Onecrotchman
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Looks like Bobby and Luke planned everything.
You did a real, real nice job with the masculine interaction, the uncertainty coupled with the hidden desires found in many men, the breaking of barriers, the unusual but still sensual interaction between real blood brothers, and the commonality of desperately needed manly sexual release. I admit that you had this uncut dude leaking like the uncut men in the story (which is to say...a LOT), and so thank you!Hey everybody, thank you for reading the story, and for the support. I really appreciate it. I hope you guys were entertained.
However, I'm going to take a short break from continuing the story. I need to fill up the creativity tank, I wrote the story without having a particular ending in mind, except for the end of the weekend, which means there's one more day and one more night left.
I kind of allowed the story to progress with what seemed logical for the setting and the characters: a bunch of relatively open-minded straight (?) guys who are on a weekend away from their old lives and responsibilities.
What was supposed to be a story about a bunch of dudes fucking the shit out of each other, turned into a weird exploration of a brotherhood between men, of guys leaning into those parts of themselves that they thought they had outgrown as they reached adulthood. I never expected it to be this lengthy, that it would take this route, but here we are.
I had a lot of fun writing this, I have to admit.
I do have some ideas on how to continue this... so in the future I will update this. It's just that I don't know when that might be exactly. I might even post it on some site that hosts erotica, I saw some people here referencing various sites, so I might check those out. Whatever happens with that, if I do post it somewhere else, I'll let you know here as well.
So again, thank you all for reading, thank you for the support and the feedback. I really hope you enjoyed following this story along, as it basically wrote itself.
I loved how the story progressed . Friendly to exploration and then total enjoyment of what all us guys treasure. The docking segment was my favorite as I have explored it with a uncut bud and it was amazingHey everybody, thank you for reading the story, and for the support. I really appreciate it. I hope you guys were entertained.
However, I'm going to take a short break from continuing the story. I need to fill up the creativity tank, I wrote the story without having a particular ending in mind, except for the end of the weekend, which means there's one more day and one more night left.
I kind of allowed the story to progress with what seemed logical for the setting and the characters: a bunch of relatively open-minded straight (?) guys who are on a weekend away from their old lives and responsibilities.
What was supposed to be a story about a bunch of dudes fucking the shit out of each other, turned into a weird exploration of a brotherhood between men, of guys leaning into those parts of themselves that they thought they had outgrown as they reached adulthood. I never expected it to be this lengthy, that it would take this route, but here we are.
I had a lot of fun writing this, I have to admit.
I do have some ideas on how to continue this... so in the future I will update this. It's just that I don't know when that might be exactly. I might even post it on some site that hosts erotica, I saw some people here referencing various sites, so I might check those out. Whatever happens with that, if I do post it somewhere else, I'll let you know here as well.
So again, thank you all for reading, thank you for the support and the feedback. I really hope you enjoyed following this story along, as it basically wrote itself.
This story is fantastic! Take your time but I am excited to read a continuation if you make one. The dialogue, the characters, and the jerking off are perfect and realistic! If you ever need a proofreader, I'd be happy to help. This story is just so good! <3 <3 <3Hey everybody, thank you for reading the story, and for the support. I really appreciate it. I hope you guys were entertained.
However, I'm going to take a short break from continuing the story. I need to fill up the creativity tank, I wrote the story without having a particular ending in mind, except for the end of the weekend, which means there's one more day and one more night left.
I kind of allowed the story to progress with what seemed logical for the setting and the characters: a bunch of relatively open-minded straight (?) guys who are on a weekend away from their old lives and responsibilities.
What was supposed to be a story about a bunch of dudes fucking the shit out of each other, turned into a weird exploration of a brotherhood between men, of guys leaning into those parts of themselves that they thought they had outgrown as they reached adulthood. I never expected it to be this lengthy, that it would take this route, but here we are.
I had a lot of fun writing this, I have to admit.
