This is my first go at writing a story so be kind haha
THE DEAL: PART 1
“I know you’re staring at me, Jess...!” There was an embarrassed laugh from the sun lounger next to his:
“Busted” she said flirtatiously “I’m sorry but I can’t help it if I’ve got the best looking boyfriend in the whole hotel, can I?”
Liam turned on his side to look at her:
“Yeah, whatever...You’re so full of shit sometimes, Jess”.
“It’s true! You’re by far the hottest guy here...We’ve been here three days now and I’ve not clocked anyone who’s in your league, and I was just sat here thinking to myself how lucky I am, that’s all.”
Jess looked at Liam with such a look of hurt devotion he couldn’t help but lean over and kiss her. They’d been together about nine months now and this week in Tenerife was their first proper holiday. It might have been a bit premature but Jess had insisted they get the best hotel they could afford, and Liam had reluctantly payed his share. He had wondered to himself why he was hesitant about the holiday and concluded that, truth be told, he still wasn’t 100% convinced he and Jess were the perfect match. Yes, the sex was amazing...they’d barely stopped in the three days since they’d arrived...but at 26, it seemed just a few years too early to be getting in this deep to a relationship...and spending a grand on a holiday together did little to assuage these concerns. Still, lying on the pool deck, the sun blazing down between the leaves of a palm above his head, and the stunning body of Jess, glistening with sun lotion next to him, Liam concluded that life could be worse.
“Well, thanks haha”
He thought about their last fuck, barely an hour before in the shower of their room. Jess was totally insatiable when it came to sex and couldn’t get enough, which suited Liam down to the ground. She was a tall brunette with a stunning figure and totally incredible tits. He’d fucked her against the glass of the shower cubicle and had shot his load over those tits for what must’ve been the 100th time since they started dating. He’d found out early in their relationship that Jess loved to be dominated, and since Liam had an arrogant streak a mile wide he was happy to oblige.
Laying on the lounger he felt his dick start to bone up at the memory...”what was it about holidays that just made you horny 24/7” he thought as he adjusted his shorts.
There was a splash from the pool and Liam glanced up to see the water foaming from where someone had just dived in. He followed the shadow of a man (from the showy, ostentatious splash it could only have been a man) as he swam underwater and broke the surface just next to the half-submerged stools alongside the pool bar. Liam saw long, dark-blond hair which fell to muscular shoulders emerge from the water as the man athletically hoisted himself onto one of the stools.
“What about that dude?”
But he needn’t have said anything to Jess as she had clearly already spotted the guy. She continued to stare as she spoke:
“Hmmm, I mean, he’s good looking, but he’s really not my type. The hair is way too girly. You’re much more masculine.”
Liam was 6’1, had short blond hair and, as Jess insisted on reminding him, a hipster beard. He was a rugby player but wasn’t really big enough to play seriously. Still, he was pretty ripped...he considered his hairy chest and tattooed arms and thought maybe Jess was right...he probably was more of a “man” than the pool guy.
“Jesus it’s hot! I’ll grab some drinks at the bar...I need to jump in the pool anyway”
“Yea sure” said Jess “get me a coke. Oh and while you’re there, say hi to that guy from me” she added with a wink.
“Ha yea, whatever.”
As he spoke, the man in the pool turned and looked directly at them. Both Jess and Liam were caught, unable to turn away.
“Shit, he knows we were talking about him!” Said Jess in a whisper. The man was Scandinavian looking, possibly Dutch, and had a very very handsome face. Liam obtusely returned the stare and eventually the man turned back to his drink.
Feeling as if he’d “won” the stand-off, Liam got up and, with the confidence of a guy who has nothing to prove, dived in to the pool. The water felt incredible after an hour in the sun. He swam energetically and emerged on to a bar stool two seats away from the man.
The barman, a muscular Spanish man of thirty in a vest top, came over and took Liam’s order and, dripping, Liam sat in the sun and waved back at Jess.
“Hot isn’t it!”
The man spoke with a slight accent.
“Yea mate, it’s a scorcher!”
“Nice tatts!” The man gestured towards Liam’s muscular arms. “I had this one done myself back home in Stockholm last year.”
