Weekend with the guys

Part 8: making connections

Bobby sighed deeply, his dick still dripping. He was soft, the difference with his hard on wasn’t that great. I was unsure if this meant Bobby was a shower, not a grower, but it might just have been that he had been working that dick for a good while and even as it cooled down from the beating he had given it, it wouldn’t go back to its original flaccid size.

Bobby was spent, but he didn’t leave the room. He stayed as the rest of us were still busy working our meat.

I watched as Jason as he faced David, the difference in size obvious as they stood there. Both their dicks were wet with lube. David grinned, he seemed dominant, ready to let Jason know who was boss. He grabbed the base of his dick, swung it in Jason’s direction. His dick touched Jason’s dick, and Jason reciprocated by moving from side to side. The two dicks slid past each other. David’s thick member, veiny and impressive as it seemed to dwarf Jason’s cock. Bobby smiled as he said: “Sword fight” at the sight of the two dicks playfully being rubbed against each other.

Playful, but at the same time there was no denying that this was something else than schoolboys trying to have a moment. David was clearly enjoying this, his shlong heavy and imposing, he was rock hard and I judged from the look of it, he was hard because he could see the difference in size. David leaned into this moment too eagerly. I wasn’t sure about Jason, he played the game without hesitating. Did Jason have a freaky side to him? Did Jason enjoy seeing another man dwarf his dick?

I pictured Jason as he had caressed my dick just moments ago, how he had seemed in awe of my size. His hand cupping my manhood, sliding over the length of it while his own dick was rock hard. How he had used my precum to wet his own dick. Jason enjoyed holding my dick, he enjoyed watching David’s dick brush his.

I joined the two. It was partly because I wanted David to not get too cocky about his dick. He might have been bigger than Jason, but I still had him beat in the dick department. I knew that he had complicated feelings about not being the biggest guy here.

I stepped in close, jutted out my dick. Three dicks collided, my uncut dick hitting David’s dick first, then turning a little, I slapped Jason’s. I was clearly the winner in this gathering. David laughed as he shifted his attention from dominating Jason’s pecker, to trying to hit my dick.

I retreated a little as he slapped his dick against mine, the sound of two cocks, one wet with lube, the other with precum, was noticeable. I gave David this strange little victory. He seemed to beam at that. He grabbed his dick, milked it proudly.

Adam tapped my shoulder. I turned to face him. He looked like he was aching to ask me something, but by the pained look on his face it wasn’t something he asked easily. I couldn’t tell what he was trying to ask. “Dude, just spit it out,” I said.

“So, not gay or anything, you know,” he said. I nodded in agreement. “But there’s this thing…”

“What?” I asked with some impatience in my voice.

“Ok, well, only if you’re cool with it I guess. I mean, like, shit,” Adam mumbled awkwardly. I looked down, his cock had lost a fair share of its hardness, mine was also taking a break from being fully erect. “So, there’s this thing, it’s called docking or something.”

I listened. I knew what docking was, but surprised that Adam had heard of it. I wasn’t quite sure what this fascination was with being uncut. I felt my meat pulse a little.

“So, I was thinking, it’s supposed to feel like your uncut and stuff. I mean, I figure, I don’t really know any other uncut guys like you and Luke,” Adam said, I noticed how nervous he had gotten. He was asking me something forbidden, something taboo, but something he was genuinely willing to try, something he had thought about in the privacy of his own room.

“You wanna feel what it’s like to have foreskin?” I asked. I phrased it like that, avoiding the word docking. That would have made it weird. That would have placed the emphasis on that act, not the sensation.

“What?” Jason asked. “Is that true? Like, is that even possible?”

“I guess,” I replied. “Sure I’m willing to try. Just let me cool down a bit more. If my meat is hard it becomes harder to do it I think.”

Adam didn’t smile openly, but I did catch him perking up. His dick throbbed a little after I had agreed to it.

“Wait, if that’s real,” Jason said. “I want to try it too.”

There was less shame in Jason’s voice and mannerisms. Adam hesitated, wanted to make sure there were no misgivings about him, while Jason leapt into a new situation not giving a damn. This night, this weekend changed the way I viewed Jason. He was a horny little fucker, he liked new things, wasn’t afraid to experiment.