I do have some ideas on how to continue this... so in the future I will update this. It's just that I don't know when that might be exactly. I might even post it on some site that hosts erotica, I saw some people here referencing various sites, so I might check those out. Whatever happens with that, if I do post it somewhere else, I'll let you know here as well.
So again, thank you all for reading, thank you for the support and the feedback. I really hope you enjoyed following this story along, as it basically wrote itself.
Fuckinh hot bro, wish I was hanging with those guys, I would be sucking and eating their asses like no tomorrowPart 3: An interrupted supply trip.
Driving with a boner isn’t the most pleasant of driving experiences, and having Luke sit next to me, aware of my erection made it awkward, but not in an uncomfortable way. I couldn’t explain it, but there seemed to be some tension in the air. I felt a teenager again, something within me stirred up that teenaged curiosity, to see, to compare and to discover.
Knowing that Luke had a boner going for him, that just sealed the deal. I didn’t know what to say, though I had a million things that I wanted to say. Luke was pitching a tent, I was pitching a tent, we were both very aware of the situation.
“Shit, dude, pull over,” Luke said as we drove past nothing worth of note. It was just trees and a road that seemed to disappear somewhere beyond more trees. We left the town behind us quite some time ago. I reckon we had about thirty more minutes till we reached the lodge and the rest of the guys. I wondered what they had been doing these last couple of hours. “Just pull over.”
“Why?”
“I need…” Luke said pausing to search for words. “I need to take a piss.”
“Oh,” I noted dryly. “Yeah, sure. Good idea.”
Without saying anything else I parked the car on the side of the road. Luke opened the door and got out, stretching. I got out, stretched out just like Luke and adjusted my dick as it hadn’t quite settled down and was now positioned awkwardly. Just touching it through the fabric made the blood flow back.
I looked at Luke, who looked at my crotch: “Yeah, I doubt you can piss with a hard-on.”
“Fuck, yeah, you’re right I guess,” I took a quick peek at Luke’s crotch, he was still pitching a tent. I pointed and smirked: “And again, I’m not the only one sporting wood.”
“Yeah, well, I didn’t jack off yesterday, and obviously didn’t have the opportunity to do it today. So, you know, that thing’s got a will of its own,” he said with a cheeky grin.
“So now what,” I asked. “Do our math-homework?”
“Hey dude,” Luke said, ignoring my comment. “Mind if I ask you something?”
“Go ahead,” I said. My heart skipped a beat, this was dangerous territory. What the fuck was Luke going to ask me? All this talk about gangbangs, sex, all that shit, both of us sporting wood, what’s there to ask?
“You’re uncut, right?”
“What? Yeah, I am. Wait aren’t you uncut too, I mean the other day…”
“Yeah, no, I am that’s right. It’s just, so I was wondering, it’s stupid, but I was wondering do chicks like it?”
“Some do, I guess, I had plenty of girls who seemed fascinated by it. Kind of a unique selling point around here.”
“Cool,” Luke said sounding a bit distracted. “So, like, has a girl ever turned you down because of it?”
“Not that I’m aware of,” I answered truthfully.
“I had this one chick tell me that it looked weird. Totally left me with a case of the blue balls.”
I felt for the guy. The tent in his jeans had subsided, and this turn of events made him vulnerable. I kind of appreciated him showing me that vulnerable side. It made him more human, it made him someone I could trust as much as he could trust me. We shared something, something that set us apart from most of the guys in our town.
I saw him get a bit flushed, visibly uncomfortable. He wanted to say or ask more, but I figured he didn’t feel quite at ease yet to really let his guard down. I kind of wanted to help him, but again, my blood was rushing with hormones and I was kind of curious what he was really talking about, and what his dick looked like. I wanted to know how he measured up to mine. That strange mix between a genuine human connection and the curiosity that I thought I lost ages ago.
“Chicks are weird like that sometimes, don’t let it get to you.”
