, his precision laced with fear.

“It’s Spence, Oom,” he started, eyes steady but troubled. “He’s after Jo—flirting, pushing, like he’s playing a game. Winks at braais, touches when they work, today he… got too close, chopping wood. Jo shut it down, but Spence doesn’t stop. I see it, Jo doesn’t. He’s not here to fix himself—he’s chasing control, like he did in Stellenbosch.” The words spilled, raw, his fear for their bond, their farm, laid bare.

Jacques leaned back, brandy swirling, eyes sharp as a hawk’s. “Seen his type, Pieter—all flash, no roots, thinks charm’s a hammer. You’re smarter, always were. Call his bluff, but smart—don’t shout, don’t swing. List his moves like a ledger: what he’s done, who he’s hurt. Lay it out, let silence press ‘til he breaks.” He tapped the desk, voice firm, lessons from their contract battles echoing. “Negotiate like we did with our clause—facts, not feelings. He’ll fold, and you’ll see your own steel. You’ve got it, Pieter—more than you know.”

Piet’s jaw tightened, Jacques’s words a key turning in a lock. He’d faced droughts, budgets, Grandpa’s death, negotiated the farm’s future with Jacques’s guidance—Spencer was just another deal, one he’d close with precision. “How do I make it stick, Oom?” he asked, voice steadier. Jacques’s smile was rare, proud. “Bring Jo in—let him hear it, see it. Corner Spence alone, no audience, just truth. He’s got nowhere to run on your land.” Piet nodded, brandy burning his throat, resolve hardening. “Thanks, Oom. Tomorrow, then.” He stood, cap back on, the Land Rover’s rumble carrying him home, the farm’s stars a map to his next move.
Awesome Chapter. Time for Piet to teach Spence a life lesson. Jacques is a wise man, maybe more to him than just the farm in his past. Great writing and your characters are awesome. You are the best...
 
God bless Oom Jacques!

I wonder if he ever hugs anyone besides Carol and his daughters (if them). I'd love to see him hug Piet one day ...
An Afrikaans man show emotion 🤣🤣🤣 hell will freeze over first 🤣
 
The VDMDW farm woke under a crisp dawn, the wheat fields shimmering gold, the vineyard’s rows of heavy vines catching the first light. Spencer trudged through the dirt, blonde hair matted from a restless night, blue eyes shadowed with unease. Jo’s warm invitation had pulled him here, but five days of farm life—hauling hay, chopping wood, dodging Piet’s wary glances—hadn’t dulled the ache of his Stellenbosch collapse. The wine shed rejection, Jacques’s verdict shredding his proposal, still burned, layered atop the captaincy loss to Dylan and Henk and Sarah’s sharp no. His charm, once a weapon, was rusting, and yesterday’s misstep—flirting too hard with Jo while chopping wood—had left a sour knot in his gut.

Piet called him to the vineyard before breakfast, his voice curt through the farmhouse door: “Spense, we need to go for a walk.” Spencer followed, the morning chill biting his bare arms. The vineyard stretched wide, vines curling like silent judges, the river’s distant murmur a faint hum. Piet stood alone near a gnarled trellis, his frame rooted, face set hard, eyes glinting with a resolve honed by Jacques’s brandy-lit counsel. His faded blue cap shaded his brow, hands calloused from farm work flexing at his sides, a man ready to close a deal—or end one.

“Spense,” Piet began, voice low, steady as the earth beneath them, “I know what you did in Stellenbosch. Tried to screw over the wine shed crew—Rachel, JP, Doug. Pushed for 15% equity with a plan Jacques called a gamble, all flash, no substance. You used Doug, didn’t you? Got close, made it a deal.” His words were a blade, precise, cutting through the morning’s quiet. “Come clean, bru—everything. Why you’re here, why you’re in this mess.”