“Luke?” I heard Jason say as he turned to where Luke was sitting. “Is that something all of you guys can do?”

“What?”

“Docking.”

“Yeah, I think I could do that,” Luke said, flicking his flaccid manhood. He had cooled down sufficiently and was back in the game. I caught David, he looked at us, but was gently playing with his hard dick. I couldn’t tell what was going through his mind. He turned to say something to Bobby, but I couldn’t tell what they were saying. I caught Bobby’s meat rising again, surprised to see that happen so soon.

Adam stood in front of me, he took his dickhead, positioned it against mine. I felt his handle fumble and I made an effort to try to not get rock hard from the stimulation. I managed, but it wasn’t an easy task. I felt Adam against me. He was clumsy, the slit of his dick touching mine.

As he tried I took over. Replaced his hand with my own, and grabbed his dick with my other hand. “Hold it there,” I told him. Adam complied.

I gently pressed the head of my shlong against his, pulled my foreskin a little back and then back over my dickhead. I exhaled, focusing on the task below. I didn’t fumble as much as Adam had. I pushed and rolled and eventually managed to cover a fair share of Adam’s glans with my foreskin. I looked at it, it was a sight. My foreskin covering two cockheads. Adam took over, pulled at my foreskin to roll it even further over his dick.

“Holy shit,” he exclaimed softly. “This feels weird.”

“It feels interesting,” I replied.

“It’s warm,” Adam stated as he started moving my foreskin over his meat. He was getting harder, while I managed to keep mine under control. He pushed harder into my dick, afraid that if he got fully hard, he wouldn’t be able to cover his manhood with my foreskin, losing the sensation, losing the fantasy. I allowed him to continue without saying a word, just following his lead and his movements.

The other guys were looking at the scene, fascinated.

Luke and Jason positioned themselves next to us, mimicking our tactics. Luke let out a little nervous laugh, shaking loose his shoulders as if getting ready for the big game. Jason asked: “You cool, dude?”

“Ice, ice, baby,” Luke sang a little. If Jason was worried, Luke took it upon himself to dispel those worries. He took the lead. Grabbing Jason’s meat, positioning the tips just right. He trust his dick against Jason’s and covered Jason’s exposed glans with his foreskin. It went easier than with me and Adam, perhaps because Adam was bigger than Jason, perhaps because Luke’s foreskin was looser than mine. It didn’t matter, not really.

“Holy shit,” Jason said, turning to Adam. “This feels… yeah, you’re right, this feels weird.”

“I know right,” Adam said as he looked down at our dicks. He was fast reaching the point of being fully erect. He pulled away a little, the distance between our dicks revealed a long gleaming strand of precum between our dicks. It looked slippery. The sight of it made my dick grow. Despite my efforts to keep it under control.

“My turn,” David said as Adam stepped further away. David took the position Adam held seconds before. He looked down. My dick too hard just yet. “Hold on, let me cool down a little.”

Jason and Luke in the meanwhile were involved. I watched as Luke jacked it slowly, only for Jason to take over. It was interesting to see. Jason’s head was fully covered by Luke’s foreskin, he was perfectly hard. He started from Luke’s base, rand his hand along the shaft and down his own dick. He made shorter movements as he reached his covered dickhead, really feeling the foreskin as it glid over his glans. He enjoyed it, enjoyed the sensation and the sight of it. I could tell.

“Ready?” David asked me.

“Yeah,” I said nodding.

I placed me hand on my dick, grabbed David’s member. He didn’t let me do much, as he almost immediately took control of the situation. Grabbing my dick, grabbing his, pressing them together. He gave me an order to hold my dick a certain way.

David was a little bit more forceful than I had expected, but at the same time it was exactly what I expected from him after having seen him cut loose and lose his inhibitions this night. He grabbed my foreskin with his fingers, stretched it out gently and then let his own dick slide into it as much as he pulled it over his cockhead. I was fascinated, this was surprisingly hot.