The man turned his leg out towards Liam and indicated a bird just about his ankle.
“Oh, nice...bet that hurt?”
“Well there’s no pleasure without some pain, right?”
“Ha, I guess...”
“I’m Erik”
“Liam”
Erik reaches over and Liam made to share hands. As he did so Erik once again gave him a hard stare which Liam found hard to interpret. It felt like the man was challenging him, but for no reason...
“Is that your girlfriend?”
Erik glanced at Jess who, Liam noticed to his irritation, was busy sorting through the contents of her bag in a desperate effort to avoid making eye contact with either of the men...acutely aware that that she was the one who had started this whole thing.
“Er, yes mate”
“Shame”
“Haha, yea sorry mate, she’s already spoken for!”
“I meant it’s a shame for you.”
“For me? What do you mean?” Liam retorted.
“Well my friend, let’s just say that when it comes to men your beautiful girl is keeping her options open...!”
“Now what would you mean by that pal?” Liam was starting to get irritated by this cocky Swedish guy.
“Oh I simply mean that she has already decided that she wants my dick inside her...”
Liam was momentarily stunned and with sudden flash of anger he turned to face Erik: “Ok pal, who the fuck do you think you are? And what have you been saying to my girlfriend?”
“Liam, my friend relax...I’ve never spoken with her and we’ve never met. I just know that look in a girls eyes.”
“You’re wrong mate." Liam's voice was threatening "She’s besotted with me and I can tell you categorically that she doesn’t find you attractive...she told me so just now.”
Even as he said the words Liam realised he’d said too much to Erik.
“So she was talking about me?” Erik replied with a smile.
“Er, no...she was saying how she thought I was the hottest guy here....and she used you to prove her point”
The Barman returned with two cokes and Liam made to leave. “Well nice chatting mate” Liam didn’t even try to sound friendly anymore.
“Wait. I want to make you an offer”
“An offer?”
“Yes. It happens that I am quite a wealthy man and I think I may be able to help you. I am willing to pay for your entire holiday and give you €10,000 in cash if you let me try to seduce your girlfriend.”
There was a long pause. “You are totally insane...what the fuck are you talking about?”
“If she turns me down, you still get the money. But if she doesn’t, I get to spend the night with her.”
“Fuck off. Under no circumstances are you going anywhere near her-and I don’t believe for a minute that you would pay for our holiday and give me €10,000.”
Without warning Erik summoned the barman:” Luiz...can you come here for a moment?”
The muscular barman approached the two men. “Mr Fennson what can I do for you?”
“Could you explain to my friend Liam who I am?”
“Certainly sir. Mr Fennson is the largest shareholder in a software company. He has his own penthouse on the top floor.”
“You see?”
Liam felt light headed....he rubbed his forehead to wipe away the water and tried to think. This man had just offered to pay for the entire holiday and give him 10,000...that kind of money would sort him out for the rest of the year! But, was it really worth letting him try to seduce Jess? What if she said yes?
“I don’t want anything else from you…I only want the chance to seduce Jess.”
Liam didn’t like Erik using Jess’s name. “You are so close to getting punched right now mate…I don’t care who you are…”
“Liam, please. She will never know about this money…and I promise, if I succeed you can even come and be in the room with her while we meet…of course if that is too awkward for you I would understand.”
“Mate, she won’t go anywhere near you so I’m not worried where I’ll be…if you want to throw away over ten grand then thats up to you.”
“So it’s a deal?”
“Wait a moment, how would this even work?”
“You will stay here and I will go speak with her right now. If she turns me down, you will see from here…if not, I will take her to my penthouse on the 27th floor where you can come join us if you like.”
“And the money?”
“Luiz, please let reception know to put €1,000 on Liam’s credit card immediately” Erik turned to Liam “A small deposit shall we say. Now you can see I’m a man of my word.”
“I can’t believe this is happening…but, ok, go chat with her. But in 10 minutes I’m coming and taking her away.”
“Deal!”
