Best friends go to university

Just a little heads up to anyone waiting for the next instalment. I have no idea what I was thinking when I wrote it but its all over the place, the story is solid and a lot of necessary details but I'm going to have to completely re-write it or it wont be an enjoyable read. It's going to take some time anyway, hopefully no more than a few days.
Thanks for all the love and comments, sending all that love right back at you all.
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Fck. You are an amazing writer. One of the best erotic stories I have read. It’s like I could picture them while I was reading it. Thank you man. ;)
 
i am a bit conflicted with Jon sleeping with Derrick without Blake.

I still love the story and I think that it's hot but I kind of feel that sleeping with Derrick is a slippery slope. But what do i know?! Haha.

I'm just one of those who wish that there is an OF of blake and jon somewhere :)
Same here. A little disappointed in Jon, but I’m disappointed with both Jon and Blake. Most of all I’m not pleased with Derrick. As a manager he should better than start this. It can backfire so quickly.
 
This is really a good piece of writing. You have deftly intertwined several elements constituting themes. It’s just like real life where you must contend with multiple demands on you concurrently. I’ve been wondering how you will bring all these items to a close, and maybe you won’t but rather leave some clues along the way and let each reader formulate their own conclusion. Anyway, I’m looking forward to any further episodes.
 
Started reading this back in May and both of the books has been an absolute blast to read. No matter how unrealistic it was that everything worked out for them perfectly I genuinely loved it.

The first book was so fun to read and I hope this second book gets a closure. It was so hot seeing Jon and Blake mess around with Angelo and Steven. Crazy how all of the events in both books only happened within 2 months. It was EVENTFUL AS FUCK compared to my fuck ass vacation LOL.

This takes the cake for being the best story I have read on this website. Very well written personally

PRAYING FOR THE AUTHOR to return and end this book if they're not going to make more after this. Props to them for making it so detailed with the coffee, food, and bar shit.. its like they knew what they were talking about like WOW.
 
Started reading this back in May and both of the books has been an absolute blast to read. No matter how unrealistic it was that everything worked out for them perfectly I genuinely loved it.

The first book was so fun to read and I hope this second book gets a closure. It was so hot seeing Jon and Blake mess around with Angelo and Steven. Crazy how all of the events in both books only happened within 2 months. It was EVENTFUL AS FUCK compared to my fuck ass vacation LOL.

This takes the cake for being the best story I have read on this website. Very well written personally

PRAYING FOR THE AUTHOR to return and end this book if they're not going to make more after this. Props to them for making it so detailed with the coffee, food, and bar shit.. its like they knew what they were talking about like WOW.
so i am glad you said all this. i too was missing the story the other day and noticed the author has not logged on in a while. hope all is ok.
 
I can pick from where the original author has left and take it forward. May not be as good as him but might be decent enough provided some of you folks on the forum really want me to resurrect this. Let me know
 
Although I haven't received too many requests to bring this back, I decided to contribute. Here it is, feedback much appreciated.

Day 20 (Thursday)

Blake woke up early and noticed their positions were reversed. Now, he is in John’s arms with his dick pressing against Blake’s ass bringing on a genuine smile on his face. He got up to pee, and when he was back, sat in a chair and started looking at John’s happy face while he was still asleep.

Blake wondered how close they became for the last few weeks since their vacation. He can’t deny the fact that how difficult it was for John, who has always worried about their friendship. How hesitant was he to make any move?

It occurred to him that John is still hesitant and careful sometimes about how he treats Blake, who actually always likes the attention and the teasing. But what John doesn’t know is how much this meant to Blake.

John woke up and seeing Blake in front of him, just staring at him, asked dude, what the hell are you watching me while I sleep? Blake responded in your dreams bro, got up from his chair and kissed with a smirk on his face. After a while, they got on with their usual daily routine.

The bar was more crowded than usual for a Thursday, and also something strange happened. John was getting a lot more attention from the folks in the bar than Blake. At first this made him jealous which eventually turned him on.

He was puzzled as to why John was getting so much attention. He tried to get in between John’s customers and to steal the spotlight, but somehow all of them were more interested in John.Blake became more and more jealous and started to watch John closely.

For the first time, he realised how sexy John looked with his innocent face and his pleasing attitude making people around him comfortable. His lean body and the tight shorts he is wearing today are really making him an eye candy.

The more Blake tried to ignore all this and continue to work, he couldn’t focus. He spilled some drinks, dropped some glasses and served the wrong items. He became so jealous and turned on minute by minute that he went to John and told him we need to take a break. John was surprised that Blake wanted to take a break in such a crazy night with all the chaos around.

John: Can we do it later?

Blake: No, I want it now. Will you or not?

John was not sure what’s wrong with Blake but couldn’t say No.

Blake: What's taking you so long to decide?

John gave up and said OK.

Blake informed Steven that they wanted a short break, and if he could watch over their customers to which he happily agreed .

Blake took John‘s hand and dragged him along to Derrick’s room which was empty. As soon as they entered, he held John on the door, looking into his eyes and he started kissing passionately. John was incomplete shock. Blake never behaved like this when they were at work. He was kissing so much and moving his tongue inside his mouth that he was moaning with pleasure. He couldn’t hold it anymore and pushed Blake away from him.

John: Dude, what the fuck?

Blake: Yes, I’m very horny. I need your dick. Fuck me now.

He bent over in front of him, dropped his shorts, teasing his pink tight asshole to John.

Blake: Come on. Don’t make me ask you again.

John couldn’t hold any longer. He spit on his dick and on Blake’s ass and went all in with a big trust. Blake moaned with the sudden shot of pleasure

Blake: Yes. Fuck me. Fuck me hard. Make me your bitch.

John couldn’t believe what he is hearing, but he is enjoying all this. He started pounding, hard and hard, thrusting deep into Blake’s ass all the way in. He pulled it out completely and then rammed again deep inside, repeating this multiple times. He started to fuck Blake so hard that he could see streams of pre-cum splashing from Blake’s dick all over the table.

He tried to take a breather but Blake pushed him on the table and pounced over him, with John’s dick deep inside his ass. He started moving up and on relentlessly, fucking himself while maintaining eye contact with John. He rode John for 10 minutes intensely, and then he got up and moved towards the wall, spread his ass checks violently and gestured to John.

John started fucking him pulling Blake’s hair from behind and kissing him deeply moving his tongue inside his mouth. He was fucking so hard and with such intensity that Blake was hitting the wall and making loud noises and kept saying, fuck me, fuck me hard, I need it badly. Blake was over the moon with so much pleasure that he came so hard without even stroking his dick. But John didn’t stop fucking him for another 15 minutes, and as he couldn’t hold it any further asked Blake to turn around and came in his mouth. Blake swallowed all the cum and looked very happy. John collapsed on Blake, kissing him and just lying on him for forever.

They remained silent as both of them didn’t know what to say. John got up and to not make Blake uncomfortable he just said let’s get back to work.

While they were moving out of Derrick’s room they didn’t realise the cameras which were recording their cute fuck.

Little did they know how this momentary lapse judgement was going to change their life forever.
 
hey, thanks for this, still hot to hear the boys , continue at your on pace :)
Thanks for the encouragement. I must say although I was skeptical at first about this, I'm thoroughly enjoying writing this. Kudos to the original author for starting this.

Don't wanna be a tease, but you can expect an update tomorrow ;)
 
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with much respect for the autor

n781781. that let us read his story, but i always wanted to know what was going to happen to the boys, and now we can read all about :)