I felt his dick press against mine, I felt how a wave of precum built up and made its way out of my dick. I couldn’t tell what was happening, but I knew that fluid flowed from my manhood, it oozed.

Jason and Luke uncoupled, leaving Bobby the only guy there not to have had the experience. He was hard, post-nut clarity not an issue apparently.

We had solidly lost most of our boundaries, there was an unspoken rule that we had crossed into forbidden territory. I looked and smiled at Luke and the other guys. They smiled, nodded. Adam felt the need to confirm what had already been decided on in silence, through a series of escalating actions.

“So, none of this leaves this group, right?”

We all agreed.

“Ok, cool,” he concluded.

It was at that moment I realized that he wasn’t asking to confirm something to himself, not to admit, but to give permission to others.

I watched Luke turn to Bobby, “So, bro? You game?”

Bobby waited with an answer, looking down at his dick, at Luke’s dick. Bobby was hard. He had already given his answer, without saying a word, but the unspoken rule of the night was that we needed to ask, and someone needed to answer. To somehow make it less personal. Asking meant that it was all just working theory out in practice. It created a comfortable distance between our bodies and our minds and desires. We were ‘just curious’ and that made pushing the limits completely acceptable. It made it so we weren’t doing this out of lust and desire for dick, it made it an exercise in masculinity and strengthening the bonds of brotherhood. We were friends, we were just helping each other out.

“Yeah, sure,” I heard Bobby answer.

While David was slowly jacking my foreskin over his dick I glanced over at Bobby and Luke. The older brother and his younger brother docking, it felt taboo, but at the same time it didn’t feel wrong. I wondered if they had ever done anything like this before. I guess they hadn’t. Luke’s meat was larger than Bobby’s, I figured Luke was enjoying that as much as having his brothers dick pressed against his.

David whispered something, pulled back. I watched as my suspicions were confirmed. Precum dripped down on the ground. It felt like a warm release. David smiled: “Holy shit dude, you produce a lot of precum. Damn!”

“Yeah, I laughed.

Luke and Bobby were quiet, but busy. Luke let out a sigh, it was wavering, he was getting close. I could tell. He stepped back, and their dicks stopped touching. I caught Bobby as he jerked his brothers big fuck-stick a couple of tugs. Squeezing it, twisting his fist around it. It seemed to me that Bobby was almost teasing his little brother by doing that. It was short, almost secretive, but I had seen it.

We had been working our dicks for what seemed like an eternity. Exchanging experiences, matching our techniques with each other. Comparing and learning. My balls ached for release as I imagined the others felt the same way. The only one who had already blasted his load of cum had been Bobby, and he was going for a second round.

Jason was the first to just admit to it. “Dudes, I need to fucking release.”

He moved to the table without discussing anything. We followed suit.

Bobby and Luke took positions across each other. David stood next to Luke, Adam next to Bobby. I stood at the head of the table and Jason opposite of me, he was blocking the television. Somebody had put the video of the rich couple back on. We watched on as the girl got dicked by that insane monster meat. Her pussy spread open, juices flowing as she creamed on that massive meat.

“Yo, Jason, move bro.”

Jason complied, taking position next to me.

We all fell quiet, half watching the video, half looking down, looking at our own dicks and the dicks of our friends.

Bobby’s first load was still visible, it had gone from milky white to clear. A splattering of little drops. There was a distinct smell that hung in the room, sweat, hormones, cum, precum as we all jacked it.

I checked to see the others beating their meat. Everybody using a different technique.

“God fucking damn,” I heard Luke say. We all watched him. He bucked, thrusting his hips, pulling his foreskin back while cupping his nuts with his other hand. He was climaxing. He let out a deep animalistic grunt as we all saw him shoot one lengthy, thick rope of semen. The table wasn’t small, but it wasn’t large either. I don’t think anyone expected for anyone else to shoot for distance, but Luke managed to do just that.