The two men shook hands and before Liam could say anything else, Erik had jumped off his stool and begun swimming towards Jess who had been watching them both with increasing curiosity…
END OF PART 1
THE DEAL: PART 1
“I know you’re staring at me, Jess...!” There was an embarrassed laugh from the sun lounger next to his:
“Busted” she said flirtatiously “I’m sorry but I can’t help it if I’ve got the best looking boyfriend in the whole hotel, can I?”
Liam turned on his side to look at her:
“Yeah, whatever...You’re so full of shit sometimes, Jess”.
“It’s true! You’re by far the hottest guy here...We’ve been here three days now and I’ve not clocked anyone who’s in your league, and I was just sat here thinking to myself how lucky I am, that’s all.”
Jess looked at Liam with such a look of hurt devotion he couldn’t help but lean over and kiss her. They’d been together about nine months now and this week in Tenerife was their first proper holiday. It might have been a bit premature but Jess had insisted they get the best hotel they could afford, and Liam had reluctantly payed his share. He had wondered to himself why he was hesitant about the holiday and concluded that, truth be told, he still wasn’t 100% convinced he and Jess were the perfect match. Yes, the sex was amazing...they’d barely stopped in the three days since they’d arrived...but at 26, it seemed just a few years too early to be getting in this deep to a relationship...and spending a grand on a holiday together did little to assuage these concerns. Still, lying on the pool deck, the sun blazing down between the leaves of a palm above his head, and the stunning body of Jess, glistening with sun lotion next to him, Liam concluded that life could be worse.
“Well, thanks haha”
He thought about their last fuck, barely an hour before in the shower of their room. Jess was totally insatiable when it came to sex and couldn’t get enough, which suited Liam down to the ground. She was a tall brunette with a stunning figure and totally incredible tits. He’d fucked her against the glass of the shower cubicle and had shot his load over those tits for what must’ve been the 100th time since they started dating. He’d found out early in their relationship that Jess loved to be dominated, and since Liam had an arrogant streak a mile wide he was happy to oblige.
Laying on the lounger he felt his dick start to bone up at the memory...”what was it about holidays that just made you horny 24/7” he thought as he adjusted his shorts.
There was a splash from the pool and Liam glanced up to see the water foaming from where someone had just dived in. He followed the shadow of a man (from the showy, ostentatious splash it could only have been a man) as he swam underwater and broke the surface just next to the half-submerged stools alongside the pool bar. Liam saw long, dark-blond hair which fell to muscular shoulders emerge from the water as the man athletically hoisted himself onto one of the stools.
“What about that dude?”
But he needn’t have said anything to Jess as she had clearly already spotted the guy. She continued to stare as she spoke:
“Hmmm, I mean, he’s good looking, but he’s really not my type. The hair is way too girly. You’re much more masculine.”
Liam was 6’1, had short blond hair and, as Jess insisted on reminding him, a hipster beard. He was a rugby player but wasn’t really big enough to play seriously. Still, he was pretty ripped...he considered his hairy chest and tattooed arms and thought maybe Jess was right...he probably was more of a “man” than the pool guy.
“Jesus it’s hot! I’ll grab some drinks at the bar...I need to jump in the pool anyway”
“Yea sure” said Jess “get me a coke. Oh and while you’re there, say hi to that guy from me” she added with a wink.
“Ha yea, whatever.”
As he spoke, the man in the pool turned and looked directly at them. Both Jess and Liam were caught, unable to turn away.
“Shit, he knows we were talking about him!” Said Jess in a whisper. The man was Scandinavian looking, possibly Dutch, and had a very very handsome face. Liam obtusely returned the stare and eventually the man turned back to his drink.
Feeling as if he’d “won” the stand-off, Liam got up and, with the confidence of a guy who has nothing to prove, dived in to the pool. The water felt incredible after an hour in the sun. He swam energetically and emerged on to a bar stool two seats away from the man.
The barman, a muscular Spanish man of thirty in a vest top, came over and took Liam’s order and, dripping, Liam sat in the sun and waved back at Jess.
“Hot isn’t it!”
The man spoke with a slight accent.
“Yea mate, it’s a scorcher!”
“Nice tatts!” The man gestured towards Liam’s muscular arms. “I had this one done myself back home in Stockholm last year.”