“Yeah I guess,” he replied sounding disappointed by my reply. I could still see him struggle to reach that part that he was afraid to reach.
“So, storm died down,” I said pointing at his jeans and mine. I smiled, trying to sound casual.
“Yeah, guess we’re good to go.”
I suspected something, so I walked to the nearest tree, unzipped my jeans and just waited for a bit. If my suspicions were correct, Luke would take the next step.
“So, you still got a semi, and you’re still too shy to piss in front of other dude?” I heard Luke say as he positioned himself next to me.
He was pretty damn forward all of a sudden, proving my suspicions right. He stood next to me, unzipped and instead of releasing a stream of piss, he just stood there with his cock out. Just like I was standing there with my cock out.
“Dude, you’re checking out my dick, aren’t you?”
“Yeah, sorry,” Luke said apologetically and rushed. I saw him turn and zip up in the corner of my eye.
“It’s okay, just bros here,” I quickly said, making it clear that he didn’t cross any lines with me. I turned my head to take a look at his dick. He held it in his left hand, clearly it was semi-erect like mine, but he wasn’t turning limp, in fact, he was slowly growing. I held my dick in my right hand, and felt it grow as well. We were quiet for a second or two. Luke wiggled his hips and his jeans and boxers dropped to the ground, giving me a very clear image of his dick and his sandy-blonde pubes. I obliged and allowed my jeans to fall to the ground as well. I squeezed my dick gently, staring at his, then staring at mine, but avoiding eye-contact at all cost.
“Jealous?” I said, but it came out like a rushed whisper.
“How big is it? Fully hard I mean?” Luke asked.
“Little over 7 inches I think. It’s been a while since I measured. Yours?”
“On a good day, I might reach 7 inches, but it looks like you’ve got me beat by more than a little. When did you last measure it?”
“Fuck if I know,” I said, milking my cock gently, studying it, comparing it to Luke’s. “Been a while I guess, I think I was, like, 14 or something.”
“It’s definitely bigger than mine is. I’m not the biggest, definitely not the smallest, but yours is a pretty good specimen. Fucking nice cock dude.”
“Thanks, I guess,” I said with a smile. Luke was milking his dick. Squeezing the base, pushing the blood to the tip to get it bigger. We were both pretending we were still just guys taking a piss, waiting to unleash, but by that moment we both knew we weren’t waiting for anything other than someone to move from just squeezing and shaking, to jacking it.
“So, when you get fully hard, does your foreskin cover your dickhead, or does it, I dunno, curl back by itself?” Luke asked earnestly.
“Take a look,” I said, letting my dick stand out without any support from my hand.
“Yeah, mine does the same thing, like, partially covered and stuff. I mean I never really saw another uncut dick. I always wondered if mine was, you know, normal.”
“Seems pretty damn normal to me.”
I couldn’t tell if look was smiling, but I could tell he was fully erect. He dropped his hand and let his dick bounce up and down. It looked like a good dick, his foreskin had retracted a little, but the glans was still covered, just like mine. He had a think vein running the length of it. It was shorter than mine was, maybe a little les thick than mine, but it was a good dick nonetheless.
It hit me that I was comparing dicks with Bobby’s younger brother. Sure, the guy was probably as tall as I was, and younger meant only two or three years in this case, but still. I was comparing dicks with Bobby’s younger brother, and I was clearly the winner of that contest.
“So?” Luke asked with a certain amount of expectation locked into that one single word.
“Yeah,” I said, not really waiting for any kind of sign. I just started slowly jacking my dick.
Luke didn’t join me, he just looked at my dick. Looked at how I was jacking off. I took my time to give him a little show. Pulled my foreskin back and forth. Slowly and methodically. I felt hot and ready to pop, but I didn’t want to yet. My balls ached for release, but I didn’t want to cum too soon. I wanted to impress Luke, and that thought struck me as remarkable. I wondered why I wanted to impress him.