Luke’s jizz hit Bobby on the leg. We weren’t grossed out, we were impressed. As his brother’s cum hit Bobby’s leg I heard Adam grunt. He fucked the air in front of him. Where Luke continued to jack it during his climax, Adam had stopped just a fraction of a second before his climax. He held his dick at the base with both hands. His load was impressive as well, not for distance as much as it was for volume. Thick drops of semen landed on the table. It was a lot. He shuddered as it landed, groaned and then proceeded to squeeze out the last drops of cum.

I felt my balls clench. My turn to go. I increased my speed. Jacking it harder and harder, faster and faster. I pulled back my foreskin at the moment of release, showing the guys my massive meat. Showing them why I was the biggest, why I had the manliest fuckmeat of them all. Towering even over David.

I shot my load, three ropes of cum, two of which landed over the table, on hitting the wood, mixing with the loads already spilled. I felt like the man.

“Fuck yeah,” Jason hissed next to me. He moved his hand fast and furiously, his strokes shorter, but still running the length of his cock. He was wet with lube and precum, I could tell he held a relatively loose grip on his dick, whereas I really squeezed it hard.

Shortest of the group, but that load Jason produced was truly epic. He must have been building it up since this morning, if not last night, because, goddamn, it seemed like there was no end to it. It flew everywhere, I think he even hit at least one of the guys with that cream.

Someone said something about being fucking impressed.

Bobby was next, as the smell of cum started drifting up. I noticed that the cum on his leg had been smeared, like he had scooped it up and now used it as lube. His dick was coated in a foamy lubricant as he went for it. He shot, again, mostly a spray-pattern. The cum watery.

David shot his load. He was aggressive as he beat his meat. He sounded like an animal. He went for gold. Thrust, let his dick unload over the table. A good load, but again, he wasn’t the winner. I had him beat in shooting distance, so had Luke, Jason, despite having the smallest cock, had outshined us all with his load.

“Holy shit,” someone said. I didn’t care who, I was dizzy. Spent.



The table and parts of the floor were soaked in our cum. I looked at Luke, he grinned an gave me a tight little wink. We were all spent.

“I’m not cleaning this up,” Jason said.

The last thing we did as a group that night was lift that table up and put it outside. Nobody wanted to clean anything up. Post-nut clarity setting in.

We confirmed that this had been interesting, but that this would forever remain a secret. Nobody objected, nobody wanted to really talk about it. Tired, balls and dicks aching from the workout they had received. On the screen we saw how the bull filled up the girl with seed, but nobody was horny anymore, so it was wasted on us.

I bowed out, making my way to my room.

Again, I was asleep before my head hit the matrass.
 
Hey everybody, thank you for reading the story, and for the support. I really appreciate it. I hope you guys were entertained.

However, I'm going to take a short break from continuing the story. I need to fill up the creativity tank, I wrote the story without having a particular ending in mind, except for the end of the weekend, which means there's one more day and one more night left.
I kind of allowed the story to progress with what seemed logical for the setting and the characters: a bunch of relatively open-minded straight (?) guys who are on a weekend away from their old lives and responsibilities.

What was supposed to be a story about a bunch of dudes fucking the shit out of each other, turned into a weird exploration of a brotherhood between men, of guys leaning into those parts of themselves that they thought they had outgrown as they reached adulthood. I never expected it to be this lengthy, that it would take this route, but here we are.

I had a lot of fun writing this, I have to admit.

I do have some ideas on how to continue this... so in the future I will update this. It's just that I don't know when that might be exactly. I might even post it on some site that hosts erotica, I saw some people here referencing various sites, so I might check those out. Whatever happens with that, if I do post it somewhere else, I'll let you know here as well.

So again, thank you all for reading, thank you for the support and the feedback. I really hope you enjoyed following this story along, as it basically wrote itself.
 
Hey everybody, thank you for reading the story, and for the support. I really appreciate it. I hope you guys were entertained.

However, I'm going to take a short break from continuing the story. I need to fill up the creativity tank, I wrote the story without having a particular ending in mind, except for the end of the weekend, which means there's one more day and one more night left.
I kind of allowed the story to progress with what seemed logical for the setting and the characters: a bunch of relatively open-minded straight (?) guys who are on a weekend away from their old lives and responsibilities.