The man turned his leg out towards Liam and indicated a bird just about his ankle.
“Oh, nice...bet that hurt?”
“Well there’s no pleasure without some pain, right?”
“Ha, I guess...”
“I’m Erik”
“Liam”
Erik reaches over and Liam made to share hands. As he did so Erik once again gave him a hard stare which Liam found hard to interpret. It felt like the man was challenging him, but for no reason...
“Is that your girlfriend?”
Erik glanced at Jess who, Liam noticed to his irritation, was busy sorting through the contents of her bag in a desperate effort to avoid making eye contact with either of the men...acutely aware that that she was the one who had started this whole thing.
“Er, yes mate”
“Shame”
“Haha, yea sorry mate, she’s already spoken for!”
“I meant it’s a shame for you.”
“For me? What do you mean?” Liam retorted.
“Well my friend, let’s just say that when it comes to men your beautiful girl is keeping her options open...!”
“Now what would you mean by that pal?” Liam was starting to get irritated by this cocky Swedish guy.
“Oh I simply mean that she has already decided that she wants my dick inside her...”
Liam was momentarily stunned and with sudden flash of anger he turned to face Erik: “Ok pal, who the fuck do you think you are? And what have you been saying to my girlfriend?”
“Liam, my friend relax...I’ve never spoken with her and we’ve never met. I just know that look in a girls eyes.”
“You’re wrong mate." Liam's voice was threatening "She’s besotted with me and I can tell you categorically that she doesn’t find you attractive...she told me so just now.”
Even as he said the words Liam realised he’d said too much to Erik.
“So she was talking about me?” Erik replied with a smile.
“Er, no...she was saying how she thought I was the hottest guy here....and she used you to prove her point”
The Barman returned with two cokes and Liam made to leave. “Well nice chatting mate” Liam didn’t even try to sound friendly anymore.
“Wait. I want to make you an offer”
“An offer?”
“Yes. It happens that I am quite a wealthy man and I think I may be able to help you. I am willing to pay for your entire holiday and give you €10,000 in cash if you let me try to seduce your girlfriend.”
There was a long pause. “You are totally insane...what the fuck are you talking about?”
“If she turns me down, you still get the money. But if she doesn’t, I get to spend the night with her.”
“Fuck off. Under no circumstances are you going anywhere near her-and I don’t believe for a minute that you would pay for our holiday and give me €10,000.”
Without warning Erik summoned the barman:” Luiz...can you come here for a moment?”
The muscular barman approached the two men. “Mr Fennson what can I do for you?”
“Could you explain to my friend Liam who I am?”
“Certainly sir. Mr Fennson is the largest shareholder in a software company. He has his own penthouse on the top floor.”
“You see?”
Liam felt light headed....he rubbed his forehead to wipe away the water and tried to think. This man had just offered to pay for the entire holiday and give him 10,000...that kind of money would sort him out for the rest of the year! But, was it really worth letting him try to seduce Jess? What if she said yes?
“I don’t want anything else from you…I only want the chance to seduce Jess.”
Liam didn’t like Erik using Jess’s name. “You are so close to getting punched right now mate…I don’t care who you are…”
“Liam, please. She will never know about this money…and I promise, if I succeed you can even come and be in the room with her while we meet…of course if that is too awkward for you I would understand.”
“Mate, she won’t go anywhere near you so I’m not worried where I’ll be…if you want to throw away over ten grand then thats up to you.”
“So it’s a deal?”
“Wait a moment, how would this even work?”
“You will stay here and I will go speak with her right now. If she turns me down, you will see from here…if not, I will take her to my penthouse on the 27th floor where you can come join us if you like.”
“And the money?”
“Luiz, please let reception know to put €1,000 on Liam’s credit card immediately” Erik turned to Liam “A small deposit shall we say. Now you can see I’m a man of my word.”
“I can’t believe this is happening…but, ok, go chat with her. But in 10 minutes I’m coming and taking her away.”
“Deal!”
The two men shook hands and before Liam could say anything else, Erik had jumped off his stool and begun swimming towards Jess who had been watching them both with increasing curiosity…
END OF PART 1