Spencer’s pulse spiked, blue eyes darting to the vines, the dirt, anywhere but Piet’s stare. His grin, once a reflex, faltered, a weak twitch. “Piet, fuck man, that’s old news,” he said, voice strained, forcing a laugh. “Wine shed’s done, yeah? Let’s talk about the farm—vines looking good, hey? You teaching me the ropes?” He stepped closer, running his fingers through his hair, trying to shift the air, his old charm a flimsy shield.

Piet’s jaw tightened, brown eyes unyielding, seeing through the dodge. “Don’t play me, Spense. You’re not here to learn vines—you’re running from what you did. Kyle, Liam, Coach—Henk’s been talking, bru. You fucked your way to votes, to deals, left them burned. Tell me why. Why are you standing here, broken, instead of leading that gang.” His voice stayed calm, Jacques’s ledger trick in full force, facts stacking like stones, no room for escape.

Spencer’s chest heaved, panic clawing, his mind scrambling for a way out. The vineyard closed in, vines looming, Piet’s stare a mirror he couldn’t dodge. His charm had failed—Kyle, Liam, Doug, all turned away—and now Piet stood firm, no crack to exploit. Desperate, he fell back on his last defence, the one that had bent Coach, swayed Doug: seduction. He stepped closer, blue eyes softening, a flirty grin curling his lips. “C’mon, Piet,” he murmured, voice husky, hand brushing Piet’s arm, lingering on his warm skin. “You and me, we could sort this out—we’re getting closer, yeah? No need for this heavy kak.” He leaned in, lips inches from Piet’s ear, thigh grazing his, the old power bottom play, reckless but instinctive.

Piet stiffened, brown eyes flashing, and shoved Spencer back, not hard but firm, his voice a growl. “Fok off with that, Spense. You think I’m some Stellenbosch mark? Try that again, and I’ll throw you off this farm myself—stupid leather jacket and all.” His cap tilted as he stepped forward, looming, the vineyard’s silence amplifying his threat. “Come clean, or you’re gone. Now.”

Spencer stumbled back, dirt crunching under his boots, eyes wide with shock, the flirtation crumbling like ash. Piet’s rejection hit harder than Henk and Sarah’s, a wall he couldn’t charm or fuck through. His knees buckled, and he sank to the ground, tears pricking as the weight of it all—gang, team, wine shed—crashed down. “Fuck, Piet,” he choked, voice raw, hands clawing the dirt. “I fucked it all up. Everything.”

Piet crouched, eyes steady but softer now, waiting. Spencer’s breath hitched, and the dam broke, words spilling like blood. “Kyle, I got him to fuck me for his vote. He promised he’d back me for captain. Liam, same deal, same night, made him feel he owed me, he also fucked me to lock his vote. Coach Van Rensburg… I seduced him in his office, thought it’d seal the captaincy. He fucked me hard, then threw me under and gave it to Dylan, said I was a liability.” Tears streamed now, his voice cracking. “Doug’s the same story I got him to fuck me to get his yes for 15%, made it a deal, not a choice. Henk and Sarah, I tried to pull them in, offered a threesome, thought it’d bind them. They laughed me off, walked away.”

He buried his face in his hands, dirt smearing his cheeks, the vineyard’s silence swallowing his shame. “I used them all, Piet, thought I could build an empire, like Jo and you with the farm. Wanted to be the guy, the leader, but it was all deals, no heart. Now they’re gone, and I’m nothing.”

Piet exhaled, his face softening, but his voice held firm. “You’re not nothing, Spense, but you’re lost. You hurt people, Kyle, Liam, Doug, the gang, ‘cause you thought power’s all that matters. It ain’t. You gotta face it, not run.” He stood, offering a hand, pulling Spencer up, his grip steady. “Come back to the farmhouse. Sit with me and Jo, work through this together, everything, no bullshit. Then you go back to Stellenbosch, tell the gang the truth. That’s your start.”