What was supposed to be a story about a bunch of dudes fucking the shit out of each other, turned into a weird exploration of a brotherhood between men, of guys leaning into those parts of themselves that they thought they had outgrown as they reached adulthood. I never expected it to be this lengthy, that it would take this route, but here we are.

I had a lot of fun writing this, I have to admit.

I do have some ideas on how to continue this... so in the future I will update this. It's just that I don't know when that might be exactly. I might even post it on some site that hosts erotica, I saw some people here referencing various sites, so I might check those out. Whatever happens with that, if I do post it somewhere else, I'll let you know here as well.

So again, thank you all for reading, thank you for the support and the feedback. I really hope you enjoyed following this story along, as it basically wrote itself.
You did a real, real nice job with the masculine interaction, the uncertainty coupled with the hidden desires found in many men, the breaking of barriers, the unusual but still sensual interaction between real blood brothers, and the commonality of desperately needed manly sexual release. I admit that you had this uncut dude leaking like the uncut men in the story (which is to say...a LOT), and so thank you!
 
Hey everybody, thank you for reading the story, and for the support. I really appreciate it. I hope you guys were entertained.

However, I'm going to take a short break from continuing the story. I need to fill up the creativity tank, I wrote the story without having a particular ending in mind, except for the end of the weekend, which means there's one more day and one more night left.
I kind of allowed the story to progress with what seemed logical for the setting and the characters: a bunch of relatively open-minded straight (?) guys who are on a weekend away from their old lives and responsibilities.

What was supposed to be a story about a bunch of dudes fucking the shit out of each other, turned into a weird exploration of a brotherhood between men, of guys leaning into those parts of themselves that they thought they had outgrown as they reached adulthood. I never expected it to be this lengthy, that it would take this route, but here we are.

I had a lot of fun writing this, I have to admit.

I do have some ideas on how to continue this... so in the future I will update this. It's just that I don't know when that might be exactly. I might even post it on some site that hosts erotica, I saw some people here referencing various sites, so I might check those out. Whatever happens with that, if I do post it somewhere else, I'll let you know here as well.

So again, thank you all for reading, thank you for the support and the feedback. I really hope you enjoyed following this story along, as it basically wrote itself.
I loved how the story progressed . Friendly to exploration and then total enjoyment of what all us guys treasure. The docking segment was my favorite as I have explored it with a uncut bud and it was amazing
Thanks and look forward to any more writing
 
Hey everybody, thank you for reading the story, and for the support. I really appreciate it. I hope you guys were entertained.

However, I'm going to take a short break from continuing the story. I need to fill up the creativity tank, I wrote the story without having a particular ending in mind, except for the end of the weekend, which means there's one more day and one more night left.
I kind of allowed the story to progress with what seemed logical for the setting and the characters: a bunch of relatively open-minded straight (?) guys who are on a weekend away from their old lives and responsibilities.

What was supposed to be a story about a bunch of dudes fucking the shit out of each other, turned into a weird exploration of a brotherhood between men, of guys leaning into those parts of themselves that they thought they had outgrown as they reached adulthood. I never expected it to be this lengthy, that it would take this route, but here we are.

I had a lot of fun writing this, I have to admit.

I do have some ideas on how to continue this... so in the future I will update this. It's just that I don't know when that might be exactly. I might even post it on some site that hosts erotica, I saw some people here referencing various sites, so I might check those out. Whatever happens with that, if I do post it somewhere else, I'll let you know here as well.

So again, thank you all for reading, thank you for the support and the feedback. I really hope you enjoyed following this story along, as it basically wrote itself.
This story is fantastic! Take your time but I am excited to read a continuation if you make one. The dialogue, the characters, and the jerking off are perfect and realistic! If you ever need a proofreader, I'd be happy to help. This story is just so good! <3 <3 <3
 
Part 3: An interrupted supply trip.

Driving with a boner isn’t the most pleasant of driving experiences, and having Luke sit next to me, aware of my erection made it awkward, but not in an uncomfortable way. I couldn’t explain it, but there seemed to be some tension in the air. I felt a teenager again, something within me stirred up that teenaged curiosity, to see, to compare and to discover.