Luke joined in, but his technique was different. He pulled his foreskin back, spat in his hand and used his spit to start work on his dickhead.
“Isn’t that way too sensitive?”
“What? This? Yeah, sometimes, drives me up the fucking wall,” he paused to spit again. “But in a good way. You never tried it?”
I didn’t answer, instead I repeated his technique, pulled my foreskin back, exposing my dickhead to the warm air. I spat in my hand, twice, and started to do what Luke was doing. I shuddered, this sharp unpleasantly pleasant sensation surging through my dick and my entire body.
“Keep going dude,” Luke said.
“I really gotta nut,” I said.
“Me too, wanna make it a contest?”
“What are we betting?”
“The guy who cums farthest wins, winner gets to decide what the loser has to do.”
“You’re on,” I said.
With our hard ons we walked back to the car, to the road. With my foot I drew a line. The starting line. And with that the contest had begun. I could have nutted right then and there, but I wanted to win, so I postponed that moment of no return as best I could. Building up tension, building up pressure.
Luke was jacking it hard, and he seemed to switch techniques midway. I could see him work that dick like a goddamn pro. He too was postponing, and I figured for the exact same reason.
I couldn’t hold it much longer and I figured to just let it fly. I jerked it good, jacked it hard, stimulated and squeezed everything I could stimulate and squeeze, just to make sure that when I blasted, my foreskin was fully retracted, noting to stand in the way of my jet of cum.
“I’m going to come,” I whispered.
“Yeah bro, do it,” Luke said, not stopping, but watching me jack it.
It came hard and fast. It was one of the most intense orgasms I had ever had. I didn’t want to moan, but fucking hell, I moaned low and hard as I worked my dick up and down and the cum shot out. Holy shit, that release felt so fucking amazing, like I hadn’t orgasmed in over a week. Like I’ve been edging for five hours. Cum shot out, I buckled and fucked the air in front of me as I unloaded my balls.
I heard Luke say something, but I couldn’t tell what. When I looked in his direction I saw him furiously jacking his dick, slightly hunched over and growling. “Yea, here it cums!”
He let go, arching his back, head in the air, moaning loudly. I saw a spray of cum exit his dick. Spraying the ground before. I was impressed by the amount of cum the guy produced. I wasn’t sure where mine had landed, but I was pretty sure it wasn’t as much as Luke’s load. He dripped onto the ground in front of his feet. His dick going limp.
I noticed something unusual, while my dick had gone limp, there was no sense of shame or guilt washing over me. Post-nut clarity wasn’t really a thing at that moment. I kind of liked it. If I wanted, I could probably go again, I figured, just after a short break.
“Fucking hell Luke, part man, part fire-hydrant?”
“Fucking hell man, I swear to go, that was in my top three best orgasms. That shit was wild and weird.”
“Same here, that was… intense. Who’s the winner tho?” I asked.
We looked down, traced the cum on the ground. Luke’s canvas was a mess, drops of cum everywhere. Mine was a bit more subdued, three definite hits.
“Definitely you, you got me beat on distance.”
“Fuck yeah,” I said with some slight exhaustion noticeable in my voice, as if I had just run a marathon.
“Hey, uuuhm,” Luke said as I saw him pull up his jeans. “So, yeah, this was weird and all.”
“Yeah, but I don’t know, I’m not gonna lie. I kind of enjoyed this. Besides I won.”
“No I mean…”
“Yeah dude, don’t worry, this is between you, me, and those millions of potential babies on the ground there.”
“Yeah cool,” Luke said with a smile. “But you won… so I guess you’re going to collect one of these day.”
“I guess I will, but best to let you enjoy the anticipation a while longer,” I laughed as I made my way to step back behind the wheel.
“Deal’s a deal,” Luke said with a slight grin on his lips. Nervous, obviously, but there was something else there. Something I was now pretty sure about. Bobby’s little brother… was kind of a freak, but in a good way. I figured this was going to be a very interesting weekend.
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