Spencer nodded, tears drying, blue eyes raw but steady, Piet’s hand a lifeline he didn’t deserve. The vineyard’s vines no longer judges but witnesses, the farm’s dirt grounding him as they walked back, the weight of confession looming, a step toward something real.
 
The VDMDW farm woke under a crisp dawn, the wheat fields shimmering gold, the vineyard’s rows of heavy vines catching the first light. Spencer trudged through the dirt, blonde hair matted from a restless night, blue eyes shadowed with unease. Jo’s warm invitation had pulled him here, but five days of farm life—hauling hay, chopping wood, dodging Piet’s wary glances—hadn’t dulled the ache of his Stellenbosch collapse. The wine shed rejection, Jacques’s verdict shredding his proposal, still burned, layered atop the captaincy loss to Dylan and Henk and Sarah’s sharp no. His charm, once a weapon, was rusting, and yesterday’s misstep—flirting too hard with Jo while chopping wood—had left a sour knot in his gut.

Piet called him to the vineyard before breakfast, his voice curt through the farmhouse door: “Spense, we need to go for a walk.” Spencer followed, the morning chill biting his bare arms. The vineyard stretched wide, vines curling like silent judges, the river’s distant murmur a faint hum. Piet stood alone near a gnarled trellis, his frame rooted, face set hard, eyes glinting with a resolve honed by Jacques’s brandy-lit counsel. His faded blue cap shaded his brow, hands calloused from farm work flexing at his sides, a man ready to close a deal—or end one.

“Spense,” Piet began, voice low, steady as the earth beneath them, “I know what you did in Stellenbosch. Tried to screw over the wine shed crew—Rachel, JP, Doug. Pushed for 15% equity with a plan Jacques called a gamble, all flash, no substance. You used Doug, didn’t you? Got close, made it a deal.” His words were a blade, precise, cutting through the morning’s quiet. “Come clean, bru—everything. Why you’re here, why you’re in this mess.”

Spencer’s pulse spiked, blue eyes darting to the vines, the dirt, anywhere but Piet’s stare. His grin, once a reflex, faltered, a weak twitch. “Piet, fuck man, that’s old news,” he said, voice strained, forcing a laugh. “Wine shed’s done, yeah? Let’s talk about the farm—vines looking good, hey? You teaching me the ropes?” He stepped closer, running his fingers through his hair, trying to shift the air, his old charm a flimsy shield.

Piet’s jaw tightened, brown eyes unyielding, seeing through the dodge. “Don’t play me, Spense. You’re not here to learn vines—you’re running from what you did. Kyle, Liam, Coach—Henk’s been talking, bru. You fucked your way to votes, to deals, left them burned. Tell me why. Why are you standing here, broken, instead of leading that gang.” His voice stayed calm, Jacques’s ledger trick in full force, facts stacking like stones, no room for escape.

Spencer’s chest heaved, panic clawing, his mind scrambling for a way out. The vineyard closed in, vines looming, Piet’s stare a mirror he couldn’t dodge. His charm had failed—Kyle, Liam, Doug, all turned away—and now Piet stood firm, no crack to exploit. Desperate, he fell back on his last defence, the one that had bent Coach, swayed Doug: seduction. He stepped closer, blue eyes softening, a flirty grin curling his lips. “C’mon, Piet,” he murmured, voice husky, hand brushing Piet’s arm, lingering on his warm skin. “You and me, we could sort this out—we’re getting closer, yeah? No need for this heavy kak.” He leaned in, lips inches from Piet’s ear, thigh grazing his, the old power bottom play, reckless but instinctive.

Piet stiffened, brown eyes flashing, and shoved Spencer back, not hard but firm, his voice a growl. “Fok off with that, Spense. You think I’m some Stellenbosch mark? Try that again, and I’ll throw you off this farm myself—stupid leather jacket and all.” His cap tilted as he stepped forward, looming, the vineyard’s silence amplifying his threat. “Come clean, or you’re gone. Now.”