Knowing that Luke had a boner going for him, that just sealed the deal. I didn’t know what to say, though I had a million things that I wanted to say. Luke was pitching a tent, I was pitching a tent, we were both very aware of the situation.


“Shit, dude, pull over,” Luke said as we drove past nothing worth of note. It was just trees and a road that seemed to disappear somewhere beyond more trees. We left the town behind us quite some time ago. I reckon we had about thirty more minutes till we reached the lodge and the rest of the guys. I wondered what they had been doing these last couple of hours. “Just pull over.”

“Why?”

“I need…” Luke said pausing to search for words. “I need to take a piss.”

“Oh,” I noted dryly. “Yeah, sure. Good idea.”

Without saying anything else I parked the car on the side of the road. Luke opened the door and got out, stretching. I got out, stretched out just like Luke and adjusted my dick as it hadn’t quite settled down and was now positioned awkwardly. Just touching it through the fabric made the blood flow back.

I looked at Luke, who looked at my crotch: “Yeah, I doubt you can piss with a hard-on.”

“Fuck, yeah, you’re right I guess,” I took a quick peek at Luke’s crotch, he was still pitching a tent. I pointed and smirked: “And again, I’m not the only one sporting wood.”

“Yeah, well, I didn’t jack off yesterday, and obviously didn’t have the opportunity to do it today. So, you know, that thing’s got a will of its own,” he said with a cheeky grin.

“So now what,” I asked. “Do our math-homework?”

“Hey dude,” Luke said, ignoring my comment. “Mind if I ask you something?”

“Go ahead,” I said. My heart skipped a beat, this was dangerous territory. What the fuck was Luke going to ask me? All this talk about gangbangs, sex, all that shit, both of us sporting wood, what’s there to ask?

“You’re uncut, right?”

“What? Yeah, I am. Wait aren’t you uncut too, I mean the other day…”

“Yeah, no, I am that’s right. It’s just, so I was wondering, it’s stupid, but I was wondering do chicks like it?”

“Some do, I guess, I had plenty of girls who seemed fascinated by it. Kind of a unique selling point around here.”

“Cool,” Luke said sounding a bit distracted. “So, like, has a girl ever turned you down because of it?”

“Not that I’m aware of,” I answered truthfully.

“I had this one chick tell me that it looked weird. Totally left me with a case of the blue balls.”

I felt for the guy. The tent in his jeans had subsided, and this turn of events made him vulnerable. I kind of appreciated him showing me that vulnerable side. It made him more human, it made him someone I could trust as much as he could trust me. We shared something, something that set us apart from most of the guys in our town.

I saw him get a bit flushed, visibly uncomfortable. He wanted to say or ask more, but I figured he didn’t feel quite at ease yet to really let his guard down. I kind of wanted to help him, but again, my blood was rushing with hormones and I was kind of curious what he was really talking about, and what his dick looked like. I wanted to know how he measured up to mine. That strange mix between a genuine human connection and the curiosity that I thought I lost ages ago.

“Chicks are weird like that sometimes, don’t let it get to you.”

“Yeah I guess,” he replied sounding disappointed by my reply. I could still see him struggle to reach that part that he was afraid to reach.

“So, storm died down,” I said pointing at his jeans and mine. I smiled, trying to sound casual.

“Yeah, guess we’re good to go.”

I suspected something, so I walked to the nearest tree, unzipped my jeans and just waited for a bit. If my suspicions were correct, Luke would take the next step.

“So, you still got a semi, and you’re still too shy to piss in front of other dude?” I heard Luke say as he positioned himself next to me.

He was pretty damn forward all of a sudden, proving my suspicions right. He stood next to me, unzipped and instead of releasing a stream of piss, he just stood there with his cock out. Just like I was standing there with my cock out.

“Dude, you’re checking out my dick, aren’t you?”

“Yeah, sorry,” Luke said apologetically and rushed. I saw him turn and zip up in the corner of my eye.

“It’s okay, just bros here,” I quickly said, making it clear that he didn’t cross any lines with me. I turned my head to take a look at his dick. He held it in his left hand, clearly it was semi-erect like mine, but he wasn’t turning limp, in fact, he was slowly growing. I held my dick in my right hand, and felt it grow as well. We were quiet for a second or two. Luke wiggled his hips and his jeans and boxers dropped to the ground, giving me a very clear image of his dick and his sandy-blonde pubes. I obliged and allowed my jeans to fall to the ground as well. I squeezed my dick gently, staring at his, then staring at mine, but avoiding eye-contact at all cost.

“Jealous?” I said, but it came out like a rushed whisper.

“How big is it? Fully hard I mean?” Luke asked.

“Little over 7 inches I think. It’s been a while since I measured. Yours?”

“On a good day, I might reach 7 inches, but it looks like you’ve got me beat by more than a little. When did you last measure it?”

“Fuck if I know,” I said, milking my cock gently, studying it, comparing it to Luke’s. “Been a while I guess, I think I was, like, 14 or something.”

“It’s definitely bigger than mine is. I’m not the biggest, definitely not the smallest, but yours is a pretty good specimen. Fucking nice cock dude.”

“Thanks, I guess,” I said with a smile. Luke was milking his dick. Squeezing the base, pushing the blood to the tip to get it bigger. We were both pretending we were still just guys taking a piss, waiting to unleash, but by that moment we both knew we weren’t waiting for anything other than someone to move from just squeezing and shaking, to jacking it.

“So, when you get fully hard, does your foreskin cover your dickhead, or does it, I dunno, curl back by itself?” Luke asked earnestly.

“Take a look,” I said, letting my dick stand out without any support from my hand.

“Yeah, mine does the same thing, like, partially covered and stuff. I mean I never really saw another uncut dick. I always wondered if mine was, you know, normal.”

“Seems pretty damn normal to me.”

I couldn’t tell if look was smiling, but I could tell he was fully erect. He dropped his hand and let his dick bounce up and down. It looked like a good dick, his foreskin had retracted a little, but the glans was still covered, just like mine. He had a think vein running the length of it. It was shorter than mine was, maybe a little les thick than mine, but it was a good dick nonetheless.

It hit me that I was comparing dicks with Bobby’s younger brother. Sure, the guy was probably as tall as I was, and younger meant only two or three years in this case, but still. I was comparing dicks with Bobby’s younger brother, and I was clearly the winner of that contest.

“So?” Luke asked with a certain amount of expectation locked into that one single word.

“Yeah,” I said, not really waiting for any kind of sign. I just started slowly jacking my dick.

Luke didn’t join me, he just looked at my dick. Looked at how I was jacking off. I took my time to give him a little show. Pulled my foreskin back and forth. Slowly and methodically. I felt hot and ready to pop, but I didn’t want to yet. My balls ached for release, but I didn’t want to cum too soon. I wanted to impress Luke, and that thought struck me as remarkable. I wondered why I wanted to impress him.

Luke joined in, but his technique was different. He pulled his foreskin back, spat in his hand and used his spit to start work on his dickhead.

“Isn’t that way too sensitive?”

“What? This? Yeah, sometimes, drives me up the fucking wall,” he paused to spit again. “But in a good way. You never tried it?”

I didn’t answer, instead I repeated his technique, pulled my foreskin back, exposing my dickhead to the warm air. I spat in my hand, twice, and started to do what Luke was doing. I shuddered, this sharp unpleasantly pleasant sensation surging through my dick and my entire body.

“Keep going dude,” Luke said.

“I really gotta nut,” I said.

“Me too, wanna make it a contest?”

“What are we betting?”

“The guy who cums farthest wins, winner gets to decide what the loser has to do.”

“You’re on,” I said.

With our hard ons we walked back to the car, to the road. With my foot I drew a line. The starting line. And with that the contest had begun. I could have nutted right then and there, but I wanted to win, so I postponed that moment of no return as best I could. Building up tension, building up pressure.

Luke was jacking it hard, and he seemed to switch techniques midway. I could see him work that dick like a goddamn pro. He too was postponing, and I figured for the exact same reason.