Spencer stumbled back, dirt crunching under his boots, eyes wide with shock, the flirtation crumbling like ash. Piet’s rejection hit harder than Henk and Sarah’s, a wall he couldn’t charm or fuck through. His knees buckled, and he sank to the ground, tears pricking as the weight of it all—gang, team, wine shed—crashed down. “Fuck, Piet,” he choked, voice raw, hands clawing the dirt. “I fucked it all up. Everything.”

Piet crouched, eyes steady but softer now, waiting. Spencer’s breath hitched, and the dam broke, words spilling like blood. “Kyle, I got him to fuck me for his vote. He promised he’d back me for captain. Liam, same deal, same night, made him feel he owed me, he also fucked me to lock his vote. Coach Van Rensburg… I seduced him in his office, thought it’d seal the captaincy. He fucked me hard, then threw me under and gave it to Dylan, said I was a liability.” Tears streamed now, his voice cracking. “Doug’s the same story I got him to fuck me to get his yes for 15%, made it a deal, not a choice. Henk and Sarah, I tried to pull them in, offered a threesome, thought it’d bind them. They laughed me off, walked away.”

He buried his face in his hands, dirt smearing his cheeks, the vineyard’s silence swallowing his shame. “I used them all, Piet, thought I could build an empire, like Jo and you with the farm. Wanted to be the guy, the leader, but it was all deals, no heart. Now they’re gone, and I’m nothing.”

Piet exhaled, his face softening, but his voice held firm. “You’re not nothing, Spense, but you’re lost. You hurt people, Kyle, Liam, Doug, the gang, ‘cause you thought power’s all that matters. It ain’t. You gotta face it, not run.” He stood, offering a hand, pulling Spencer up, his grip steady. “Come back to the farmhouse. Sit with me and Jo, work through this together, everything, no bullshit. Then you go back to Stellenbosch, tell the gang the truth. That’s your start.”

Spencer nodded, tears drying, blue eyes raw but steady, Piet’s hand a lifeline he didn’t deserve. The vineyard’s vines no longer judges but witnesses, the farm’s dirt grounding him as they walked back, the weight of confession looming, a step toward something real.
Jayson, you continue to amaze me with you use of words and character development. I say again, you are an excellent writer and your work stands out from all other stories on this site. You deliver examples of life lessons, signs of hope and redemption if you want it and work for it. This has been awesome reading and a rewarding journey for all of your readers. We are fortunate to be on this ride with you. Thanks and much appreciated. I hope you know your value.
 
Piet’s jaw tightened, brown eyes unyielding, seeing through the dodge. “Don’t play me, Spense. You’re not here to learn vines—you’re running from what you did. Kyle, Liam, Coach—Henk’s been talking, bru."

Whoa! How did they find out about Coach?


"You fucked your way to votes, to deals, left them burned. Tell me why. Why are you standing here, broken, instead of leading that gang.

Nice injection of compassion into the toughness, Piet!


“You’re not nothing, Spense, but you’re lost. You hurt people, Kyle, Liam, Doug, the gang, ‘cause you thought power’s all that matters. It ain’t. You gotta face it, not run.” He stood, offering a hand, pulling Spencer up, his grip steady. “Come back to the farmhouse. Sit with me and Jo, work through this together, everything, no bullshit. Then you go back to Stellenbosch, tell the gang the truth. That’s your start.”

Well done, Pieter de Wet!

Bad cop and good cop, all in one person. Intimidate Spencer into submission, then offer him understanding and help. You'd hardly know Piet's only 20. (Or has he turned 21 by now?)

Piet, you've got a talent for this, hey?

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Now, by the time Spencer gets back to school, he'll have missed two weeks of lectures and water polo practice. I expect the gang knows where he's been (no doubt Jo and Piet told Henk that Spencer's at the farm), though the professors and Coach may not know. I wonder what the fallout from Spencer's absence will be and how he'll handle it ...