I couldn’t hold it much longer and I figured to just let it fly. I jerked it good, jacked it hard, stimulated and squeezed everything I could stimulate and squeeze, just to make sure that when I blasted, my foreskin was fully retracted, noting to stand in the way of my jet of cum.

“I’m going to come,” I whispered.

“Yeah bro, do it,” Luke said, not stopping, but watching me jack it.


It came hard and fast. It was one of the most intense orgasms I had ever had. I didn’t want to moan, but fucking hell, I moaned low and hard as I worked my dick up and down and the cum shot out. Holy shit, that release felt so fucking amazing, like I hadn’t orgasmed in over a week. Like I’ve been edging for five hours. Cum shot out, I buckled and fucked the air in front of me as I unloaded my balls.

I heard Luke say something, but I couldn’t tell what. When I looked in his direction I saw him furiously jacking his dick, slightly hunched over and growling. “Yea, here it cums!”

He let go, arching his back, head in the air, moaning loudly. I saw a spray of cum exit his dick. Spraying the ground before. I was impressed by the amount of cum the guy produced. I wasn’t sure where mine had landed, but I was pretty sure it wasn’t as much as Luke’s load. He dripped onto the ground in front of his feet. His dick going limp.

I noticed something unusual, while my dick had gone limp, there was no sense of shame or guilt washing over me. Post-nut clarity wasn’t really a thing at that moment. I kind of liked it. If I wanted, I could probably go again, I figured, just after a short break.


“Fucking hell Luke, part man, part fire-hydrant?”

“Fucking hell man, I swear to go, that was in my top three best orgasms. That shit was wild and weird.”

“Same here, that was… intense. Who’s the winner tho?” I asked.

We looked down, traced the cum on the ground. Luke’s canvas was a mess, drops of cum everywhere. Mine was a bit more subdued, three definite hits.

“Definitely you, you got me beat on distance.”

“Fuck yeah,” I said with some slight exhaustion noticeable in my voice, as if I had just run a marathon.

“Hey, uuuhm,” Luke said as I saw him pull up his jeans. “So, yeah, this was weird and all.”

“Yeah, but I don’t know, I’m not gonna lie. I kind of enjoyed this. Besides I won.”

“No I mean…”

“Yeah dude, don’t worry, this is between you, me, and those millions of potential babies on the ground there.”

“Yeah cool,” Luke said with a smile. “But you won… so I guess you’re going to collect one of these day.”

“I guess I will, but best to let you enjoy the anticipation a while longer,” I laughed as I made my way to step back behind the wheel.

“Deal’s a deal,” Luke said with a slight grin on his lips. Nervous, obviously, but there was something else there. Something I was now pretty sure about. Bobby’s little brother… was kind of a freak, but in a good way. I figured this was going to be a very interesting weekend.

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Fuckinh hot bro, wish I was hanging with those guys, I would be sucking and eating their asses like no tomorrow
 
Very good story… it has stayed with me for a few days now. Like a distant memory. Had to come back and leave a comment. Very visceral, very realistic. The guys feel very grounded, very relatable. The world is very contained and the story is intimate. Really great job here, looking forward to reading more.
 
Wow! Read this over the last three days and that's an experience to be dreamt about. My cocknsize has increased due to the pulling of my shaft on a daily basis. I've not tried docking before and I have a good size foreskin. So it gave me an insight to explore that action. God, I'm wet again thinking about the possibility
 
It’s an amazing story. Yes it’s hot as hell, but holy fuck does it cover emotional and deep subjects. It’s a beautiful piece of work. In terms of sites; nifty.com would be my personal recommendation. Perfectly fits in the ‘adult friends’ and ‘rural’ categories. Thank you for giving me another story to read over and over. Take your time on the end!
 
It’s an amazing story. Yes it’s hot as hell, but holy fuck does it cover emotional and deep subjects. It’s a beautiful piece of work. In terms of sites; nifty.com would be my personal recommendation. Perfectly fits in the ‘adult friends’ and ‘rural’ categories. Thank you for giving me another story to read over and over. Take your time on the end!
Do you have any recommendations of similarly well written stories on Nifty?